Mentor Sentence: Deadliest Animals by Valeria Garcia https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg Celebrate your great writing! en-us 2021-11-01 04:40:09 UTC 2025-10-26 23:09:04 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f981.png Victor’s work 738109_3 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865432425 The team was about to score a goal, but the other team stole the ball and made a goal. 

]]> 2021-11-03 17:40:25 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865432425 Chloe https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865435427 Chocolate ice cream is good but, bubble gum ice cream is way better!]]> 2021-11-03 17:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865435427 Zoe j https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865436822 “I’m a great dancer but I do not take number 
One in my family”.]]> 2021-11-03 17:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865436822 Julian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865439122 Lions certainly score the highest on the list, but they don’t take the number one spot.
After I saw the rattlesnake I run in the opposite way.]]> 2021-11-03 17:42:54 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865439122 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865439573 I was waiting for the bus for one hour, but it never came.
By Luis]]> 2021-11-03 17:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865439573 Sofia A https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865440701 Puppies are certainly cute and might seem harmless, but even though they may seem harmless there are some that are very, let’s just say, wild.]]> 2021-11-03 17:43:28 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865440701 Christopher Ramos https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865442427 I went to the beach so i can get in the water because it was really hot so we brought a umbrella yet it was still hot.]]> 2021-11-03 17:44:07 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865442427 Nathan https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865443838 I was running so fast but… I tripped and  got a cut in my knee  and I was bleeding alot .]]> 2021-11-03 17:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865443838 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865445014 Elephants are super strong . Like a tiger]]> 2021-11-03 17:45:10 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865445014 7501923 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865445836 After I saw that dog that was big giant and scary looking, I ran out my cousins yard.]]> 2021-11-03 17:45:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865445836 Zoe Carroll https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865446439 I want ice cream I said to my mom when we were shopping my mom said in a minute I’m shopping I was like but but I want to go right now I said and I said in a sweet voice in a minute Fine you can go to a game let’s go my mom got vanilla I got chocolate The end.]]> 2021-11-03 17:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865446439 Alan 7343141 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865449041 The lions were going to attack me, but they both got distracted.]]> 2021-11-03 17:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865449041 Adam https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865451737 The taxi said it would come in 2 minutes but it came in 4 minutes.]]> 2021-11-03 17:47:49 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865451737 Chris O https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865451803 I love basketball. I’m really good at playing basketball. I’m really good at basketball, but I’m not number one.]]> 2021-11-03 17:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865451803 Kylie https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865453530 1 - The shark was going to eat a fish, but another sea animal stole it from the shark’s mouth.

2 - When I saw the monster, I screamed and ran in the opposite direction.]]> 2021-11-03 17:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865453530 Alessandra|| imitation conjunction sentence https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865456980 1~My dog looks cute playful, fluffy and all those dogs things, but little do you know HE IS CRAZY.

 2~ Chocolate. I cream is yummy and a classic, although strawberry and finally is just better in my opinion.]]> 2021-11-03 17:49:49 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865456980 Allisson https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865458670 Leo  jerked skis  skulks skis,am keel spells Kalamazoo skaldic,]]> 2021-11-03 17:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865458670 Santi https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865461333 I was going to the best ride in the world 🌎 but, then I said”. 

Mom I don’t want to go in the ride anymore”. Mom said”.

No you are going, in that ride write know or you are going to be grounded .]]> 2021-11-03 17:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1865461333 Zoe j https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870789657
Although, I’m tired I’m still going to dance.]]> 2021-11-05 20:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870789657 Victor 🤩 738109_3 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870790592 The bear was looked like it was coming to our rv, yet it decided to go somewhere else.


]]> 2021-11-05 20:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870790592 Sofia A https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870791021 When I saw the ice cream truck I ran up to it , although I love chocolate ice cream I went with bubblegum.]]> 2021-11-05 20:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870791021 Isabela Perez 7501923 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870791489 1. When I was in the pool, I did not put sunscreen

2.  When I was looking at the soccer game, I forgot to put on my  sweater and hat.]]> 2021-11-05 20:25:21 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870791489 Kylie https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870791742 1 - I was not feeling good, yet I still wanted to go to the carnival. 

2 - Once I saw that eagle, I took out my camera and took a picture.]]> 2021-11-05 20:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870791742 Adam https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870792593 I was so excited to ride a roller coaster and it was really fun.]]> 2021-11-05 20:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870792593 Alan 7343141 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870793171 I saw the soccer game, I was ready to watch the game. 

