Paragraph Theme Analysis, Vocabulary and Reflections by Ms. English https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf Topic Sentence, Supporting Ideas / Examples and Choice of Vocabulary en-us 2017-10-14 15:54:36 UTC 2018-03-07 04:55:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Hotsun.png Ms. Nee msnee_english https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238944826 Paragraph 1
It is about the writer's wonderful feeling about a small beach near Big Wave Bay 10 years ago when the beach was clean with a freshwater stream and fresh water marine creatures such as freshwater pawns.

Paragraph 2
(a) It tells the disgusting scene  of rubbish that the writer saw on the beach last month. it made the writer go away.
(b) The paragraph serves as a contrast to paragraph 1 through which the writer wants to highlight the problem of trash at beaches in Hong Kong.]]> 2018-03-06 23:50:12 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238944826 Ms. Nee msnee_english https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992775 What is the main idea of Paragraph 2 of Sample 2?]]> 2018-03-07 04:04:48 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992775 Janice🦄 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992907 Paragraph 2 shows that Suzuki, the founder of Open Earthfirst come to HK to organised a cleanup operation and they had collected so many garbage in the beach.  ]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992907 Zoë So :) https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992912 🐿The main idea of paragraph two is to introduce Beach Clean-up World Tour and one of it's members, ten year old Toma Kondo. They took a four day trip where they cleaned up coastlines in Hong Kong. To sum it up, the paragraph also introduced eco-warrior Hiromasa Suzuki who is the leader of Beach Clean-up World Tour and also the founder of Open Earth. 🦃
🦌These people are selfless and caring and are willing to clean up the mess other people created. Thier heart is in the right place and I think people should also step out of their comfort zone and be a part of something bigger than themselves. 💫


🐉Vocab: Magnanimous, Charitable, Noble, big hearted, Benevolent, philanthropic, Enlightening, Bountiful, liberal, chivalrous, compassionate, tender hearted, aplenty🌮


🌔Ways to promote awareness:

-Education: give talks, include as topics in textbooks -> Cultivating young minds are the only solution to prevent the problem from worsening. 🥞
-🌈Set up laws -> reinforcing stricts rules + Imposing fines/penalties/ measurements🐋🐏🐘🐐🦏🐪🐅🐫🦍🐆🐊🦈🐡🐢🦎🐍🦀🦑🦉🦇🦆🐧🦁🐯🦊🐸





]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:43 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992912 Krystal Ho 🤩 Doris 🤡 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992916
Japanese are more passionate than hongkongers with Hong Kong’s environment, and they founded the environmental organisation Open Earth for a clean up operation.

Willing, kind hearted, genuine, generous ,out going, proactive, responsible, warm ,upbeat , cooperative,dedicated,

 We can teach students at school as soon as possible
 Tell them what happiness when they throw the rubbish everywhere, if one day our world are not suitable for biological living ,they should bear the greatest responsibility for this






]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:44 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992916 Nicole and Stephanie 👻 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992919 The main idea of paragraph 2 of sample 2 is to introduce Suzuki’s background.
 Satisfactory response! Add more. (Ms. Nee)
Self-motivated , merciful , clemency
By educating the public , roll out an advertisement about the problems of rubbish]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992919 Kayley https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992922 The main idea is about the group was led by Hiromasa Suzuki and her personal background

]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:46 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992922 Judy https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992927 Government can make the law to tell people that is important,so when they make the rubbish they would have the awareness.]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:47 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992927 Lily https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992933 To introduce Hiromasa Suzuki ‘s background

]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992933 Jade and Danielle ☁️ https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992936 Make a advertisement about the issue of rubbish ]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992936 Virdah ☠️ https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992941 -The main ideas of paragraph 2 and 3 is to give background information of Hiromasa Suzuki and how the event was launched —💞unselfish, altruistic, self-sacrificing, considerate, compassionate, kind, decent, noble, public-spirited;generous, magnanimous charitable, benevolent, liberal, open-handed, philanthropic💕
— Through giving talks to students and organising campaigns ]]> 2018-03-07 04:05:51 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992941 Yumi💕Sally Tam🙈 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992959 The main idea of paragraph 2 is introduce the group of Japanese and Suzuki.
🐣generou
🗑Can put more advertisement in TV or website.

