7th grade writing feedback by 23Scohen https://padlet.com/23scohen/zpd0o5b3ka0s no welcome four u. read my pieces and give feedback or else en-us 2018-02-01 14:54:01 UTC 2018-03-28 15:03:31 UTC hello@padlet.com Research Simulation https://padlet.com/23scohen/zpd0o5b3ka0s/wish/236955828 Two things I liked about your piece were the hook and the closing sentence. The hook pulled the reader right in to the action of the piece and wasted no time explaining. The second thing I liked was the closing sentence, which almost rang in the readers head after reading it. The one thing I would approve on in this piece to to use more punctuation to make the piece flow better (and watch for spaces after parentheses). 

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 ]]> 2018-03-01 16:02:21 UTC https://padlet.com/23scohen/zpd0o5b3ka0s/wish/236989830 Vignette 23bvalente https://padlet.com/23scohen/zpd0o5b3ka0s/wish/237458802 Hey Sam, I read your vignette and it was great! I liked how you described you emotions in your story. I also liked how you described all of your dogs actions. Next time I would suggest checking over your grammar, there were a few errors. Overall, great story. 
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