https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520 Post some encouraging feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-27 12:51:47 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647277
Thank you for making eye contact with us

Don't look at the screen too much, your presenting to us, not the wall

Good job at not stopping

Give us more insight


]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647277 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647283 - really liked how you added the definition of transgender
- add more pictures of diamond so people can get an better idea of who she is
- elaborate more on what work you should think done to protect those prisoners]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647283 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647354 Good voice, very clear but not much eye contact. You usually look up towards the ceiling rather than towards the audience.

Do not rely on the PowerPoint for your information use it to supplement your presentation.




]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647354 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647376 - really explains her standpoint and explains it to where it can be generally understand
- I can tell you really care about the transgender situation that is happening
-  a little more confidence when you speaj]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647376 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647410 - Good eye contact. 
- Very fluid.
- Good effort in PowerPoint.
- Good confidence.]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647410 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647440 Do not grunt or show faces that you messed up. Just keep going. She was loud but kept looking up instead of making eye contact with the audience. ]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647440 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647445 - Very confident in your speaking. 
- Try speaking more in 3rd person instead about what you have learned from it.]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647445 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647454 - Good job with eye contact and speaking confidently 
- Try not to look at the  screen as much ]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647454 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647467 Too many I's but your opinion was vital to the presentation
Next time make more eye contact but I could tell you were trying to be confident.


]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647467 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647478 - Great speaking voice 
- Good eye contact, but could have used more
- More pictures would have helped engage the audience
- You were confident with your presentation and opinions you included in the slides]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647478 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647507 Nice answers to the beginning questions. You seemed rather confident.
Your voice carried well, and your speech was easily understood. 
Your visceral and specific examples and statistics really supported your main theme well.
Try not directly reading from the PowerPoint so much.
Try arguing against opposing points when you make specific arguments.
Nice use of media in your PowerPoint!]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647507 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647512 - I like that you put the definition 
- I like that you commented a lot on what you learned
- Love that you brought up what they referred to her as 
- Good pictures
-Nice clear voice 
-Love the notes you had
-Good eyecontact!
- Maybe more examples on what should be changed next time 


]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647512 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647534 Dominque has a strong voice and makes her points clear for us to hear. She provides good body language and decent eye contact. Her points are also very precise, yet, she reads from her script from her PowerPoint a little too much in the beginning. Nevertheless, besides reading from her PowerPoint, she brings great structure to her presentation, very well done.]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647534 bayonjoh001 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647535 Great clear voice
Good info
Just a bit monotone]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647535 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647647 Good job ! Loud and clear ]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647647 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647657 - you seem nervous, and you can sometimes hear it in your speaking, but other than that you straight

- I also did Ashley diamond so that's cool]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647657 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647751 -clear Loud that’s good 
-you knew what you were talking about and seemed passionate ]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647751 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647790 Strong voice
Needs pictures]]> 2017-09-27 13:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191647790 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191648293 Good background information on transgenders  and laws regarding them.]]> 2017-09-27 13:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191648293 shraitar000 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191648609 - Nice notes and very good facts
- enjoyed the presentation]]> 2017-09-27 13:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191648609 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191649197 You spoke clearly but I could kind of hear the shakiness of your voice. Your PowerPoint was a strong PowerPoint]]> 2017-09-27 13:23:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191649197 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191650047 -plenty of information 
-spoke well and made eye contact 
-include more pictures ]]> 2017-09-27 13:24:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191650047 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191650181 Good speaking.]]> 2017-09-27 13:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191650181 https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191651351 Good speaking ]]> 2017-09-27 13:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zz25py3hr520/wish/191651351