https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj Leave suggestion for me here en-us 2022-01-31 14:56:28 UTC 2022-04-11 16:23:13 UTC hello@padlet.com 27cbirck https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2023432957 I really enjoyed your essay, as it is a very big problem in schools that children are sleep deprived.  It was a powerful topic that you chose, and your paragraphs made it even better.  The paragraph about kids mental health trying to get to sleep was very well-written, and you put a lot of good points.  I really enjoyed your concluding sentence.  (“So please consider helping this society of students and change a few lives with a few more hours of sleep.”). It was a very great way to end off your essay!  My only wish for your essay was a few grammar mistakes, here and there but that’s it.
Keep up the good work.
From your bestie,
Caitlin 🔆]]> 2022-02-01 14:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2023432957 https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2023515683 Max your writing piece was very relatable. Your word choice (as always) was amazing. Students need sleep, its important for everyone’s mental health, and sleeping is just better than anything else anyway. Your data was very strong and so was your warrants. A wish I have is nothing, it was perfect. - your aquantaince ]]> 2022-02-01 15:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2023515683 27bcardenas https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2027946915 Hi max its moi. I loved your piece, and I think that your essay was a really important topic. Anywho, my first ⭐️  Was how much research was in your essay. It made it easy to look at the warrant and understand what it was explaining. My other 🌟 was your intro. I really liked your intro because it was something that i could actually relate to. I dont have any wishes :))))

]]> 2022-02-03 17:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2027946915 Haidyn_B https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2088400728 Um, hi. It’s Haidyn. I really liked your Buy My Project slideshow. Although i never got to see your presentation i heard it was ✨yummy✨. Anyways, this is a very good design and i would definitely buy the SweetBox. Thsi should be an actual product! Ok, arrivederci,

Haidyn ]]> 2022-03-10 14:10:23 UTC https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2088400728 https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2088526521 Hello! This is my two stars and one wish for your Buy My Product protect. my stars for you were that it was filled with pictures i also loved how you used bullet points to try to make it not wordy. But my wish is that there was a lot of bullet points in one slide and it looked like a huge wall of word’s my suggestion is to minimize some bullet points. Anyways overall i think that your presentation was great even though i didn't get to see it.]]> 2022-03-10 15:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2088526521 27mhastrup https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2088803123 Hiiii I really liked your presentation! I loved your set up and the photos on the slide, they made me really hungry which made me want to buy your product! I liked how you were able to get straight to the point, which helped the flow of your presentation. I just thought it was a bit wordy.]]> 2022-03-10 17:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2088803123 27bcardenas https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2139449510 One of my stars was the topic of your article. I like the idea that you shone a light on a topic that mattered, and it showed us that not all of the poisonous flowers are dangerous. My other star was the format of the article, and it made it easy to read. No wishes :) ]]> 2022-04-11 16:23:13 UTC https://padlet.com/27mbickford/zk8d08bmowfbk4jj/wish/2139449510