https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7 en-us 2018-03-28 14:05:24 UTC 2025-12-16 04:49:42 UTC hello@padlet.com oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246911566 Person 1) steady shots, no shaking or unsteadiness
Person 2) shots look steady and good
Person 3) yes, all are still
Person 4) yes shots are very steady with very good framing and composition
Person 5) yes and yes
Person 6) yes
Person 7) yes they all look very purposeful]]> 2018-03-28 14:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246911566 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246912901 Person 1) framing of shots successful and effective, works well
Person 2) I really like the framing with the ballerina, I think it is filmed really well!
Person 3) yes mostly, a couple weren't centred but not hugely noticeable
Person 4) yes
Person 5) framing = successful
Person 6) yes
Person 7) yes they are all very well framed and engaging]]> 2018-03-28 14:17:39 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246912901 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913239 Person 1) variety of shots used, rose shot is repeated but it's effective and purposefully done, very gripping footage
Person 2) good shot variety, I think with the new shots the story is clearer which is grand, the narrative is still a little unclear of the girl's intentions and reasoning, I don't think this matters too much as the audience can interpret
Person 3) yes, the dancing, fighting parts are especially engaging
Person 4) yes, the variety of shots is very good and this makes it so engaging and interesting to watch, furthermore there is very good structure and order of shots is good
Person 5) not a massive variety of shots but still successful and interesting
Person 6) yes lots of variety in shots, footage is also very engaging, you've used a variety of interior/exterior shots
Person 7) there's lots of different shots which is engaging, I don't think you need any more scenes]]> 2018-03-28 14:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913239 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913278 Person 1) very conventional for a narrative music video in this genre, highly successful in terms of footage
Person 2) yes, I think it goes with the music of dark lighting and connotations
Person 3) no repetition, good! very clear structure and expressive, suits genre very well
Person 4) yes
Person 5) yes and sort of looks like a film (when running in woods) but can tell it is a music video conventionally
Person 6) yes and yes
Person 7) there is no repetition which is nice it makes it look very professional and I like how the narrative is split up, made me want to keep watching]]> 2018-03-28 14:18:24 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913278 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913303 Person 1) mise-en-scene used well and appropriately, genre clear
Person 2) yes, ballerina is sinister with red petals at the end, uncluttered scenes
Person 3) I like all of the mise-en-scene, spotlight on dancer especially looks great
Person 4) mise-en-scene is very appropriate and a really good use of colours throughout
Person 5) mise-en-scene appropriate, genre isn't 100% clear but appropriate for song
Person 6) definitely
Person 7) yes the genre is very clear and I think it is very conventional because of the shots and actors used]]> 2018-03-28 14:18:27 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913303 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913343 Person 1) narrative is clear after a few times of watching it as it begins to be pieced together, requires audience to think as not immediately clear but works well
Person 2) good editing and creative narrative portrayal
Person 3) good pace, still don't understand narrative entirely but leaves me thinking
Person 4) editing is very effective and the structure is clear, the shots have a very appropriate pace and portray 'just enough', they're not too long or short
Person 5) pace is appropriate
Person 6) yes the footage has clearly been edited to the meaning of the lyrics, there are even breeze-blocks subtly in the video
Person 7) yes I think the editing works well with the pace of the song and symbolic narrative]]> 2018-03-28 14:18:31 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913343 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913551 Person 1) lip syncing is very accurate, atmosphere works with theme of song
Person 2) yes
Person 3) yes, group works well, yes all fits together
Person 4) yes very accurate, good ideas for genre and fitting this into video
Person 5) lip syncing is very accurate but slightly dark
Person 6) yes
Person 7) the lip syncing is very well edited but you could add more of it to enforce the artist's image]]> 2018-03-28 14:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913551 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913586 Person 1) whole video overall is beautiful, love the use of shots and how it all works together, think about warehouse shots
Person 2) like the rose symbolism at beginning and end
Person 3) dancing and roses, improve narrative structure at end
Person 4) the shots are very good with very good composition, framing was successful but work on the shots with photos in
Person 5) love the blood on the rose, could improve on the shots of woman running, make a bit faster
Person 6) rose shots are so good, make all characters clearly linked, really good enigma codes and ambiguity
Person 7) I loved it! very engaging and varied! also very conventional]]> 2018-03-28 14:18:58 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246913586 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246914090 Person 1) really good use of colour, consistent and conventional for dark theme and genre
Person 2) yes
Person 3) maybe play around with some filters, experiment
Person 4) yes filters work very well, rose shot has amazing colour contrast and composition, dancer's shot also has effective lighting and filter
Person 5) transitions are good and effective
Person 6) yes
Person 7) I think you could use more transitions just to create some versatility]]> 2018-03-28 14:19:53 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/zvkni2qluoq7/wish/246914090