https://padlet.com/23elin/zzurpqb9jmut Hewwo and having a nice day? Well thanks for looking, but something to remind some viewers is to keep heartbreaking messages away from this padlet. Please keep your comments appropriate, and positive. en-us 2018-02-01 17:40:34 UTC 2025-11-12 04:44:39 UTC hello@padlet.com 23zchung https://padlet.com/23elin/zzurpqb9jmut/wish/237407764 Star: I really liked how you built up suspense when Merry and Jessica lost themselves inside the haunted house and made me want to read until I had finished the story.
Star: I also really liked how you incorporated dialogue into the scene and how at sometimes it was really funny and at others it was really serious.
Wish: In the future, I suggest making you characters have a little more voice even though the dialogue was really good, I felt you could of made a scary scene inside the haunted house and not just the piano playing. This would of caused a lot of screaming (depending) and I felt that would make the characters more realistic since I felt like sometimes they weren't very scared. 
-Zach C]]> 2018-03-02 14:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/23elin/zzurpqb9jmut/wish/237407764 23vlegerme https://padlet.com/23elin/zzurpqb9jmut/wish/246992131 Hey Elva! Great job, I loved reading your article, it was so funny! I love how your idea is unique and very original. Also, I like how you said what the potato said, very creative. In the future, add more detail like background information. All in all, good job!

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