Comment: Neat idea, great way to create awareness of planting and going green as player see their plant grew larger and larger! Look like it's a great time waster too!(in a good way)

Critics: The 3 health only seem a bit unforgiving, maybe make it 5? Or make a time attack mode so player only need to worry about time.

The barrel seem too big, maybe use a plant pot instead?

Suggestion: Make it tilt control (or add option to play with tilt control) so it's more immersive and fun.

Out of 10%, I will give 7% because this game want you to go green....and I probably end up having dead battery just playing this game for hours.

Review 2: Number 73

Comment: OMG It's Jump-and-shoot-Man! Does he have slide?....no? Still going to play it! Nice to play a game that teach about biology!

Critics: Unless the enemy shoot a lot of bullet or attack often, the block is kind of pointless..since player can just shoot from a far anyway.

Suggestion: Make a database or data collection, so player can learn more about the character and virus.

Out of 10%, I will give 9% because I'm a fan of 2D action-platform, and I'm bias...

Review 3: Mushmatics

Comment: Not a fan of math. But this game is great for teaching kids about mathematics and train their quick thinking skill without using calculator!

Critics: The background seem distracting as it's have too much colour and stuff, just tone down the detail.

Suggestion: add difficulty option, so other age (maybe primary school) can play as well..or just as a added challenge for pro math kids.

Out of 10%, I will give 7% because It's a great game and also a tool for teaching basic mathematics for kids! 

-          Pros : Nice. I can see a lot of effort in this game design.

-          Cons : Track mission  is not clear. I don’t know the meaning of the track mission design whether it is just a track or something else going on the track.

Schrodinger’s Revision

-          Pros : Good. I like the effect that shows in the image.

-          Cons : I didn’t clear about the instruction and what is the goal.

Cookie Mix

-          Pros : Good job. The drawings are simple and easy to understand.

-          Cons : The game image review is not clear. There are lacks of functional button that can lead the player to do something to play the game. 

 

improvement: Make the background look more in stomach but not to realistic, make the player feel like happen in stomach. The bacteria can improve little bit like can combined if they collide with other become mutant and have some special ability. To me better add some equipment that can upgrade the players ability it seem more interesting.
I give 7 out of 10

Review 2: Spell the word

This game is simple and good for kids. They can improve their knowledge about animal name. It seem the time given seem very long and is it the cactus can move?

improvement: Make the time less depend on the animal name. Put some hint like animal picture but it can seem just 2/3 second and disappear. You can put the hint at any default brick so it can make the game more challenge. The cactus I think it more interesting if there can move and players can kill them by jumping towards them like Mario game.
I give 6 out of 10


Review 3: S.O.S

It is a good game to tell people about global warming especially for children. To me this is a new way to tell people what cause and will happen if the global warming not controlled. Sometimes we as adult who know about this global warming still didn’t care. 

improvement: The game mechanic is interesting, just improve on visual look. To me its better start from small village/town and next is city. The bad guy could appear one/ two at first and then it getting more and fast when the time run outs.
I give 7 out of 10

1.       mushmatics

The game is interesting and can help kids improve their mathematics skills. I think this game can be improve in term of instruction if the player get the wrong answer. Out of 10%, I give 8% for the concept and effort. 

2. raining H2O     
  the game is easy to understand and play. The design is nice, but the water bucket too big, if that is the real size that the player will be playing, then they can catch all the water shape. Out of 10%, I give 7% for the simple instructions and storyline.

3.       Clash of castle

The game synopsis is interesting but it is quite hard to understand on how to play the game and can be improve by giving simpler instruction. Out of 10%, I give 6%.:) 

Comment: Looks like a very challenging idea, with so many places to design, will anticipate the design as a player.

Critics: Not clear about the value this game can teach about whether it is educational value or cultural value.

 

Suggestion: Be clear about the gameplay, show clear picture on how the player is going to make his way through the game, correct grammar error to really convey your message to audience, you can ask miss to check the grammar for you.

 Out of 10%, I will give 5% based on my impression towards what you have uploaded, not towards the idea of the game, because I can’t really understand how to play this game, on what platform and how it actually looks like.

 

Comment: A creative way of killing the bacteria, looks fun, loves the design of the bacteria.

Critics:  Cannot understand about the shooting part, what is going to come out from the player to shoot the bacteria???

Suggestion: Make something that can make the player gain chances such as good bacteria like enzyme or white blood cell, make the player cuter and more appealing to audience, for character like broccoli you can refer to design of vileplume in pokemon, and think about how to make your players realize that the character they are using is actually food that is good to them in real life.

                                     
 Out of 10%, I will give 6% because this game is easy to play and is thrilling as the bacteria is moving throughout the game.

 

Comment: A creative way to teach about saving water, looking forward to see the real game in the market.

Critics: Size of the barrel is too big and almost occupy the whole screen, make it almost impossible to miss any water droplets.

 

Suggestion: Change the design and size of the barrel as plant is not planted in the barrel, and maybe can increase the level of difficulty increased with the speed of water droplets falling.

 Out of 10%, I will give 7% because this game teaches about saving water in such a creative and easy way, is an attractive game on first impression.

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 I suggest that the objectives of the game should be clearer as to what is the specific items or goals that need to be achieved along the journey. Is it going to be in levels or collecting proof until the end of the discovery?
Rate: (7 / 10)

Mushmatics

The pros in this game is, it is very educational and needs the player to think while playing it. I like the background of the game as it has that forest  and calm feel. 

My suggestion is, if the target player of the game will be children, try to make the environment with much brighter color to attract them to play. Is it going to have like time limitation or increase in speed of the mushroom? Try to make a specific goal for the player to achieve either at the end of the game or in each level (if there are levels) to make the game much more interesting.
Rate: (6 / 10)

Science Journey

Same as Mushmatics, very educational and needs thinking. I like the idea of giving hints through pictures as they can help players to solve the word puzzle- in a much easier way. 

Based on the UI design uploaded, my suggestion would be in terms of the lettering. Try to make it much interesting instead of using simple fonts. The background of where hints and word puzzles are should be much brighter to make it more exciting. Since the game involve lettering, dull or dark color behind will make the player feels bored. Try using colors complement to the words.
Rate: (6 / 10)