Discussion by Katlea Fitriani https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7 Write a paragraph about the video en-us 2018-09-12 03:26:25 UTC 2021-07-12 06:49:57 UTC hello@padlet.com katleafitriani https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368421591 What do you think about this paragraph?]]> 2019-06-20 03:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368421591 katleafitriani https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368421991 #1]]> 2019-06-20 04:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368421991 katleafitriani https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368421999  
The Indonesian film industry has a positive impact where the investment provided makes the development better  to watch is convenient movies and expanding its branches. People interested movies increased significantly after the cinema made better improvements every year to compete based cinemas. The increase is the impact and international films shown. The presence hollywood film can improve the quality and even compete. There are many lessons taken, The large number are watch local film more much  now because the quality. 

]]> 2019-06-20 04:03:01 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368421999 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368434976 Cinema industries may be threatened by netflix]]> 2019-06-20 06:25:03 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368434976 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435166 I think the concluding sentence is not that clear , and i do not think that the investment from foreign company is always have a positive impact]]> 2019-06-20 06:26:54 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435166 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435326 The ending of the paragraph isn’t too connected with the content ]]> 2019-06-20 06:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435326 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435385 i think the impact was right, it brings indonesia to the next level of economic society against others country in ASEAN.]]> 2019-06-20 06:29:07 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435385 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435444 The article did not have a valid data]]> 2019-06-20 06:29:48 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435444 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435534 The foreign investment makes indonesian movie industry rise again]]> 2019-06-20 06:30:41 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435534 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435610 "The impact and international films are shown" sentence can not be understood]]> 2019-06-20 06:31:17 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435610 cdkarbol https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435649 I think the body on that paragraph may possibly be not clear enough. What impact was made? It is just international film shown or local film too?]]> 2019-06-20 06:31:45 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435649 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435687 I think the paragraph would be better if the writer included number of data to support argument]]> 2019-06-20 06:32:04 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435687 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435719 Too many biases in one paragraph]]> 2019-06-20 06:32:22 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435719 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435722 The quality doesnt make the local film have a large views, but if the film have a good topic it will interest every one]]> 2019-06-20 06:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435722 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435769 I think the presence of Hollywood films does not mean improving quality]]> 2019-06-20 06:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435769 https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435901 the relationship between the end of the paragraph and the core is not appropriate]]> 2019-06-20 06:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/katleafitriani/zjwg1wur2lo7/wish/368435901