Advertising Project_XA1 by paulina rian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf Time's up! Now you can check your grade. Thank you for the hard work and efforts that you have made so far. ;) en-us 2022-03-07 08:55:28 UTC 2025-11-26 02:47:17 UTC hello@padlet.com Upload your PPT HERE paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081224385 Use red post for those who have not presented their works on the consultation day.]]> 2022-03-07 08:55:28 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081224385 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246253 2022-03-07 09:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246253 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246384 2022-03-07 09:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246384 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246507 2022-03-07 09:10:33 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246507 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246627 2022-03-07 09:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246627 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246733 2022-03-07 09:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246733 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246889 2022-03-07 09:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246889 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246982 2022-03-07 09:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081246982 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081247073 2022-03-07 09:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081247073 Green for groups that have presented their progress. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081247172 2022-03-07 09:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081247172 brillybornito https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081481137 2022-03-07 11:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081481137 Per Aspera Ad Astra fanuelchristiawan https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081598881 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1jmoJyJRy03i4GN1YbPMg7e6dkd07-4bdLrdmllMZqMA/edit?usp=sharing ]]> 2022-03-07 13:16:08 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081598881 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081808740 2022-03-07 14:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081808740 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081811707 2022-03-07 14:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2081811707 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2082028967 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1xoIHTx_di4P5QGU2tnOOAfJK7ey_hDk3V-Hv471UrWQ/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2022-03-07 16:21:17 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2082028967 Top Group https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2082832376 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NNqQOnkuot5cb0N71VLNSnoApnrf1E7ItWQAZjd_rgg/edit#slide=id.g118aadfff92_0_6]]> 2022-03-08 01:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2082832376 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083181775 Sastra Inggris - Ads - Google Slides]]> 2022-03-08 04:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083181775 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1-0d9BsBNTBe4bL-kzbMn1KMAGpi2jgtrSDqwoGm8IWE/edit?usp=sharing ignasiusmoses https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083205039 2022-03-08 04:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083205039 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083220590 Member: Yazi(6) / Bryan(10) / Matthew(25)
Side note: the idea was that the reason for the lack of words and full paragraphs in the ppt is that the original plan was to make the presentation the main focus. What that means is that the actual speaking part of the presentation was supposed to be the main thing and the ppt was only supposed to be only a support for the talking, but it turns out we didn't even get the chance to present. ]]> 2022-03-08 04:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083220590 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083873183 Member: Evan(08), Adit(18), Russel(29)]]> 2022-03-08 12:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2083873183 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084032356 Thank you for the progress!
1. Please check your worksheet naming. 
You named it worksheet 1: direct selling.
2. To make the CTA clearer add an imperative word, please.
For example:
Now’s your chance! Subscribe / Join 0.99 $ per month!
3. Thoughful strategies for the direct selling ad! Just make sure that those fit with your target audience (the direct selling one).
4. For the body direct selling: nice points! 
Wouldn't be better to be shorter without repeated you?
(You can play any songs, download...)

or if you wanna emphasize the words "you can" with reparations, please make a different font/tone so that it becomes clear. 

Good job! Keep it up!]]> 2022-03-08 13:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084032356 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084086537 Thank you for submitting your progress! I love the way you manage and work with the project from the beginning, anw,
Recommendations:
1. Any is normally used with plural and uncountable nouns in questions, negative and conditional sentences. check my comment about grammar ( any guitar) any guitars. they....

2. The brand awareness poster is cool and each element connects to one another. Great!

3. Be clear with the direct selling ad strategy!
"To make the viewer interested and impressed by the quality and tech of the guitar." Promoting the quality is mentioned on the body part, but not as a strategy, it's the element and the focus of the ad.
from what I've seen so far, the strategy used is discount.

4. Are you sure that the picture already represents your main promotion which is about its quality?

Fancy, thanks!

]]> 2022-03-08 14:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084086537 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084107489 Thank you for the progress!
1. Please arrange the slides. Present only the required and project related slides.
2. Be clear with what features you want to highlight
your target audience is already clear, good job!
3. Next, complete the elements on both types; direct selling and brand awareness.

Looking forward to the updates, thanks!]]> 2022-03-08 14:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084107489 Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084125378 Clear and nice, thank you!
Recommendation:
Give a simple note on the body part, showing features/points that you want to highlight.
as to support your headline, like one of your references.


The rests are excellent! thank you.]]> 2022-03-08 14:40:36 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084125378 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084143470 Thank you for submitting yours!
Here are some recommendations:
1. An appreciation for the clear target audience. cool!
think about a strategy that can afford all products you advertise.
2. After knowing Logitec's value, come make our own that still emphasizes/promotes the value, but remember.. you have to create your own headline, body, slogan.


Catch up the progress guys! Keep the spirit on! ]]> 2022-03-08 14:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084143470 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084193997 1. Appreciation for the powerful, persuasive, and connected headline, body, and strategy for the brand awareness ad! Awesome. thank you team!
2. Please recheck your direct selling ad. Try to make powerful, persuasive and connected headline and body like your brand awareness ad.
Headline: Capturing the best quality with X-T4
Your point about the best quality has not been elaborated/ presented on the body part.

Fighting! you can do it, very appreciated progress!


]]> 2022-03-08 15:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084193997 paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084704346 Understood. But unfortunately I cannot open the file it’s private i guess. Please adjust the setting. 🙏🏽]]> 2022-03-08 19:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084704346 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084710153 Thank you for sharing the progress.

1. I have checked your work and it seems that your headline already meets the offered value, which also talks about technology.

However, please check the grammar and how you put the details on the body in the brand awareness ad. 

