https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6 Leave a nice detailed message for Mia! en-us 2017-04-03 12:48:51 UTC 2026-01-01 06:48:28 UTC hello@padlet.com hewithan000 https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164311200 It was a really amazing story with great vocabulary, flow, and imagery. I love how detailed you went in your verbal explanation. ]]> 2017-04-03 12:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164311200 https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164311251 The way you spoke about your story was well written and gave an emounce amount of detail. The item you used and distressed had an interesting back story and I enjoyed listening to it.]]> 2017-04-03 12:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164311251 gellirya000 https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164314474 Eye contact was nearly non existent and she did no movement with her body to help the story. Everything else was well done. ]]> 2017-04-03 12:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164314474 https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164314923 Your story was well written, and was extremely creative. I really liked the idea of using the watch to say that "time is a killer." The story was intriguing and the distressed item was really cool. ]]> 2017-04-03 13:01:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164314923 https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164316567 The story was incredible as well as the presentation. It ties you in and makes you feel like you are actually in the story. I believe she got a 4 in every category ]]> 2017-04-03 13:06:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164316567 rojaspre000 https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164320171 Really, Really good job! From the moment you began reading your story I was immediately entranced in the story. The story was relateable and could very well have really happened during that time to someone which made it even more interesting. Very good job.]]> 2017-04-03 13:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164320171 cruzjus0001 https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164325705 I loved the way you started the story you described it very well it kept me interested. I liked the way you described how he felt when he stole he watch and how he felt about being drafted in the war.  I like the way you explained why you used the watch it was very interesting.]]> 2017-04-03 13:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/zwo6a2al7ym6/wish/164325705