Equality by Mr. F. Leo Craven III https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality The dangers of everyone being equal en-us 2016-10-28 16:35:56 UTC 2025-11-06 15:24:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Balance.png leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/133948251 2016-10-28 16:39:50 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/133948251 leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/133948367 2016-10-28 16:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/133948367 leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/133948810 2016-10-28 16:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/133948810 leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134532732 2016-11-01 16:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134532732 leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134717161 2016-11-02 11:09:26 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134717161 leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134725920 2016-11-02 11:50:53 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134725920 leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134726026 2016-11-02 11:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/134726026 The Case Against Perfection leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/135032418 2016-11-03 11:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/135032418 Harrison Bergeron Intro example leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/136354497 2016-11-09 11:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/136354497 Harrison Bergeron Body Paragraph  leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/136354556 2016-11-09 11:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/136354556 Craven's General Notes leo_craven https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/136354700 If you can say it in less, do so!
full name of author.  From then on, Last Name!!! you ain't pals!
get rid of personal pronouns:
instead of we, the audience!
Intros: most are missing the SO OWHAT/WHO CARES?  or the G of FIG.  Don't stress, this is the hardest part.
Intros and Topic Sentences: the strategy/device you mention in the intro should be the one you discuss in the body paragraph.
Don't just refer/throw in quotes; you must set them up!
Commas and non-essential clauses used in the introduction of the author and title]]> 2016-11-09 11:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/leo_craven/apcravenequality/wish/136354700