2. Highlight your persuasive part, for example, You need it! → emphasize it more, by highlighting/boldening/giving different colours and fonts, etc.
3. Has a capable for editing? Are you sure? Check the grammar!
Recommendation: Has the capability of best and fast editing / perform the capability of best and fast editing (this is much better, I guess).
(be clear with your offering by adding adjective - kata sifat-)
4. Let people know that you want to promote two values: thin product but advanced technology by separating the two or making the sentences smoother.

5. But for the direct selling poster, is crystal clear. cool!
Thank you! 


]]> 2022-03-08 19:28:37 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2084710153 No progress submission. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2085094941 2022-03-09 01:05:44 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2085094941 No progress submission. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2085095112 2022-03-09 01:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2085095112 Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2085114815 Thank you for sharing your progress!
1. CTA is not a strategy, it's an element of an advertisement.
2. You have to make the headline in line with the value. Please check my recommendation on steps to create connected headlines and values.
So first, decide the value; what are/is the point/feature that you want to promote?
is that about the design, trend, ...?
then make a suitable headline that represents the value.
3. The offering is not clear for direct selling.
Try to make the elements step by step as I suggest.

Thank you and catch up! ;)]]> 2022-03-09 01:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2085114815 carolusdotulong https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2088161234 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/14QubyIZfmdESKc7LccDzLBIxiLKFKn5K0k641qLhhOQ/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2022-03-10 11:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2088161234 Tito Sang Ketua S2-Deo/3, Tito/4, Brilly/9 brillybornito https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089461954 Brand Awareness Poster ]]> 2022-03-11 01:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089461954 Tito Sang Ketua S2-Deo/3, Tito/4, Brilly/9 brillybornito https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089463724 Direct Selling Poster ]]> 2022-03-11 01:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089463724 Top Group. Jason/21 Magnis/24 Randy/30 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089540141 Worksheet 1 and 2:

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NNqQOnkuot5cb0N71VLNSnoApnrf1E7ItWQAZjd_rgg/edit#slide=id.g118aadfff92_0_0]]> 2022-03-11 01:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089540141 Brand Awareness Advertisement https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089542705 2022-03-11 01:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089542705 Direct Selling Advertisement https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089543917 2022-03-11 02:00:13 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2089543917 MMM Group vincensiussetiawan https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090008204 Group Members (Science Class 1):
Danu/22
Yesa/31
Bijann/32]]> 2022-03-11 07:50:17 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090008204 Brand Awareness Poster - MMM Group vincensiussetiawan https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090011976 2022-03-11 07:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090011976 Direct Selling Poster - MMM Group vincensiussetiawan https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090016103 2022-03-11 07:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090016103 Speedrun King Neo https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090156263 Yazi/6, Bryan/10, Matthew/25]]> 2022-03-11 09:50:20 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090156263 The 2 Posters https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090157541 2022-03-11 09:51:15 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090157541 Per Aspera Ad Astra https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090254802 1. Josh/12
2. Fanuel/17
3. Nathan/27]]> 2022-03-11 11:13:22 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090254802 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090255756 2022-03-11 11:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090255756 Direct Selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090257138 2022-03-11 11:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090257138 Brand Awareness Advertisement bernardinodharmawan https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090579043 2022-03-11 14:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090579043 Direct Selling Advertisement bernardinodharmawan https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090579830 2022-03-11 14:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090579830 AhihihiIyahhhh https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090584357 2022-03-11 14:55:22 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090584357 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090705503 Ajibuana Wibowo/1
Deutelin Dipataruna/15
Narendra Bahi/26]]> 2022-03-11 16:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090705503 H-1, Arga/13, Danuja/14, Yogi/23 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090709912 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1xoIHTx_di4P5QGU2tnOOAfJK7ey_hDk3V-Hv471UrWQ/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2022-03-11 16:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090709912 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090710504 2022-03-11 16:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090710504 Direct Selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090711216 2022-03-11 16:10:02 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090711216 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090863098 2022-03-11 17:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090863098 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090864138 2022-03-11 17:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2090864138 Notes paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091590286 Where are the two products; brand awareness and direct selling ads? it is only the worksheet.]]> 2022-03-12 12:33:36 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091590286 Final Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091593741 Very nice progress!
Please attach the ads directly on Padlet under my feedback, as I have announced earlier so that I can see the detailed progress ways easier.]]> 2022-03-12 12:40:26 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091593741 Final Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091596067 Nice progress and excellent ads. Really love your authentic ideas! Thank you!]]> 2022-03-12 12:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091596067 Final Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091599572 Cool! thank you]]> 2022-03-12 12:52:22 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091599572 Final Feedback: paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091603285 Thank you for the progress. The direct selling is cool but next time you can check the elements and details on the brand awareness one. ;)]]> 2022-03-12 12:59:48 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091603285 Final Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091616249 1. The brand awareness ad is super powerful.
2. For direct selling you just need to show more strategies and make clear distinctions for important words/phrases like CTA, headline, etc.]]> 2022-03-12 13:22:36 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091616249 Final Feedback paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091621601 Where are your updated works?]]> 2022-03-12 13:31:07 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091621601 yosefadyatma https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091625981 2022-03-12 13:38:04 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091625981 yosefadyatma https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091627863 2022-03-12 13:41:16 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091627863 Direct selling https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091674905 2022-03-12 14:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2091674905 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2092320888 Brand Awareness]]> 2022-03-13 13:27:51 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2092320888 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2092321115 2022-03-13 13:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2092321115 https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2092322336 Sorry we're late]]> 2022-03-13 13:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2092322336 Incomplete task. paulinarian https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2109062166 2022-03-23 05:57:50 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2109062166 Brand Awareness https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2109458161 2022-03-23 11:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/paulinarian/zw5gk37e9sylvxgf/wish/2109458161