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         <title>Diyaeddine</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1) My first goal i want to stay and talk about one topic.<br><br><br>2) My second goal I have to explain the topic more.<br><br><br>3) My third goal i need to add more transition words</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:36:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jesus Veliz </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. I would like to fix my grammar. &nbsp;<br><br>2. I would like to write more because I feel like I don't write as much when it comes to essay's&nbsp;<br><br>3. Learning how to add more details </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:36:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Temur Makhmudov</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong><mark>My three writings goals are:<br></mark></strong><br><strong><em><mark>- My first goal that I need to work on is to add a hook to make the reader interested at the beginning of the paragraph.<br><br>- My second goal is to make my grammar better to make the reader clearly understand the project.&nbsp;<br><br>- My third goal is to summarize the essay better.</mark></em></strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:37:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Parviz Udaydulloev</title>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:37:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cruz Jerome </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>my 3 writing goals;<br>&nbsp;1) work on my grammar and the way I write things<br>&nbsp;2) to use transition words&nbsp;<br>3) to add more details to my writing .</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:37:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Willine Saget | 8-324 </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>My three writing goals are :</strong><br>- using more vocabulary words and have better grammar.<br>- Focus on the topic and not getting off-task.<br>-Giving more background information and give more details.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:37:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Nushofarin Khalilova</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong><mark>My three writing goals:</mark></strong><br><strong><em><mark>- I would like to have better grammar.</mark></em></strong><br><em><br></em><strong><em><mark>- I would to have high level synonyms.</mark></em></strong><br><em><mark><br></mark></em><strong><em><mark>- I would like to work to learn how to find better evidence.</mark></em></strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:37:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Doniyorbek Saidov</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/brizard4/zoxsm5kuhfmfal2w/wish/1781618163</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>My 3 writing goals:<br><br>-I would like to increase my writing.<br><br>-I would also like to write more because I think what I’m writing is not much.<br><br>- My writing does not make sense so I would make it more specific and clear.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:38:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lola Khayitkulova </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>- One goal I have while writing is getting better at checking my grammar on my own instead of using apps, such as Grammarly.<br>- Another goal I have is staying on topic instead of going into a whole other theme.<br>- I would also like to improve getting better at conveying the message I am trying to present to my readers. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:38:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Evan Leung</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>My three writing goals are too:<br><br>-Have better grammar/spelling punctuations so the reader can read and understand properly.<br><br>-Adding more transitions more so the reader can be interested to seeing more<br><br>-Being better at finding evidence so the reader knows and gets what the whole essay is about<br><br>&nbsp;&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:39:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Muneeb Rehman</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/brizard4/zoxsm5kuhfmfal2w/wish/1781621183</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>3 things that I would like to work are:<br>1) I would like to explain my evidence in every paragraph without any problem.<br>2) I would also like to work on my writing and enhance my writing.<br>3) Also I would like to work on my essay knowledge about essay type, and to use RACECER without any difficulties.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:39:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Peloutche Ducasse </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>what are my writing goals?&nbsp;<br>1. I want to organize my writing.<br>2. I want to focus on one topic.&nbsp;<br>3. i want to give more details when im writing a essay be more specific.<br><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:39:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Egor  Mikhaylov 8-324</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>List of 3 things about my goals:<br><br>1. Being more specific, explain my essay correctly.<br><br>2. Providing more evidences, examples, use RACECER.<br><br>3. Write all steps organized, providing more sentences in my body paragraphs.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:40:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chase Benton</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/brizard4/zoxsm5kuhfmfal2w/wish/1781626977</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>3 writing goals:<br>-More descriptive words&nbsp;<br>-Follow the directions&nbsp;<br>-Take my time</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:40:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Shan Amjad </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/brizard4/zoxsm5kuhfmfal2w/wish/1781627136</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What are 3 writing goals?<br>- I have to get better grammar.<br>- I have to explain it more.&nbsp;<br>- I have to write more transition words.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:40:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gaelle Boucicaut </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/brizard4/zoxsm5kuhfmfal2w/wish/1781629366</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>3 goals that i would like to work on for my writing:&nbsp;<br><br>- Adding more background information and try to get the readers hooked when writing my introduction.<br><br>- To get better at writing stronger conclusions because i tend to get lazy when writing conclusions.<br><br>- Using more transition words.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:41:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alana Williams </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Goal 1: make my handwriting better&nbsp;<br>Goal 2:&nbsp;make complete sentences <br>Goal 3: &nbsp;change my grammar </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:41:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Parviz Ubaydulloev</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/brizard4/zoxsm5kuhfmfal2w/wish/1781632856</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>My three writing goals is:<br>-I want to give the reader better.<br><br>-I want to add more details.<br><br>-I want to organize my details and ideas property.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:42:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Natacy Bryant</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>My 3 writing goals<br><br>- Add more details&nbsp;<br><br>- using more vocabulary words&nbsp;<br><br>- better grammar </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:42:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jessica Cothias </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>3 Goals that i have is : I need to add more transition words and not only use one word over and over again.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Another goal that i have is i need to put my details in order so it won't be confusing and sloppy and a hot mess.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<br><br>        My last goal is to end off my essay with better and big vocabulary words.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:43:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Josee Henry</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>my 3 writing goals:&nbsp;<br>- to do better at finding evidence to support my claim.<br>-to have better grammar and use more vivid vocabulary words.<br>- to be more organized with my writing.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:46:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aminabonu Shavkatova </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/brizard4/zoxsm5kuhfmfal2w/wish/1781649957</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What are my 3 writing goals:<br><br>-My first writing goal is to be more specific and to add more details.<br><br>-My second writing goal is to make the reader have a better/clear understanding.<br><br>-My third writing goal is to not repeat a sentence and to use more vocabulary.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:46:48 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Felix Luigi Allen</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>My 3 writing goal is to write more words in essays ,and have good pronunciation, and, follow the essay rules. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:50:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jeanscah Gabriel</title>
         <author>jeanscahg</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>3 Writing Goals I would Like To Accomplish:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br>* To develop more topics for my essay.<br><br>* To have better English grammar.<br><br>*To define my strength and weakness. &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-09-30 14:52:59 UTC</pubDate>
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