]]> 2021-11-05 20:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870793171 Daniel 744552_7 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870793481 I was at the Store, and my mom left me.]]> 2021-11-05 20:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870793481 Julian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870794109 I got my hands dirty but,… I’m sure I will be fine.]]> 2021-11-05 20:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870794109 Damian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870794433 I love baseball so much, but I can get better at it.]]> 2021-11-05 20:27:58 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870794433 Alessandra~subordinate conjunctions https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870795678 1~Although it was a long wait in line, the rollercoaster was worth it.

2~I was really tired after the long day at Disneyland, yet i still wanted to see the fireworks.]]> 2021-11-05 20:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870795678 Elisa 730608_6 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870795685 1 - I was going to the slide at the playground, and I accidentally tripped on my shoelace. My bow fell off my head when I tripped on my shoelace. 
2 - After lunch, I went to play by myself when my mom called, “Do your homework or I will take the iPad away from you!”]]> 2021-11-05 20:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870795685 Julian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870796138 I could not have some ice cream so… whatever]]> 2021-11-05 20:29:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870796138 Christopher Ramos https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870796736 One day I was going to school and suddenly I tripped on my shoe lace.]]> 2021-11-05 20:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870796736 7314941 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870797137 Warren had the ball so it was 3rd down.But Rancho Cucomunga tackeld Warren.]]> 2021-11-05 20:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870797137 Alexa https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870797406 I was so excited  to  go at Disney land,
 Because it has been a long time since 
I was little girl.

]]> 2021-11-05 20:30:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870797406 Isabelle 739361_5 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870797512 The monster was after me,but I barely got away safely.

I have not gone to your house yet,and I’m coming today.

Do your homework,or I’ll take your tablet away.]]> 2021-11-05 20:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870797512 🥵Nathan🥶 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870798406 1.I was so tired because I ran for more then an hour!



2.although I was tired I still wanted to go to the park.



3.while I was running I bumped into a kid on accident.


4. I was waiting in my house for a package until I heard a knock on the door and it was the mail man with my package.

]]> 2021-11-05 20:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870798406 Julian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870798605 Can you please help me do my cooking I said… yes!!!!]]> 2021-11-05 20:31:37 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870798605 🐶 Zoe Carroll 🐶 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870799623 I want a dog I said to my mom she said when we move to the new house I couldn’t wait I was so excited but the next day I couldn’t wait I kept on asking my mom and axing annexing she still said no so I kept and kept and kept for the last few days and I never got it. 🥲]]> 2021-11-05 20:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870799623 Glennis Garcia https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870799867 I love cotton candy, but it has to much sugar. And if you eat to much cotton candy you’ll get in a cotton candy coma.  ]]> 2021-11-05 20:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870799867 Jonah 約拿埃斯基維爾 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870801761 My Dad told me do you want to go to the beach, or the movies.]]> 2021-11-05 20:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870801761 Chloe🍡🐭 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870802096 Since I wasn’t tall enough I couldn’t go on a Disney land ride but my siblings could.]]> 2021-11-05 20:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870802096 Julian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870802646 Run!!!!! I ran as fast as I could.]]> 2021-11-05 20:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870802646 Chris o 738024_5 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870802662 When I got hit in the face by a soccer ball, yet I fell on the ground. My couch asked me if I was okay. I “said no.”]]> 2021-11-05 20:35:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870802662 Julian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870804547 One day, when I got to school… something bad just happened…]]> 2021-11-05 20:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870804547 Julian https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870806706 What I said. We are going to…]]> 2021-11-05 20:39:11 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870806706 Santi🦥 https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870807577 I was fighting with my cussin then he said”,

I’m more better at fighting, than you can then I grab him and bush him to the bed 🛏 then I got in trouble for breaking my sisters bed my cousin. 😭 me 😳
]]> 2021-11-05 20:40:04 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870807577 Sofiam https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870809954  ,My dog likes to do jrix  but rather it’s was funee  it was not on Pepsi  plus I am printed shor  theat dogs  Kant do a bak flip on prpis.]]> 2021-11-05 20:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870809954 Emily PartyWanted https://padlet.com/vgarcia79/zt0bm1ex2bliw9hg/wish/1870812098 My sisters  where going
to there, friend part  I wanted ,to go t my mom said when you are older.




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