USO Paper, Reuse or Replace by Winter OBrien

USO Paper, Reuse or Replace by Winter OBrien https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a Made with an open mind en-us 2018-05-15 15:54:00 UTC 2023-04-04 23:56:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Xmastree.png 3 Assumptions wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/260911518 1. political views have had a strong weight in the environmental discussion in our country
2. there are two sides to the environmental debate and these sides often argue over different things entirely ie. pro life/choice debate
3. the environmental problem is the gateway and or important off-shot to a lot of other issues such as racism and classism]]> 2018-05-15 16:06:08 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/260911518 3 questions wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/260911742 1. why is there seemingly a larger lack of care for the environment from the right wing, or if not why am i making this assumption ?
2. are movements such as the sustainable living movement impactful and there for important?
3. are companies, such as Patagonia, who take a stand for the environment the only way to combat the corporate destruction of our natural world? ]]> 2018-05-15 16:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/260911742 What I'm researching and why wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/260912384 I want to look in how the US has created and destroyed national parks and how this has created such responses such as the sustainable living movement, the environmental movement, and the creation of Greenpeace. I also want to look into how this cycle of creation and destruction has ]]> 2018-05-15 16:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/260912384 Background on Sustainable Living wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261246259 2018-05-16 14:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261246259 background on environmental movement wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261247253 2018-05-16 14:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261247253 background on national parks movement wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261247807 2018-05-16 14:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261247807 Question for 5/16/18 wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261264477 How has large scale corporate greed shaped our national natural landscape? How have more environmentally focused companies combated this? ]]> 2018-05-16 15:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261264477 Background on environmental movement notes wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261277222 2018-05-16 16:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261277222 background on sustainabile living movement wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261277422 2018-05-16 16:05:41 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261277422 background on national parks movement wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261277514 2018-05-16 16:05:55 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261277514 question responses wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261617120 2018-05-17 14:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261617120 Patagonia wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261621387 The outdoor apparel and equipment company, founded in 1973, was created by Yvon Chouinard, who was a dirtbag climber who was dead set on creating a company for adventures by adventures.]]> 2018-05-17 15:09:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261621387 Patagonia History, source wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261624006 2018-05-17 15:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261624006 Patagonia building, source wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261624478 secondary source]]> 2018-05-17 15:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/261624478 Sources wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262138684 General sources

]]> 2018-05-20 00:42:13 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262138684 Silent Spring wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262138709 Carson, Rachel. Silent Spring. Mariner Books (Houghton Mifflin), 2002.]]> 2018-05-20 00:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262138709 Walmart wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262139149 Walmart, the international super store, has been around in the US 1962 and in its 56 years of existence, nothing has or will come in its way towards exponential growth, not even the land they crush beneath their stores. ]]> 2018-05-20 00:52:13 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262139149 Walmart History, Source wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262139271 2018-05-20 00:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262139271 Walmart and the environment, source wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262139395 2018-05-20 00:59:05 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262139395 Colour key wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262396299 pink is class work
yellow is general sources
green is patagonia
blue is background information
purple is walmart]]> 2018-05-21 15:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262396299 Thesis wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262397689 Throughout the history of the United States the country has had a habit of corporations shaping how the nation looks, especially in our natural landscape. A lot of corporations have been detrimental to the environment, but there have also been corporations that have helped combat this history of the destruction of the natural landscape]]> 2018-05-21 15:21:01 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262397689 Patagonia mission statement, source wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262403807 2018-05-21 15:35:24 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262403807 Walmart mission statement, Source wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262404878 LOOK AT THE TOP QUOTE]]> 2018-05-21 15:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262404878 Walmarts effects on the environment wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262407387 2018-05-21 15:45:17 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262407387 Environmental movement wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262408577 2018-05-21 15:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262408577 Environmetental justice movement wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262408785 2018-05-21 15:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262408785 Introduction wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411247 The environment that someone or something inhabits becomes an important and almost (sometimes it is) sacred part of life. This is why there has been a long history of activism to protect the natural environment in the United States of America. Another massive, and almost intrusive part of life in the US is the daily interaction with billion dollar corporations. These two parts of everyday life have become intertwined because there is almost a mutual hate for each other, there is a seemingly reasonable answer as to why they have a distaste for each other, but what is more important is find how they can work together to create the best world possible. ]]> 2018-05-21 15:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411247 Introduction to movements wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411330 The environment that people live is what shapes how people interact with others, and when there is a threat to peoples environment there is a strong backlash.
- environmental movement
- how this spawned the sustainable living movement
- implanting, or trying to implement these things in everyday life ]]> 2018-05-21 15:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411330 Introduction to Walmart wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411413 - started in 1962
- started by Sam Walton
- use walmart intro
-this is my topic sentance]]> 2018-05-21 15:56:00 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411413 How Walmart effects these movements wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411455 Walmart is the headstone of corporate America and because most members of the environmental movement are anti-major-corporation Walmart has become a large battle ground for these movements.
- long standing attack of protests
- icon of the problem with the US to these activists

