https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3 Use these picture prompt and the ideas we brainstormed as a class, to write a sizzling start. You will need to write at least 4 sentences (a paragraph) to hook the reader and create suspense... If you have time, you can choose to do more than one picture prompt. Don't forget to write your name at the end so we can see who wrote each amazing paragraph. Once we have all finished at least one paragraph, we will partner up and give each other two glows and a grow in the comment section. Please make sure the feedback you give your peers is constructive and appropriate. en-us 2022-08-21 06:12:22 UTC 2023-10-09 11:22:44 UTC hello@padlet.com georgiacureton1 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266401161 2022-08-21 06:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266401161 georgiacureton1 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266401378 2022-08-21 06:25:39 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266401378 georgiacureton1 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266402281 2022-08-21 06:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266402281 georgiacureton1 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266402630 2022-08-21 06:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266402630 georgiacureton1 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266403446 2022-08-21 06:35:48 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266403446 georgiacureton1 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266742787 2022-08-21 23:45:30 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266742787 georgiacureton1 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266743329 2022-08-21 23:46:39 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266743329 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266864566 Brainstorm ]]> 2022-08-22 02:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266864566 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266865671 2022-08-22 02:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266865671 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266865714 2022-08-22 02:10:23 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266865714 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266866028

]]> 2022-08-22 02:10:41 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266866028 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266866208 2022-08-22 02:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266866208 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266868054 2022-08-22 02:12:31 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266868054 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266870139 Good storm
I can’t smell the muddy monst and the floor that smell like rotten flesh]]> 2022-08-22 02:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266870139 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266870379 I could hear the mystical, majestic, blue small ocean waves surfing slowly.]]> 2022-08-22 02:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266870379 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266870814 2022-08-22 02:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266870814 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266872675 2022-08-22 02:16:49 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266872675 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266874396 Roooooaaaaaaarrrrrr!!!!!!I could hear a deathly sound of the rotting breath hit my face.The sound of fear was the only option to go to I stopped dead and was shivering cold.Nothing could help me from what dreadful things were about to happen in the next putrid horrifying seconds... of my last cold breath. Oliver]]> 2022-08-22 02:18:25 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266874396 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266874888 The eerie darkness was hovering right above me. There was nothing. No light. No sound. A field of dark shadows moved from the wild wind. The air an darkness was everything there was. I could taste the wood from the bark of the trees, I could smell the old rotten flesh from the old, ancient ground. There was a creepy cackle like a witch that swallowed a bottle from her own potion. The sound became louder. . . ]]> 2022-08-22 02:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266874888 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266875961 As I heard a howling sound shrieking in the distance, I slowly crept in the eerie silent forest. I thought the forest was remote and abandoned, but I soon found out that was not the case... Climbing on the rocks, I felt it slithering so I glanced back, "Phew!" I must have imagined it. Then I suddenly felt it again, I turned back. A second later I was greeted with blood red eyes peering behind me, I froze, What was that?...]]> 2022-08-22 02:19:45 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266875961 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266875962
Thusini]]> 2022-08-22 02:19:45 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266875962 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266876560 ROAR! the smell the putrid breath of the t-rex hit me as it creeped closer to the cave. The gleaming teeth of the t-rex was dripped with blood. The t-rex was roaring as of it was laughter. The rocks in the cave were scraping me as I creeped closer inside the cave so the t-rex couldn't see me. The taste of the putrid breath seeped inside my mouth as I froze with fear. I was paralysed. i couldn't do anything]]> 2022-08-22 02:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266876560 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266876894 Roar! I can smell the putrid breath of the deadly dinosaur. When i peak over a sharp rock there the dinosaurs blood is dripping down over me. So I went back into our cave but when I do I got cut by a pointy bolder. My friend reached out to get a leaf for a bandage.So I got better. The next morning the T-Rex was still there waiting to eat the heathy humans for dinner .]]> 2022-08-22 02:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266876894 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266877625 2022-08-22 02:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266877625 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266878539 As a hot portal comes rising out of nowhere he started getting hotter because he was standing hot black and strong magma 
And in the gaps there was lava he started walking to the hot portal as he stared thinking it was a way back home.]]> 2022-08-22 02:22:04 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266878539 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266879245 The blue empty sky. No birds. No sun. Dead silence. The surfer is riding across the glistening ocean as he is not aware of what is happening around her. The water ripples as the creature surrounds the surfer. Now she spots the dangerous fin surrounding her. Her heart is pumping. All she could do is wait until the creature stops surrounding her. She was as still as a tree. Silently she moves wanting the creature to not notice the movement… until the creature leaps up…

]]> 2022-08-22 02:22:46 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266879245 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266879251 "Crunch! Crunch!"The grass crunched underneath my shoes.I stared at the the black trees.It's branches snapped into little ashes like someone's body after their death.Little yellow eglowing eyes stared through the dark like mini golden lights shining through the dark,ready to chomp anyone who comes near them.The freezing cold rush of air made the whole world shake.The hatred eyes stared at me coming closer and closer.I was terrified of this world of animosity.The world was buried to the top with eerie casts,and now my survival shall end…]]> 2022-08-22 02:22:47 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266879251 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266879900 I can hear monster creaking the mud off them and the trees leaves swaying in the tree very quickly and the water swishing the mud around all over the underground cave. The dried mud breaking like the branches that are too long to grow more.]]> 2022-08-22 02:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266879900 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266880017 2022-08-22 02:23:27 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266880017 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266882868
A pitch black figure was infront of the mirror where I was brushing. I felt the thumping of a figure the warmth of a person who just had walked on the steps.I could sense humming from a figure. Then the humming stopped.there was complete silence. I could hear the clock ticking. The humming started again.]]> 2022-08-22 02:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266882868 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266883072 “Hmmmm, hmmmm” a figure was humming. The humming got louder and louder. There were footsteps, there were whispers. I could feel the wind, I opened my mouth and then closed it, my mouth was completely dry. I walked on the stairs and I touched the railing, I felt the warmth of it. It was like someone had already touched it. My heart was thumping. My hands were shaking. I felt dizzy. The moon cast a eerie light through the window. I could see something, a figure maybe. I looked at the mirror, there was a shadow. I was chasing a ghost!]]> 2022-08-22 02:26:15 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266883072 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266884584 I opened the door. The door creaked open. There was luminous light through the next door. I opened the door. There was something round.Something large. Something unordinary …]]> 2022-08-22 02:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266884584 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266885144 When I was about to go to my bed… I heard a sound but that sound wasn’t a familiar sound to me. I snuck out my room to investigate. My chest was thumping, my hands were as cold as Neptune’s core, my body was half frozen, I felt like I could pass out. I heard the sound again for the 2^nd Time. I went down stairs, while I went down I felt the warmth of a person who just walked down… suddenly I saw a treacherous figure moving along side the dining table. There I saw that figure face to face as I stared in horror…]]> 2022-08-22 02:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266885144 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266885370  I entered the swamy and smelly forest  the glooming trees hover over me in  darkness I feel the rush of cold air travel up my spin as I walk cautiously.
