Gabriel mendoza narrative writing unjut society by Jacinto Gabriel Mendoza https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8 This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC 2025-11-15 21:06:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926065 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926065 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926066 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926066 30 Basic Human Rights 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926068 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926068 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926069 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926069 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926070 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926070 Rough Draft 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926071 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926071 Final Draft 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926072 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926072 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926073 The point of view i thought was best was 3rd person because i want the readers to read from a narrative writer,reader.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926073 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926074 It would take place ina small village where people are controlled minute by minute .The people who live there where only allowed to eat at certain times and a very small amount there only also allowed to watch tv for 5 minutes each hour. they where only allowed to have 5 hours of sleep and if they even wake up a minute late they are punished by being put in a black box for a whole day with nothing. They where also allowed to use the restroom 3 times a day. The time setting would be about mid 2014 ,]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926074 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926075 Main character would be cindey buckets and she believes that the society is very wrong and she wants to stand up for what is right and she hates being controlled minute by minute.   antagonist are known as the minute men they walk around every house making sure everyone is obeying them and doing what they say each and every minute.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926075 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926076 The conflict is cindey vs the society and antagonist she sticks up for her slef a]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926076 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926077 The protaginist eventually realize what cindey was doind a saying was good and eventually the protaginist let who ever livew there followed by them making more houses.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926077 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926078 Cindey grows in this story by standing up for what she knew was right. The protagignist move forward by learning what they where doing was wrong]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926078 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926080 The most exciting moment was when cindey proved everybody wrong]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926080 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926082 That its not hard to prove your point and prove everyone wrong.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926082 Due Dates 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926083 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926083 Prompt 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926085 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926085 Theo's Song 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926086 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926086 Rubric 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926087 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926087 Point of View 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926088 The point of view is 3rd person because it makes more scince to tell it from a narriator.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926088 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926090 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926090 Characters 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926091 -community
Theo apprentance Blaacksmiths Authorities decider]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926091 Conflict 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926092 The decider assigned theo to be blacksmith when he wanted to be a song writer theo U.S society so they can control a lot more easier people.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926092 Plot: Sequential 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926093 Event #2:Blacksmiths are working in the smithy.
Event #1:Theo is taken from the nursery pod and is told his assignment.
Event #3:Neema explains why the government gives people miserable jobs.
Event #4: Theo begins to sing during work and is punished for rebeliating his assignment.
Event # (Climax):theo gets punished for singing by not being able to sing or talk.
Event #:Neema isa out raged at theos punishment and gets all the blacksmiths to sing and rebeliate.
Event #:Neema and all of the blacksmiths get punished but the song keeps breaking out.
Event #(Resolution): The government realized what they where doing was wrong and let them do what they wanted.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926093 Theme 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926094 The theme is that the author is trying to tell us to never give up to prove a point scince it right other people will help and eventually your point will be proved.]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926094 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926095 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/215926095 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000644 https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/217038814 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:44:38 UTC https://padlet.com/201000644/zrxypw3fwiv8/wish/217038814