Pre-Writing - 2º Medio (29/9) by Italo Cornejo

1. Brainstorm - Mind Map

italocornejo1 — 2020-09-23 00:10:18 UTC

2. Brainstorm - Example

italocornejo1 — 2020-09-23 00:16:08 UTC

Student name

italocornejo1 — 2020-09-23 00:17:08 UTC

Topic:

Controversy:

Stance:

Sources

4. Writing Stage - Example

italocornejo1 — 2020-09-23 01:12:02 UTC

2020-09-29 13:20:29 UTC

Diego Santibañez
Martina Zuñiga
Diana Perez

2020-09-29 13:20:42 UTC

Lucas Maldonado soto

Topic: inteligencia artificial, privacidad.

Controversia: 1- hay dos posturas esenciales relacionados con el tema de la inteligencia artificial, una es que la que está forma de inteligencia pueda dominar el mundo y otra que dice que puede ser un gran avance en la ayuda y análisis de la vida cotidiana.

Postura: mi postura en este tema, yo estoy a favor de la inteligencia artificial siempre y cuando esta se mantenga controlada, ya que si este tipo de inteligencia funcion seria un gran avance en la tecnología.

gabriela

2020-09-29 13:20:42 UTC

topic: la tecnología es buena
controversial; es controversial, ya que algunas personas dicen que es mala, porque hace que las personas no son comuniquen, pero yo creo que es buena, porque la tecnología, ciencia han podido terminar con enfermedades.

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2020-09-29 13:23:07 UTC

2020-09-29 13:23:15 UTC

Loretto Sennas
TOPIC: positive effects of technology.
CONTROVERSIAL: There are people who think that technology is harmful because it deteriorates what makes us human, but there also some who think that it is a positive advance for medicine since in many cases lengthens human life.
STANCE: I think that you always have to see the positive side of technology, since all the achievement as humanity have been made by technology, such as fire, electricity, medicine and means of transport, things that have solved our lives.

tomas leiva

2020-09-29 13:24:04 UTC

TOPIC:Social networks in children and adolecents.

CONTROVERSY:There are people who think that social networks in children is harmful and for others it is not, as well as adolescents since by not having control over social networks it can be used in a bad way and | or form a conflict.

STANCE:Against because social networks at a very young age can be harmful to the integrity of the child | a, and for adolescents it is also harmful since it can cause conflicts.

alexis orozco

2020-09-29 13:31:12 UTC

topic:misuse of social networks

controversy:The subject is controversy since there is a person who misuses it by harassing people by bulling on the internet, so I feel that the subject is controversy
stance:I am against it because misuse can cause the other person to feel bad, that is why I am against it, it costs nothing to occupy social networks without doing anything that annoys bad

sources: https://psicopedia.org/2551/el-ciberbullying-es-peligroso-que-deben-saber-los-padres/

avanguardia.com/vida/20170504/422278489168/experto-asegura-que-el-ciberbullying-se-crea-por-un-problema-de-educacion-al-mirar-a-otro-lado-los-adultos.html

https://elderecho.com/educacion-advierte-de-que-el-ciberbullying-es-mas-peligroso-que-el-bullying

Martin Santander

2020-09-29 13:35:17 UTC

Topic: avances tecnológicos.
Controversy: el tema de los avances tecnológicos es muy controversial porque hay mucha gente que piensa que la tecnología nos a separado pero la gente se olvida que por ejemplo gracias a la tecnología hoy en día podemos trabajar desde la casa por que hay una pandemia y no mucha gente no puede salir a trabajar y tiene que trabajar desde sus casas y sin la tecnología no seria posible.
stance: mi postura es a favor de la tecnologia porque nos a beneficiado de muchas maneras como este añoo en la pandemia que estamos viviendo y podemos trabajar o tener clases de nuestras casas y nos a facilitado la vida en muchas mas cosas.
sources: las fuentes en las que yo investigue fueron: MIT y aetecno.

matilde

2020-09-29 13:44:54 UTC

topic: la tecnología es buena y mala
controversial: esto se considera controversial porque algunas personas dicen que es buena y mala.
postura: yo creo que es buena y mala. Buena, porque permite comunicarte con tus familiares que están lejos de tí, y también creo que es mala porque puede existir gente mala que se hace pasar por un familiar tuyo y sacarte información

italocornejo1 — 2020-10-06 13:16:27 UTC

Leonardo Campos

2020-10-06 13:16:40 UTC

Topic: The influence of technology for children
Controversial: There are diagnoses of attention deficit hyperactivity disorder, autism, coordination, disorder, developmental dilays, unintelligible speech, learning difficulties, sensory prossesing disorder, anxiety, depression, and sleep disorders associated with excessive use of technologies.
Stance: Well my position on the subject is somewhat neutral because the influence of technology for children has both advantages and disavantages, on the one hand it is good, because on a cell phone for example there are games to learn colors or something similar, but also it's bad because they almost always addicted to a video game, for example, and forget their homework, or for example, on a cell phone, they start cyberbullying other children
Sources: https://www.huffingtonpost.es/cris-rowan/influencia-de-la-tecnologia-ninos_b_4043967.html

