https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d Instructions: Revise at least two of the sentences in new tiles. You can add a new tile by pushing the round plus button in the appropriate column. For your new sentences, be sure to add precise nouns, strong verbs, and more detail to paint a clear picture to the reader. Try to use one or two of the five senses (sight, taste, smell, sound, and/or touch) to bring your sentences to life. Be sure your name appears in the tiles so that you may get credit for the assignment. en-us 2022-02-18 17:01:03 UTC 2022-02-28 18:46:57 UTC hello@padlet.com mrshollyakelly https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055620823 She weaved through the crowd as the smell of pastries filled her nose.]]> 2022-02-18 17:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055620823 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055664860 2022-02-18 17:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055664860 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055665755 She felt the freezing cold rain going down her back as she walked home from school]]> 2022-02-18 17:35:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055665755 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666067 The forest shimmered in the sunlight reminding him of honey and stained glass.]]> 2022-02-18 17:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666067 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666138 The forest was blooming with the most gorgeous colors.]]> 2022-02-18 17:35:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666138 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666605 She gasped for air as she was bolting through the nearby village, knocking over wagons along the way. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666605 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666795 The tapping of the rain aganist the window sang to me like a lullaby as I laid drowsily on the couch. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055666795 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667060 2022-02-18 17:36:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667060 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667138 It the rain poured down onto the window like a thump. As the cold breeze ran through little jhonnys room ]]> 2022-02-18 17:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667138 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667301 Her legs burned and her heart pounded, from fear as well as from fatigue.]]> 2022-02-18 17:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667301 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667375 2022-02-18 17:36:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667375 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667472 The city was booming with the noises of cars and people it was so loud my ears were bleeding.]]> 2022-02-18 17:36:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667472 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667832 In the heart of the city sound attacked from all sides.]]> 2022-02-18 17:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055667832 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668168 She sprinted faster than a bullet.]]> 2022-02-18 17:36:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668168 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668230 2022-02-18 17:37:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668230 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668346 The School was tedious. Also very dull, Trent was even put in his place, and that's saying a lot.]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668346 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668444 It was pouring and thundering like a thousand soldiers marching against her neck. The water felt like tiny knives, cold and sharp. Rain never hurt more in my life. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668444 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668446 I heard the sounds of car horns and smelled hot dogs from the stand as i walked to my house]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668446 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668580 she ran as fast as she could knocking over all the wheel barrows, she punched her mom on the way]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668580 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668741





]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668741 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668820 The city was exploding with noise--cars, people, the occasional dog barking. He could barely make out the sound of his own thoughts with how busy the town was.]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055668820 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055669189 as i watched my dog eat the worms all i could think about is how weird he is.]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055669189 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055669794 The dogs face was twisted, its jaw was contorted in every direction.]]> 2022-02-18 17:37:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055669794 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055669899 my dad was veryfast running over the wheelchairs and then knocked down the skull]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055669899 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670200 The drone of voices from the front of the room circled around my head as I lazily picked my fingernails watching the bug soar across the classroom. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670200 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670222

]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670222 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670315 She ran like a cheetah with her heart pumping hard in her chest like it was going to pop out. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670315 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670545 The forest's calming aura and rushing wind added a feel of enchantment and joy to what could presumeably be a dark, mysterious wood]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670545 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670551 2022-02-18 17:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670551 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670671 Her ponytail swung past her shoulder as she just skipped against the dirt. She ran faster and faster, and it felt amazing.]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670671 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670969 Ordinarily Edward would cry, he knew that the tears would be washed away by the downpour, but this wasn't the first time that he'd been burned by the flames of love.]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055670969 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671079 The rain was pounding as if a elephant coming from the sky. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671079 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671224 The forest was full of greenery. Everything was full of live. The colors were absolutely the most beautiful things I have ever seen.]]> 2022-02-18 17:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671224 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671472 2022-02-18 17:39:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671472 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671544 My dog was unusual. He ate some chocolate and now he is turning green.]]> 2022-02-18 17:39:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671544 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671793 The dogs claws long and sharp blood dripped down his neck]]> 2022-02-18 17:39:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055671793 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055672129  The sprinkling rain looked like little shards of ice tinted blue, only it was water.]]