https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr Made with whimsy en-us 2018-04-24 14:37:23 UTC 2018-05-22 14:45:17 UTC hello@padlet.com evanskat000 https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255679949 Full of turtles, River dolphins, and over 1,500 species of fish. You don't want to swim in there because there are also some alligators and piranhas. The water looks a little dirty and green and brown.]]> 2018-04-26 14:54:35 UTC https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255679949 evanskat000 https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255683051 Transportation is kind of hard in the amazon. The way we get across the waters is a boat. Fish are commonly caught on the boat and sold. Most common fish are Water Fish and Cat Fish.]]> 2018-04-26 14:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255683051 evanskat000 https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255684945 The rivers are called white-water rivers. The heavy loads of sediment they carry into the amazon make the water light colored.]]> 2018-04-26 15:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255684945 evanskat000 https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255693809 Many rain forests in the world are filled with ants, termites, flies, and many other insects and bugs. Predators hunt at night because of the weather conditions and they are less likely to see there enemies. ]]> 2018-04-26 15:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/255693809 evanskat000 https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/257288900 Oliver Coomes states that the Amazon has a average rainfall of 60 to 175 inches. The Amazon is wet and humid. There are lots of plants and trees everywhere you go. This source is helpful because it helps me know what the Amazon is like and what conditions/features we need to have in the backpack.]]> 2018-05-02 15:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/257288900 evanskat000 https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/258064905 The valet X3 Backpack was designed for lots of storage options and a place for filtered water. When it comes to needing space, this Backpack has so many storage units for anything you want or need. It also has Pockets for your water and your filter. This backpack needs these atributes because you want your backpack to be powerful and hold heavy loads including all the things you need. An awesome feature about the backpack is, it has straps so that you can strap it on your waist and it won't fall off. The straps are also ajustable. In the inside of the backpack the material is soft so that your apparatus won't get hurt or ruined. This backpack has dependable features that will meet all of your needs when your out in the amazon.]]> 2018-05-04 15:05:14 UTC https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/258064905 mstrock https://padlet.com/evanskat000/zkyn0pn3ozjr/wish/262561261 Revise your paragraph in the following ways:
 
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