Danae Jerez

2020-10-07 12:53:22 UTC

Topic: Positive and negative aspects of technology.
Controversy: Technology offers us endless experiences and benefits, such as long distance communication, also to be able to work from home or at the same job and also as entertainment and distraction. Although it has its benefits, it can be very controversial, since it also has side effects when making a lot of use of it, (headaches, eye problems, stress, etc.) to avoid it you have to know how to use it responsibly.
Stance: My position on this issue is completely neutral, if technology can be a benefit for society, it is also proven that it can harm us especially our mental, physical and psychological health. I consider it to be a double-edged sword.
Sources: I did not remove this information from any page, I did it from basic knowledge and experiences that I had regarding the subject. I only opened one page, but I didn't use it much.

https://www.lifeder.com/aspectos-positivos-negativos-tecnologia/

Diana Perez Leiva

2020-10-07 21:53:26 UTC

TOPIC: how technology (cell phones) influences young people.
CONTROVERSY: this is controversial because there are different opinions as there are people who say it influences in a good way and others who say it in a bad way.
STANCE: I think that technology in young people such as cell phones, etc., I think it is wrong since many misuse it in social networks such as when harassment happens and things like that also that young people today are so attached to the telephone that without He does not know what to do (it does not happen to me), the telephone makes us more lazy because we do not occupy the mind and we occupy the telephone with internet and it can be used for everything and within all that it makes us more stupid, but it depends on the person also because there are people who use it to good use

vicente caberon

2020-10-08 17:06:17 UTC

topic: the influence of tecnology in children.

controversial:
that children occupy technology is good and I rely on my experiences and my environment to say it and technology can, obviously if you do not abuse it, develop different qualities, such as

1. Technology enables creativity and freedom of expression

2. Technology helps socialization and relationship building

3. Technology enables independence and empowerment

4. Technology improves problem solving and perseverance

5. Technology helps instill an entrepreneurial spirit

6. Technology improves learning

7. Tech jobs are (and will be) in high demand

(If you want to read all the information about this visit this page)

source: https://www.idtech.com/blog/benefits-of-technology-for-children

María Paz Ortíz

2020-10-12 20:12:49 UTC

topic: la influencia de las redes sociales

controversial: se dice que en las redes sociales influyen desconectando a la gente del mundo exterior, pero a la vez sirven para informarse

postura: yo estoy a favor de las redes sociales, ya que, sirven para poder comunicarnos con nuestros amigos y familiares, sobre todo ahora, que nos encontramos en cuarentena y no nos podemos juntar, también nos ayuda a informarnos sobre lo que sucede en nuestro pais o en el mundo,

Final Project - Leonardo Campos

2020-10-13 13:22:43 UTC

Topic Sentence: I believe that the influence of technology on children has its advantages and disadvantages.

Supporting Sentence 1:On the one hand, it is good because there are apps that reinforce family connection with their relatives.

Supporting Sentences 2: On the other hand, children can generate an addiction to video games when they use it most of the day, which can affect both academic performance, attention and produce sedentary lifestyle.
Supporting Sentences 3: When children play video games, they develop several things such as improving response capacity or developing creativity, attention and visual attention, but when playing video games excessively, problems such as neuronal damage, obesity or poor academic performance can arise.

Closing sentence: In order to finish and based on my arguments I can say that technology in children can be very beneficial, but if it is used in excess, it can has several disadvantages

final project- alexis orozco

2020-10-13 13:28:08 UTC

Topic sentence: I am against the misuse of social networks because they can cause damage to other people.

Supporting sentence 1:

Supporting sentence 2:

Supporting sentence 3:

final Project- Martin santander

2020-10-13 13:34:41 UTC

topic sentence:
For me, technology has been very good for the human being since it has facilitated life in a very good way and has helped us in infinite ways.

Final Project-María paz Ortíz

2020-10-20 12:32:50 UTC

topic sentence: In my opinion the social networks is a mean of communication that benefits all 0people.

Supporting sentence 1: It is a quick way of communicating with our family or friends that are far or close to us, giving the possibility to share photos or publications.

Supporting sentence 2: It is a way of spreading information either for a celebriry, video game, serie, movie, anime, business, among other things.

