IB-09_Writing Task 1: Maps by Academic ALI

KIMSVILLE

AcaAli — 2024-09-13 13:42:39 UTC

Academic structures with noun phrases

AcaAli — 2024-09-13 13:44:24 UTC

Verbs to describe changes

AcaAli — 2024-09-13 13:45:12 UTC

Noun forms

AcaAli — 2024-09-13 13:45:45 UTC

Outline

AcaAli — 2026-03-05 14:17:05 UTC

The city / become / modern / more facilities
Some trees / cut down

Dang Khanh

2026-03-05 14:18:30 UTC

The given two maps illustrate the developments and changes in the town of Kimsville since 2002.

Tra My

suri76664 — 2026-03-05 14:18:57 UTC

The maps illustrate the main changes in a ~~between the~~ 24-year period, from 2002 to today, in the Kimsville town.

Mai Anh

2026-03-05 14:19:28 UTC

The maps illustrate the difference of a town named Kimsville~~'s maps~~ between in 2002 and today

Dang Khanh

2026-03-05 14:20:00 UTC

In general, the town became more modern, with the addition of new facilities. Furthurmore, some trees were cut down to make way for some of these facilities.

Mai Anh

2026-03-05 14:22:02 UTC

Overall, it can be seen that ~~the city has cut down~~ some trees have been cut down ~~in each area and built~~ for more entertainment areas ~~area~~, such as a pub, a football stadium that make the city become ~~becomes~~ more modern.

Tra My

suri76664 — 2026-03-05 14:22:18 UTC

Generally, the city has experienced a modernization process ~~modern development~~, by ~~with~~ having more accommodation and transport facilities. However, some trees have been cut down during the progress.

tchi

2026-03-05 14:24:00 UTC

The given two maps show how the town of Kimsville has changed from 2002 to the present day.

tchi

2026-03-05 14:24:25 UTC

Overall, the town has become much more modernized and urbanized. Furthermore, most of the trees and industrial buildings have been replaced by new residential and commercial facilities.

Tuan Linh

tuanlinhnguyen593 — 2026-03-05 14:24:59 UTC

The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in the town of Kimsville between 2002 and now.

Dang Khanh

2026-03-05 14:25:36 UTC

The north side of the city has showed many changes. Firstly, trees have been cut down to build apartments. The trees on the north, however, still remained, along with the shopping center located in the north of the map. A major change has been introduced to Kimsville when the factory is now converted into a software company in the east. Meanwhile, in the west side, a new train station has been constructed.

Tuan Linh

tuanlinhnguyen593 — 2026-03-05 14:25:38 UTC

Overall, the town has experienced significant development and modernization. Several new facilities have been constructed, while some old buildings have been replaced or converted into different uses.

Minh Nguyen

2026-03-05 14:27:28 UTC

The maps illustrate the differences in Kimsville between ~~two time periods in Kimsville, from~~ 2002 to and the present day.

Mai Anh

2026-03-05 14:31:12 UTC

To the north of the city, ~~Looking at~~ ~~the~~ ~~two maps~~, ~~it's easy to see that~~ there has been a replacement of tree area into new apartment blocks at the northern corner. ~~side to house more residents of the city~~. Similarly, the trees ~~in 2000 tree area~~ at the southern side, next to the old cinema have ~~has been cut down and~~ ~~now it has~~ transformed into football stadium. The government has also set up a new train station in the empty area on at the west side of the city ~~to meet travel's need.~~

Tra My

suri76664 — 2026-03-05 14:33:32 UTC

In ~~According to~~ the northern area, the industrial zone has been transformed into a software company, with new buildings. Another striking change is that there has been an erection of the new train station on the west side of the city centre. Moreover, some ~~portions~~ of the trees have been pulled down to make way for an accommodation complex, attracting more residents. However, the shopping facility has not altered since 2002.

Dang Khanh

2026-03-05 14:33:33 UTC

There have been two main changes in the southern part of the city. First of all, the old cinema has beenconverted into a pub. Next, the trees located on the south-west side of the map were cut down to build a new football stadium.

Tuan Linh

tuanlinhnguyen593 — 2026-03-05 14:42:31 UTC

In 2002, the city centre was surrounded by a few facilities. To the north of the city centre, there was a shopping centre, with trees located on both sides. On the eastern side of the city centre stood a factory, while an old cinema was situated to the south. Apart from these buildings, the town contained a number of green areas with trees.

Trà My

suri76664 — 2026-03-12 13:00:48 UTC

Turning to the southern grounds of Kimsville, the old cinema, which was at the bottom of the city centre, has turned into a pub. Furthermore, the addition of a new football stadium has led to the removal of several more trees.