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Thesis Statement

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social exclusion affects teens and young adults more often than older adults, which leads to more impactful struggles later on in life such as social anxiety, depression and the fear of being left out.

Main Idea #1

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Teen and young adults face Social anxiety more often then older adults.

Main Idea #2

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Depression is a factor commonly known among teens and young adults.

Main Idea #3

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Living with Fear of being left out.

Rudet Selma C.

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The author Rudet goes into debt to why people feeling excluded.

Buse Gonul

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This article explains the differences of college experiences between those with parents who have graduated college and those who are first generation college students.

Barton, Barbara B.

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In this article the author claims that social exclusion is a critical event for mental health which can lead to depression.

Works Cited

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Barton, Barbara B., et al. “Association between the Behavioral Response during Social Exclusion and Recalled Childhood Maltreatment.” Behaviour Research and Therapy, vol. 160, Jan. 2023, pp. 1–9.
Gönül, Buse, et al. “Adolescents View Social Exclusion Based on Social Class as More Wrong Than Do Children.” Developmental Psychology, vol. 59, no. 9, Sept. 2023, pp. 1703–15.

Holte, Alex J., et al. “Afraid of Social Exclusion: Fear of Missing out Predicts Cyberball-Induced Ostracism.” Journal of Technology in Behavioral Science, vol. 7, no. 3, Sept. 2022, pp. 315–24.
Pak, Razieh, et al. “A Comparison of Schema Modes and Self-Beliefs Related to Social Anxiety in Individuals with Subclinical Social Anxiety Disorder and without Social Anxiety Disorder: A Preliminary Finding.” Counselling Psychology Quarterly, Sept. 2023.
Rudert, Selma C., et al. “When and Why We Ostracize Others: Motivated Social Exclusion in Group Contexts.” Journal of Personality and Social Psychology, vol. 125, no. 4, Oct. 2023, pp. 80.
Wesselmann, Eric D., et al. “Exploring Social Exclusion: Where We Are and Where We’re Going.” Social and Personality Psychology Compass, vol. 17, no. 1, Jan. 2023.

Counterargument 1

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"depression is not a real mental health issue".

Counterargument 2

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"Feeling excluded is non important there are bigger problems in the world"

Alex J. Holte

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The author speaks about the how teens are more likely to be afraid of social exclusion, the fear of feeling like they are missing out.

Eric D. Wessleman

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Wessleman explains that teens and young adults are more commonly depressed after Covid-19 with being self isolated.

Park Razieh

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The author Park explains that social anxiety disorder is the most common anxiety disorder and has serious negative effects on multiple areas of life mostly on teens.