by penny dee

Penny's Stop Motion

pennydee_eastbu — 2015-06-02 09:47:43 UTC

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qbtz2SOZok8

Adam

2015-06-02 09:51:55 UTC

This is good! I like that it clearly took time and

effort to make as well as the duration, it lasted just

the right amount of time! To improve I would make

sure the camera is centered to avoid the use of warp

stabilisation :):)

cameronharris15 — 2015-06-02 09:54:54 UTC

A good idea that is well executed. It looks like a lot of time went into the creation of the animation. Like Adam pointed out you can tell it is

warp stabilised. Although the piece alongside the music was great.

Adrian

2015-06-02 09:55:22 UTC

Easy concept yet executed very well! It flows very smoothly and looks consistent. To improve it would be nice if the camera didn't pan from side to side

danielappleton9 — 2015-06-02 09:56:28 UTC

The idea is different and pulled off well, to improve it you could maybe change the backing music as I didn't think it fit in well.

2015-06-02 09:59:49 UTC

Really liked it, good idea i like the inspiration also, youve done it very well the animation is technically very good.

The camera movement is abit annoying and also a constant background lighting would be better, its abit distracting.

2015-06-02 10:00:34 UTC

simple idea but well made, the music is fitting and the idea is fairly origional

2015-06-02 10:08:06 UTC

Really nice video, very artsy. It reminded me of the

music video for Somebody I Used To Know. However, It may have been better if the subject

was lit better, a stabilised camera and some different music over the top.

sjholcroft1997 — 2015-06-02 10:15:34 UTC

The animation was very creative, I can see where your inspiration came from and how you tried to replicate that style in your own way, the music fitted the animation very well.

To improve I would suggest eliminating the background by using a dark backdrop and some lights.

djwhite11 — 2015-06-02 10:19:34 UTC

Great animation, looks very time consuming but

it does look like it paid off because its a superb animation

and the video goes smooth and not all over the place with

different camera angles.