Supporting sentence 3: it is from great help to the time from contrac personal, so much for spread offers from job as for find people talent

Final Project-Danae Jerez

2020-10-22 14:20:52 UTC

Topic sentence: In my opinion, I think that technology can be a benefit as well as something that hurts us.

Supporting sentence 1: Technology has made great strides to be able to communicate with people over long distances.

Supporting sentence 2: The abuse of the use of technology can harm us in a way that can cause multiple damage to our body.

Supporting sentence 3: Advances in technology can be very useful in the area of medicine, since new medicines can be made, cures for diseases can be found and health problems can be identified immediately.

2020-10-27 13:24:02 UTC

Final project- Loretto Sennas
Topic sentence: in my opinion I think that all progress is good for the humanity, I think it is a way of finding how to make our life and the life that surrounds us more sustainable.

Lucas Maldonado

2020-10-27 13:30:21 UTC

Topic sentence: Artificial intelligence.

Controversy: a grou of the people fear the artificial intelligence dominate the world, because another group of the people believe is a progres in the tecnologien and a great help for the progres of the humanity.

Stance

Tomas leiva

2020-11-05 20:55:36 UTC

Topic sentence: In my opinion, I believe that everything that helps us improve our generation is good, and all progress helps us to face life, day to day.

Technology in my opinion is a benefit since it makes things easier.

Supporting
Sentence 1: technology has made great advances, such as being able to communicate with people at a distance, through a video call, message, etc.

Final project- Kiara Vásquez

2020-11-12 20:14:12 UTC

Topic sentence: I believe that currently technology has had such a negative impact on our society, but it has become an indispensable resource for day to day. After all, it is one of the engines in our community and its effects depend on how we use it

Suporting sentence 1: one of the positive effects is the improvement in the quality of life, since tools have been created that improve aspects such as health or commerce, which are really beneficial

Suporting sentence 2: On the other hand, there are the negative effects, one of them is dependency or disorders. The integration of new devices has created or modified behaviors in humans, such as addiction to social networks or video games.

Suporting sentence 3: Finally, another positive effect, derived from the first, is how technology helps to improve the quality of education, since it allows greater access to information and provides both the teacher and the student with a greater number of tools.

2020-11-13 04:45:26 UTC

more_horiz Icono Pre-Writing - 2º Medio (29/9) Avatar de Italo Cornejo Italo Cornejo + 16 ● 8h Final project- Kiara Vásquez Final project- Kiara Vásquez Topic sentence: I believe that currently technology has had such a negative impact on our society, but it has become an indispensable resource for day to day. After all, it is one of the engines in our community and its effects depend on how we use it Suporting sentence 1: one of the positive effects is the improvement in the quality of life, since tools have been created that improve aspects such as health or commerce, which are really beneficial Suporting sentence 2: On the other hand, there are the negative effects, one of them is dependency or disorders. The integration of new devices has created or modified behaviors in humans, such as addiction to social networks or video games. Suporting sentence 3: Finally, another positive effect, derived from the first, is how technology helps to improve the quality of education, since it allows greater access to information and provides both the teacher and the student with a greater number of tools. Tomas leiva Tomas leiva Topic sentence: In my opinion, I believe that everything that helps us improve our generation is good, and all progress helps us to face life, day to day. Technology in my opinion is a benefit since it makes things easier. Supporting Sentence 1: technology has made great advances, such as being able to communicate with people at a distance, through a video call, message, etc. Lucas Maldonado Lucas Maldonado Topic sentence: Artificial intelligence. Controversy: a grou of the people fear the artificial intelligence dominate the world, because another group of the people believe is a progres in the tecnologien and a great help for the progres of the humanity. Stance Final pr Final project- Loretto Sennas

Lucas Maldonado Soto

lucasmatiasmaldonadosototucon — 2020-11-16 15:08:43 UTC

Topic sentence: Artificial intelligence.

Controversy: A group of people fear that artificial intelligence will rule the world or generate unemployment and its cost will be very high. But another group of people believe that it is an advance in technology, it is more precise and it would be of great help for the progress of humanity.

Stance: I think artificial intelligence is good, as long as it is kept under control, as this type of intelligence would represent a great technological advance and in the future it could help us with daily tasks, constructions and measurements.

http://kaizennetworks.es/inteligencia-artificial-ventajas-y-desventajas/

https://www.tokioschool.com/noticias/inteligencia-artificial-ventajas-desventajas-actualidad/

Final proyect: Diego Gutiérrez

2020-11-18 19:51:40 UTC

2020-12-21 17:42:19 UTC

Supporting sentence 1: