https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l Made with the best of intentions en-us 2021-04-14 09:56:32 UTC 2021-04-17 22:35:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1424661189 Some improvement points:
Need to practice using academic skills.
Need to use more example and explain it more clearly.
The discussion part needs to be more clear.
Read more articles to widen the different discussion and points. 


]]> 2021-04-16 09:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1424661189 https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1424691539 The specific discussion of examples needs to be improved, which requires reading more articles to expand the knowledge.]]> 2021-04-16 09:33:07 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1424691539 https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1424927050 need more writing in academic way, and do more reading or searching for different views , answer and explain the question deeper .]]> 2021-04-16 11:32:55 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1424927050 https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1425123460 1. need a clearer and more accurate statement
2. need to consult more relevant materials to understand different specific functions of different organizations
3. The argument needs further clarity]]> 2021-04-16 12:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1425123460 https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1425934308 1. The citation should be complete, I often neglect to omit the citation.
2. The article is not deep enough. I often only answer superficial questions without further discussing deep-seated questions.
3. The number of words is often not enough, and more resources need to be found.]]> 2021-04-16 15:34:49 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1425934308 https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1428332264 The format of reference I may use in a worry way, I should pay more attention in future. The literature review I need more details and specific examples, now I only have a few examples and views.]]> 2021-04-17 15:08:28 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1428332264 https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1428488281 In many subjects, the answers to the questions are not specific enough, and the language organization is relatively weak. It is necessary to strengthen academic skills and narrow the scope of answers to questions.]]> 2021-04-17 17:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1428488281 https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1428858168 According to the previous feedback, I need to improve the following points:
1. Academic skills need to be strengthened.
2. More training in paraphrasing is needed.
3. Strengthen the practice of PEE structure.

I will continue to practice in these areas.]]> 2021-04-17 22:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/zynm56j15vaxs89l/wish/1428858168