I hear laughing it sounded like a ghost talking to me and whispering “come closer!”  I move back “who are you!” I screamed he didn’t answer then a hand touches me I feel it. It comes out. It grabs something in my body he whispered “I am the ghost that kills you mental I start to scream and weep then he appears as my mother I come closer and try to  hug my mum then she disappears she evilly whispered “ come closer!” I come closer then It feels like my 
lungs are pulled out I start to breathe heavily I scream “help! help!” Nothing happens I stop breathing and then I hear I am the “killer Ghost!” I fall to ground.]]> 2022-08-22 02:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266885370 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886207 The steaming dimension portal closed. I was trapped. I could feel the burn. My legs were melting. My body collapsed. The place started collapsed. . . ]]> 2022-08-22 02:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886207 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886427 I could see the yellow beady eyes staring in all directions. Started to creep me out. The trees were long as if they were hands reaching out for me. The moon. Gone. I could hear wolves howling in the distance. ]]> 2022-08-22 02:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886427 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886450
I heard the sound of a creepy voice callling to me in my last seconds.Felling scared I froze it felt like it was my last chance of life.Everything around me felt stone cold except one thing the. Noise as I glance at my window I see big bulgy eyes.]]> 2022-08-22 02:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886450 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886481 Swish! As a bright red portal appeared out of nowhere. “Wow” I shouted. I gazed at it in confusion and wondered what it was. But then when I tried to tell people I accidentally tripped in to the portal and then fell on magma. The smell was very bad and it smelt like burning charcoal. Then a lot of a sparks of hot stuff fell on me and I just stayed away from it. The more longer you stay on it the more that it feels like you are on a stove being cooked alive. I was very lonely there because all you could hear was the lava boiling and the portal humming.]]> 2022-08-22 02:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886481 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886994 2022-08-22 02:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266886994 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266887133 We woke up knowing we were going on our amazing boat that day. We wanted to go a different day but dad said we had to go today.we went to the boat ramp to launch the boat we set sail. We found a shark fin sticking out the water i slowly went to other side of the boat.]]> 2022-08-22 02:30:38 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266887133 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266887309 Snap!The branches underneath my shoes snapped as I approached the dark,horrifying forest.The place was a nightmare.I slowly walked forward when a huge shadow was confronting me with hatred…]]> 2022-08-22 02:30:51 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266887309 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266887426 Grrr!  A dark strange noise felt like it was coming from outside. My whole body froze like a statue… l stopped breathing.  I slowly looked out of the windows and l was shocked to see two red eys. ]]> 2022-08-22 02:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266887426 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266889339 2022-08-22 02:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266889339 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266889963 POP! A red gleaming portal appears in front of me. The smell of hot magma filled the air. The hot coal under me burned my feet as I hopped crazily. The crackling of the lava burned my ears. the smoke hit my lips and cracked my lips were dry of the lava]]> 2022-08-22 02:33:38 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266889963 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266891383 I could hear the gastly howl of a white, long, horrifying, ghost growing louder and louder each second l breathe. I was terrified there was someone else in my house i stood still with fear and then an minute later I fainted. The moment I woke up I couldn’t hear it I slowly pulled my blanket down confused and I said to myself it was just a dream I double checked kitchen and was nothing there sighed with confusion. The moment I looked back I saw the ghost and I said maybe I was  wrong IT WASN’T A DREAM. I did all I can to kill but It was unstoppable I hastily got the vacuum cleaner and I said die I sucked it up. The was the end of the fight.]]> 2022-08-22 02:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266891383 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266924907 I entered in the haunted woods the segend I came in branches fell as a man faded away goosebumps travels up my body I continuous waking until…I so slime this is not scary then weird noze came I didn’t move a musical unill all the slime got attaché in to a slimasorous this one is a good one for it didn’t harm me…? ]]> 2022-08-22 03:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266924907 https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266925677 2022-08-22 03:11:58 UTC https://padlet.com/georgiacureton1/zyjssf6fkej9ckw3/wish/2266925677