https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0 INSTRUCTIONS: Add a post to each column. Celebrate your victories and celebrate your classmates!! en-us 2021-09-08 11:54:43 UTC 2026-03-07 20:19:44 UTC hello@padlet.com jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611056 2021-09-08 11:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611056 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611058 Adding small detail and small actions to my writing are some ways that I grew in my craft. By zooming in one the small details and movements, I'm able to help the reader picture the scene more.]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611058 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611059 "The bus crawls to a stop, the worn down brakes screeching as the momentum slows. Grabbing my large backpack - the one that I’ll be living out of for the next month, filled to the brim with layers of clothes to protect my warm Texas skin from the harsh Scottish winter - I lumber down the aisle and step off the dusty steps of the airport transit bus."]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611059 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611061 The activity that was most helpful for me was the "first, last, and times I realized something" activity. It helped me remember small meaningful moments I had forgotten!]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611061 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611064 I need to keep working on adding dialogue, specifically dialogue that reveals information about the speaker and the meaning in the moment.]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1724611064 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725557661 One way I grew as a writer was using correct punctuation.]]> 2021-09-08 17:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725557661 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725562306 I want to work on making sentence that you can picture in your mind.]]> 2021-09-08 17:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725562306 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725579780 My favorite page is the last part of the story.]]> 2021-09-08 17:19:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725579780 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725583824 I grew as a writer because I learned how to use better discribing words.]]> 2021-09-08 17:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725583824 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725584624 The PN Story Arc helped me out, so I could
focus more on my inner thoughts instead of what what happening around me in my writing.]]> 2021-09-08 17:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725584624 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725585427 I wanna keep working on using puncuation.]]> 2021-09-08 17:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725585427 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725586385 My siblings were sleeping like angle, but not me at least tonight, i dont plan on sleeping i was still in shock of what just happend.]]> 2021-09-08 17:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725586385 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725588686 2021-09-08 17:22:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725588686 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725589380 The PN story arc because it helped me plan out what to do and what was going to happen in my story.]]> 2021-09-08 17:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725589380 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725589869 I   didn't  even  realize  for  a  few  seconds  that  I  slammed  my  left  ring  finger  in  the  car  door.]]> 2021-09-08 17:22:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725589869 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725592543 To be honest i have all ways loved writing! Especially made up stories straight out of my mind! ]]> 2021-09-08 17:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725592543 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725593371 The I saw a small brown kitten. Its hazel colored eyes sparkled in the light. Then I felt this sudden feeling. It was asif our heart where connected. Then I new this was the one]]> 2021-09-08 17:24:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725593371 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725600494 I think I grew as a writer by using discribing word.  ]]> 2021-09-08 17:27:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725600494 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725600714 2021-09-08 17:27:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725600714 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725601144 2021-09-08 17:27:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725601144 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725601199 To remember to keep putting Capitalized letters in my sentences.]]> 2021-09-08 17:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725601199 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725604097 2021-09-08 17:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725604097 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725604915 -Kelci]]> 2021-09-08 17:28:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725604915 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725607246 My cousin hates being woken up so I was super scared to get yelled at by him for waking him up.]]> 2021-09-08 17:29:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725607246 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725609116 mine is last Christmas i got to spend it with my grandma and dad and to little brothers. chloe webb]]> 2021-09-08 17:30:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725609116 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725610049 The story arc because it helped me plan my story better.]]> 2021-09-08 17:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725610049 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725612867 I am able to write a deeper meaning in my story now and have better grammar in it to.]]> 2021-09-08 17:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725612867 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725617230 I need to work on adding more dialogue in my story's to make them more exciting or more spooky or sad etc.]]> 2021-09-08 17:33:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725617230 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725618489 When I was walking home, I couldn't stop smiling to myself. Lanaya seemed liked a cool person to hang out with.  - Kelci]]> 2021-09-08 17:34:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725618489 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725619180 my reading teacher helps me improve my reading. chloe webb]]> 2021-09-08 17:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725619180 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725623239 reading other peoples story's helped me find what i need to do more. chloe webb]]> 2021-09-08 17:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725623239 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725624343 The personal story arc really helped me. I actually had to think about what emotions I was feeling, what was going on in my head at that very moment. -Kelci]]> 2021-09-08 17:36:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725624343 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725625371 my whiting and reading more books. chloe webb]]> 2021-09-08 17:36:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725625371 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725627327 I think I grew as writer by adding more important things and more detail.- Kelci]]> 2021-09-08 17:37:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725627327 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725630105 I wanna keep working on conclusions. I can tell that I struggle trying to come up with one. -Kelci]]> 2021-09-08 17:38:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725630105 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725664371 2021-09-08 17:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725664371 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725666250 2021-09-08 17:52:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725666250 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725674947 2021-09-08 17:55:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725674947 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725676031 2021-09-08 17:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725676031 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725676410 2021-09-08 17:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1725676410 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728275912 2021-09-09 14:38:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728275912 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728278660 2021-09-09 14:39:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728278660 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728280002 2021-09-09 14:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728280002 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728282778 2021-09-09 14:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728282778 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728289641 2021-09-09 14:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1728289641 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1731567841 2021-09-10 17:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1731567841 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734013572 The story arc is my favorite and the reason i didnt take a picture is because Im at home and my journal is in class.]]> 2021-09-12 17:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734013572 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734017878 2021-09-12 17:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734017878 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734018919 story arc writing and highlighting .]]> 2021-09-12 17:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734018919 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734020737 I grow by putting " ' " and "," after sentences where it goes]]> 2021-09-12 17:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734020737 https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734023099 Writing and remembering to put capital letters in the first letter of someones name, or at the beginning of a sentence.]]> 2021-09-12 17:57:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/zzz32zxeqwg7tbb0/wish/1734023099