Revising by Bernice Tengco https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc en-us 2022-06-30 07:03:46 UTC 2022-06-30 08:29:17 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f9d0.png What/How is the MOST effective way for Rose to combine sentences 3 and 4? tengcobernice2 https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234075351 2022-06-30 07:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234075351 Sentence 8 lacks clarity. What is the MOST effective change Rose can make to improve the clarity of this sentence? tengcobernice2 https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234075651 2022-06-30 07:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234075651 If sentence 13 is changed to this sentence, "Taking a martial arts class will certainly help someone get in better shape physically, but that’s not the only benefit. " Does it make it better? Why or why not? tengcobernice2 https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234076211 2022-06-30 07:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234076211 Which word would be a more precise word to use than really in sentence 21? tengcobernice2 https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234076475 2022-06-30 07:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234076475 Which sentence in the fifth paragraph (sentences 24–28) can be removed? Why? tengcobernice2 https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234076820 2022-06-30 07:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234076820 How can Rose improve her concussion in sentence 31? (Hint: Adding a question) tengcobernice2 https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234077262 2022-06-30 07:13:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tengcobernice2/zp3mk5rerzd5vegc/wish/2234077262