> 2022-02-18 17:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055672129 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055672264 The forest was beyond anything the human mind can comprehend. It was like heaven before her. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055672264 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673104 The rain was soft, slow, it was calming to look at as she stared out her car window. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:40:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673104 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673105 The forest was blinding light everywhere]]> 2022-02-18 17:40:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673105 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673441 The leaves glowed with a color that only autumn could produce, and birds could be heard chirping from the treetops. Clearly they didn't know what was coming.]]> 2022-02-18 17:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673441 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673610 2022-02-18 17:40:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673610 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673700 The giant city was blaring with noise, the cars horns honking and the angry people screaming.]]> 2022-02-18 17:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673700 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673769 the city buzzed with exitement as she walked to the flower shop]]> 2022-02-18 17:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055673769 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055674296 The forest was a song, soft and sweet. A melody that could not be heard by the usual passers of the forest. It was magnificent. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055674296 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055675058 My dog has always been an odd one, especially after the whole Chernobyl incident. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:41:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055675058 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055675578 as I strolled through the forest i saw the beautiful emerald evergreen trees, the crystal clear stream, and the colorful wildflowers.]]> 2022-02-18 17:41:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055675578 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676100 She sprinted with her tears streaming. Her legs were so numb they seemed to fade away, but she could still see them. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:41:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676100 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676385 There was an occasional tick of the clock, and the teacher's voice echoed throughout the silent classroom, as well ask the tapping of pencils and slow, labored breathing.]]> 2022-02-18 17:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676385 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676401 The dog a very... special breed. He screamed instead of barked, and yelled at everyone. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676401 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676542 The city was booming with noise with the clippty clap of people shoes along the sidewalk. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055676542 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677054 2022-02-18 17:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677054 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677130 As I sat watching the clock, my teacher droned on about the next essay that we were required to write.]]> 2022-02-18 17:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677130 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677181 The world zoomed by as my feet pounded aganist the ground. The wind whistling in my ears my lungs feeling like it was going to burst. It felt like I was flying. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677181 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677393 Everything felt so alive, the honking of the cars. The music bursted through the speakers. The people chattering due to the beautiful day. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055677393 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055678251 as i sat in yet another prison cell i tried to block out the lies the teacher was trying to tell me.]]> 2022-02-18 17:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055678251 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055678931 2022-02-18 17:43:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055678931 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679193 Ordinarily the packed, polluted city would create horrible noises, but after hearing the bomb, nothing seems quite as loud.]]> 2022-02-18 17:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679193 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679214 School was horridly uninteresting. The voices drowned on and on. He considered pretending to foam from his mouth to get out of school again, but the teacher laid her beedy sharp old person eyes on him. Yikes.]]> 2022-02-18 17:44:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679214 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679320 why is my dog latino]]> 2022-02-18 17:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679320 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679397 the little droplets of rain pattered against the cold window pane, streaming down the clear glass in little rivers, giving a calm sense to cool their nerves.]]> 2022-02-18 17:44:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055679397 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055680181 The forest's silence was heavy. I felt like I needed to make a wisp of sound, but I didn't want to ruin the magnificent silence.]]> 2022-02-18 17:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055680181 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055680336 The city roared as cars and children screamed. The city was the worst place to be. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055680336 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055999426 She was so bored she thought that she was going to die of boredom as the teacher began speaking of the next excruciating assignment.]]> 2022-02-18 21:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2055999426 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056000880 The dog was quite unusually smelly, when you smelled this dog your nose would want to fall off.]]> 2022-02-18 21:59:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056000880 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056001976 The city was so loud that when you herd a car honk you might just think your ears will explode.]]> 2022-02-18 22:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056001976 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056087888 he could smell the rain before it hit. it came in giant hard droplets pounding on his skull.]]> 2022-02-19 00:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056087888 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056089360 2022-02-19 00:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2056089360 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2066562228 The Forest was filled with activity. Brightly colored insects buzzed around, hawks and birds swooped past, and the trees almost seemed to sway to the sound of the wind. ]]> 2022-02-25 15:40:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2066562228 https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2070097705 The sounds of the cars honking and the hustle and bustle of busy people shuffling off to someplace else, away from here and now, echoed in his mind with the voices of his many thoughts which were long left unsaid, whispering in the back of his head, unheard and ignored by the mindless drones scuttling around him on their way to someplace "away"...]]> 2022-02-28 18:46:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mrshollyakelly/zx6rfnqdt9rdhb6d/wish/2070097705