https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02 What did you notice about the stories you read? What did you like? What did the author do well? en-us 2017-10-19 11:52:57 UTC 2017-10-27 14:43:39 UTC hello@padlet.com tclay https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682483 The title of this story really hooked me and made me want to read more. I could immediately connect to the piece because of the well-chosen title.]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682483 colomar1 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682491 I liked all the writer tricks she or he used in there story.  They used some show not tell, and I like how they used it more than once.  I also liked how the story made you think a little bit.  Sometimes they made something sound like something different from what it actually Is. 

]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:10 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682491 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682541 I liked how at the end it was showing her learn from her mistakes and this made a theme]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682541 kroekel https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682542 I liked it because there were many good words, and a lot of writers tricks. for example in paragraph 4  "It said her skin as smooth as baby skin."  Or in paragraph 3 "flashlights are spotlights"

]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682542 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682550 Their are a lot of writers tricks. The diolog was balanced.]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682550 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682596 The end of the story was a good ending to wrap up the story. Also the dialog was good because she used it throughout the story. The simile she used good comparisons. The theme of the story was well written. She showed what was happening instead of telling. The title of the story was well named.]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682596 chridav https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682618 I liked the story because their was a lot of dialog in it. And there was some good words.]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682618 padgril https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682664 I liked all of the writers tricks the author included. The words were so descriptive I felt like I was there. The one who lost the gecko. The dialogue made the story more exciting to read.]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682664 borgann https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682682 I really liked how she/he used amazing adjectives. When she wrote ''My mom and sister scurried downstairs''
She could have said ran downstairs, but scurried is a better adjective.]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682682 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682765 their are a lot of writers tricks and their was a little bit of diolog  ]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682765 bennava https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682877 I liked the authors writing tools and how they used punctuation. I also liked how they standed out by saying EMMA'S GONE! this really pulled me in.I also liked how he used righter tricks.

]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682877 leonjac https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682912 There was such great dialog and great writers tricks. I can connect to the story because my cat ran away for a couple days and we all worried till we found her. One my favorite writers trick was "I found her , I found Emma." Which is repetition for affect.]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682912 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682987 This story had a lot of writers tricks and did well at showing and not telling. The title also got my attention. It also had a lot of very descriptive words that described the situation perfectly. It also had dialogue. That got my eye immediately. It was overall a good story with writers tricks, descriptive words, and dialogue.

]]> 2017-10-19 14:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198682987 MikeWazowski69 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683179 There was really good dialog, There also was a lot of emotion. In a way.... The  author showed how the people felt and It is a really good book.]]> 2017-10-19 14:24:15 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683179 roseril https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683224 i liked it because there were a lot of writers tricks

]]> 2017-10-19 14:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683224 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683244 I liked the story because it made you think think something is going to happen even though you might not be right. For example, "Emma's gone!" I yelled at my mom. I thought that Emma was a baby not a gecko.]]> 2017-10-19 14:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683244 luecjac https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683307 The author used a lot of writers tricks and dialogue to make this story interesting. ]]> 2017-10-19 14:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683307 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683403 this story started with cool words like, "the waves washed up to my feet like a wall."]]> 2017-10-19 14:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683403 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683475 this story was really interesting I can kind of relate to the revealers because they been going through some pretty tough times. I was really hooked when she stared the book it was different. but also there was a lot of righters tricks which makes this even more impressive I LOVE THIS passage. ]]> 2017-10-19 14:24:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683475 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683766 They used a lot of action.  They used good detail and punctuation.

]]> 2017-10-19 14:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683766 greejos https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683808 I liked how a lot of the writers used dialogue in there writing it really helps drag the reader in.

]]> 2017-10-19 14:25:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198683808 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198684163 I like how there are a lot of writers tricks, and the title really brought my attention. I liked how there was a lot of  good emotions too. This story could be really relate able to some people, because a lot of people probably loose there pets. Like this one time I lost my fish, but then I found it in the garage. ]]> 2017-10-19 14:25:57 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198684163 gradmak https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198694010 i like the dog story because he knows that the dog didn't do anything. he did it. he told the dog what to do and i think that is brave to say.]]> 2017-10-19 14:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198694010 mcinrie https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198698872 2017-10-19 14:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/198698872 https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/201222828 2017-10-27 14:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/zjmuc4v74e02/wish/201222828