Sandtrap by Liam Davison (2003) by Fabienne Meier https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory en-us 2021-12-13 14:32:54 UTC 2025-12-05 03:59:17 UTC hello@padlet.com about Ross McLennan leonstibi326 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951381838 2021-12-16 10:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951381838 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382322 Ross McLennan]]> 2021-12-16 10:05:18 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382322 3rd person narrator https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382445 2021-12-16 10:05:24 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382445 Neighbour https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382744 2021-12-16 10:05:35 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382744 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382747 Wife]]> 2021-12-16 10:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382747 who is crying? https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382831 2021-12-16 10:05:38 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951382831 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951383016 Daughter]]> 2021-12-16 10:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951383016 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951383145 Son]]> 2021-12-16 10:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951383145 Help or ignore? https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951383604 2021-12-16 10:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951383604 from where does the crying come from? https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951384051 2021-12-16 10:06:31 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951384051 Ross McLennan's house https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951384398 2021-12-16 10:06:44 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951384398 mysterious https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951385172 2021-12-16 10:07:17 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951385172 garden with sand box and trampoline https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951385346 2021-12-16 10:07:24 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951385346 scary https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951385421 2021-12-16 10:07:27 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951385421 Not a continous time line leonstibi326 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386433 2021-12-16 10:08:10 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386433 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386684 Rising action: loud crying]]> 2021-12-16 10:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386684 Father of Ross McLennan https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386733 2021-12-16 10:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386733 gloomy, dark, spooky https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386802 2021-12-16 10:08:23 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951386802 Resolution: discovery of the neighbour https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951387465 2021-12-16 10:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951387465 narrator knows about the past but doesn't tell about the future itsaboutdriveitsaboutpower https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951387508 2021-12-16 10:08:53 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951387508 beginning: waking up, thinking about family https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951388172 2021-12-16 10:09:19 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951388172 Tense https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951390028 2021-12-16 10:10:34 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951390028 awkward (when he sees his neighbour crying) https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951390852 2021-12-16 10:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951390852 in the night (early morning) https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951390888 2021-12-16 10:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951390888 red line of the story: find out from where the crying comes https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951393241 2021-12-16 10:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951393241 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951394295 Falling action: story about his past]]> 2021-12-16 10:13:22 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951394295 weatherboard house at the sea tiwol8266 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951394298 2021-12-16 10:13:23 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951394298 leonstibi326 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951397236 2021-12-16 10:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951397236 https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951397925 Missing his daughter]]> 2021-12-16 10:16:01 UTC https://padlet.com/fabiennemeier18/shortstory/wish/1951397925