YR6 Scene Description by Mr Lindgren

ilaria edmans

2013-01-11 14:50:46 UTC

you are scared

you walk along the path

then you turn around

you see a huge mounting,

a lusios patch of green grass

you walk forward towards

to what seems like a ocean

it looks cool and refreshing

you decide not to

you suddenly start to think

why are there no people

you walk coutiusly forward

trying to forget the eiree feeling

elizabeth morfitt

2013-01-11 14:50:49 UTC

a small world full of wonders where i feel as if something will come out.There is a sea of mystery.Tall rustly trees rustle as the strong wind blows.

you feel confused of why your there.

charlott clarke

2013-01-11 14:50:53 UTC

i do not know if i am dreaming i feel ok it is not that bad and HELP what shall i do i fink i need to get help

sonnie

2013-01-11 14:52:05 UTC

I feel like im deserted i can here harsh wind and light blue water there is a massive place but there is no one here there is a rusty brown and wooden boating dock but no boats the stairs are crocked and creaky! The water is a glistening blue.The doors are locked at every house i feel there are people in the dusty grey places.

rachel

2013-01-11 14:52:19 UTC

i feel really peacfull because i can here the betiful sea and the wind.i can see the trees moveing so carm and jently.

Rebecca

2013-01-11 14:52:35 UTC

a world like a never ending dream but a dream you can never wake up from were am i what a

lauren

2013-01-11 14:52:40 UTC

i can hear the waves crashing aganst the rocks.

i feel the green grass under my feet.

i can feel the cracs in the anch

charlotte t

2013-01-11 14:52:46 UTC

I feel alone as I walk swiftly through the deserted area.The water around me is smashing against the jagged rocks.The wind is as sharp as a pin against my face, and I feel trapped inside the towering trees around me.As I walk I hear the sound of birds singing

aidan

2013-01-11 14:52:50 UTC

I would feel unhappy and scared. I would not no what to do.the sea would berssing on my back.the swieling

????

2013-01-11 14:53:17 UTC

you are walking along everything is dark.you go to sleep and wake up, you are in a differnt world which is calm and peaceful.you can hear the crashing against the rocks.you enjoy the peace and quite but you are lonly and need someboady to talk to.you feel happy but lonly.

owen

2013-01-11 14:53:27 UTC

its windy

the wind is making me fly on a imaginary kite

i see a flying machine on a boat and get on it

then i land i am no were and deserted

then 50 ants try to get me so i sale away then i am so wher so i sing little owen walking down the street acrab jumped on to the boat so whilst i had the chance i ate it alive

elizabeth mm

2013-01-11 14:55:45 UTC

i feel wached as i walk over to the pool. i look down the couldness of the wind hits me in the face and blowes my hair back

chloe h

2013-01-11 15:04:15 UTC

The stormy waves crash against the rocks like a car crash and it smells fresh. But why am i the only person here? wheres all the food? am i going to starve? As i walk across the rocky shore i wonder who was here before me? I know that there i life on this island but where?