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         <title>REWRITE THE FOLLOWING SENTENCES</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Certain <strong>artificial </strong>food colorings and other additives can worsen hyperactive behaviors in children aged 3 to 9, UK researchers report. <strong>(deterioate)</strong>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>______________________________________________________________________________________________<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>2.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;These findings show that <strong>adverse </strong>effects are in children with extreme hyperactivity . It can be seen in the general population as well.<strong> ( not only but also)&nbsp;<br></strong><br></div><div>_______________________________________________________________________________________________<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>3.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Although the use of artificial coloring in food might seem <strong>superfluous</strong>, the same cannot be said for sodium benzoate, which has an important preservative function.&nbsp; <strong>(not possible)</strong>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>________________________________________________________________________________________________<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>4.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;The issue of whether food additives can affect children’s behavior has been controversial for decades. <strong>(have argued)<br></strong><br></div><div>_________________________________________________________________________________________________<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>5.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;We have found an adverse effect of food additives on the hyperactive behavior of 3-year-old and 8- to 9-year-old children. <strong>( has been discovered)</strong>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>_________________________________________________________________________________________________<br><br></div>]]></description>
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