To place more advertisements on social media like TV and online networks about enrinmetnal protection]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:00 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992959 Cherry s171045 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992982 The main idea in paragraph two of sample two is to tell Hiromasa Suzuki's background and tell that they decided to help Suzuki to launch an clean -up event similar to Mongolia (benevolent)]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992982 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992983 Loey
The main ideas in paragraph 2 is about the group who led by Hiromasa Suzuki has been taking groups of Japanese to help reforest barrren land and also about Japanese are more passionate than Hong Kongers with Hong Kong's environment😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😽😸😸😽😽😽😽😽😽😽
]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992983 Icey and Zinnie https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992988 The group of Japanese who came Hong Kong to clean up the environment and collected more than 135 full 64-gallon bags of garbage over the course of three day, so Hong Kong's pollution crisis is seriously.
Selfless Responsible 

]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992988 Eunice https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992993 The main idea of paragraph 2 is Suzuki is the founder of environmental organisation Open Earth .

]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992993 Claudia🐷 and Karen🐽 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992999 The main idea is that to show the japanese with the Hongkongers have a big contrast .the japanese cherish what they have but contrastly the hongkongers do not love， protect and care of it .
Kind 
Generous
Dedicated
Mighty
Give talks and set up a lesson to educate them about the issue 💩]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:14 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238992999 Vicky0u0 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993016 The main idea of the paragraph2 is to introduce the initiator of the clean-up events-Hiromasa Suzuki and also talking about what the group have done for protecting the environment before. 
That's arouse Hongkongers the responsibility to protect our homeland.
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Enthusiastic quq
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More education in school
Make an advertisement
]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:22 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993016 Krystal Chui🤫 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993027 The main idea is to introduce the group background who was led by Suzuki,and Suzuki to help reforestbarrend land in Inner Mongolia since  2009.And show that Japanese are more care of their environment than Hongkongers.
kind-hearted❣❤️🧚‍♀️
Invite guest to give a talk or game to increase their awareness.🤔🧐🤩]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:25 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993027 Harshpreet🥀 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993028
The main idea of paragraph 2 is to introduce an eco-warrior named Hiromasa Suzuki who has been taking groups since 2009 and this time’s group was also led by him. 

Passionate keen


How to promote more awareness of the problem of the rubbish
~ teach the public through pamphlets 
~highlight the problem through news reports



]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:25 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993028 sallyfung https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993058 the main idea of paragraph two is it tells  an environmental organisation come to Hong Kong for a clean-up operation .Although it is not their responsibility ,they are willing to help to collect garbage.                                                                                                 Kindness
Organise a talk]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993058 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993081 Sca]]> 2018-03-07 04:06:50 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993081 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993119 Emily Scarlett

The main idea of paragraph2 is about the information of Hiromasa Suzuki and Suzuki ,also the behavior of them shows their kindness and responsibility for protecting the environment without border.

Worth learning , generous , noble, self-motivated, magnanimous 

The society can launch some of educational events for public or teenagers ,such as talks , lessons or carnivals which can help people to increase their awareness of environmental protection.]]> 2018-03-07 04:07:05 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993119 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993175 Emily.M
The main idea of paragraph 2 is to mention Suzuki brought a group of Japanese to Hong Kong to clean up the environment and to let readers know the difference between Japanese and Hong Kongers. kind-hearted ,  considerate 
1.More advertisements on social media]]> 2018-03-07 04:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993175 Zinnie https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993257 The group who led by Hironmasa Suzuki is an international eco-warrior and the founder of environmental organisation Open Earth,take the group who all are Japanese expats came to Hong Kong , for the clean-up event. 

Selfless ]]> 2018-03-07 04:08:04 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993257 Annie https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993352 It is about the background of Suzuki and emphasise she really care about the environment of world.

kindhearted,high-minded

contract talks and organise board games]]> 2018-03-07 04:08:40 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238993352 Ms. Nee https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238994807 Vocabulary to describe the act of these Japanese people

]]> 2018-03-07 04:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238994807 U dun know me https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238994951 Eco-warriors]]> 2018-03-07 04:20:39 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238994951 https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238995626 2018-03-07 04:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238995626 Ms. Nee msnee_english https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997618 How can we or society promote more awareness of the problem of rubbish?]]> 2018-03-07 04:40:25 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997618 Loey https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997820   ]]> 2018-03-07 04:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997820 Emily L https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997821 2018-03-07 04:41:41 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997821 Eunice https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997940 2018-03-07 04:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997940 Icey and Zinnie https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997994 The school can show the video to student for education ,to show them how serious problems of rubbish]]> 2018-03-07 04:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/msnee_english/zshs71m9gxaf/wish/238997994