]]> 2018-05-21 15:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411455 Introduction to patagonia wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411628 - started in 1973
- started by Yvon Chouinard
- started after Chouinard Equipment
- use Patagonia intro
- this is my topic sentence]]> 2018-05-21 15:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411628 How Patagonia effects these movements wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411731 Yvon Chouinard grew up living in the wilderness, he knows that in order to stay true to himself and the environment that helps him prosper, sustainability must be at the forefront of his mind.
- opposite of Walmart
- reuse
- focus on grass roots]]> 2018-05-21 15:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262411731 How large scale corporations shape our natural landscape wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262412034 Billion dollar corporations have become just as much a part of daily life as much, if not more, as the natural environment. There is absolutely no way to deny that something as large as Walmart or Patagonia have the ability to, and have, shape the natural landscape
- land use
- pollution
- typically less focused on the environment, more focused on getting people to replace
- environment not the first focus]]> 2018-05-21 15:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262412034 Responses movements have had to this destruction wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262412243 As a country that strongly promotes the ability to take a stand against that in which you find to be unjust, the members and supporters of the environmental movement never missed a chance to take advantage of this right.
- Protests
- look at article attached ]]> 2018-05-21 15:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262412243 ways that corporations have added the movements wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262413019 - grass roots from Patagonia
- fuel, Walmart
- sponsors, Patagonia
- either love, or don't care
- COUNTER ARGUMENT]]> 2018-05-21 16:00:00 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262413019 conclusion wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262413079 Land usage, both how we put ourselves onto the land as well as how we infect the lands, has been the largest topic within the environmental movement for decades. With both corporations seemingly destroying and preserving the environment that they take from, the entity that is corporate America has without a doubt shaped the natural landscape of the United States. The glaring problem that this has shown is the fact that his is polarizing, it becomes the argument of what is the best coarse of action to take care of the important things in the world, what sacrifices have to be made. The fact that this topic has become so polarizing is honestly part of the problem. There needs to be the understanding that the battle between corporate America and the protection of the environment does not have to go in one way or the other, neither side of this fight will never be able to win, coexisting is the only possible way that both the environment and corporation can survive. ]]> 2018-05-21 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262413079 Patagonias effects on the environment wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262413921 As a large corporation, worth around $1 billion dollars, Patagonia has recognized what their role is to take care of the natural world that it prospers within.
- reuse
- land usage
- creating products that don't hurt the environment
- from a capatalist standpoint, their production and sales thrive off the environment, hurting the environment hurts sales]]> 2018-05-21 16:02:10 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262413921 How Walmart effects the environment wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262414018 Walmart has become a staple in the landscape of America, the large buildings that take up acres have become so sedentary in our gaze that it is the epitome of corporations engraining themselves in our environment.
- land usage
- wasting products
- plastic packaging
- replace ]]> 2018-05-21 16:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262414018 Change in Walmart size wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262414811 2018-05-21 16:04:28 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262414811 Change in walmart size pt. 2 wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262416030 2018-05-21 16:07:56 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262416030 Intersting Article about the movement of Patagonia wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262417657 2018-05-21 16:12:42 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262417657 Notes on GQ article wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262715028 - 100% for the planet sale
- never doing a vintage line they want to keep moving forward
- focus on repair not replace
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]]> 2018-05-22 14:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262715028 spacer wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262716241 2018-05-22 14:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262716241 make this also counter argument wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262719674 movement toward the green
involving the landscape in building
what is the most important, people or the natural landscape, these large industrialist companies, such as Walmart, seem to , or at least say they value the lives and wellness of the people they serve is the most important and they are willing to do anything, such as destruction of natural landscapes, to make the prices the lowest and the stores the most accesible.

people with lower incomes or less money to spend are not able to access the higher end goods that companies like Patagonia supply. If someone is living paycheck to paycheck, the way to many people in America are living, they may not be able to buy the longer lasting item but instead they have to get the cheaper short term option. ]]> 2018-05-22 14:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262719674 PBS Walmart timeline wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262726027 2018-05-22 15:10:18 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/262726027 maybe make another paragraph adressing how my point is correct wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263051741 2018-05-23 14:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263051741 personal extremes for sustainable movement wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263055332 2018-05-23 14:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263055332 Environmental Activism, the Patagonia way wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263062145 2018-05-23 15:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263062145 SUPER GOOD FOR MOVEMENTS wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263067801 2018-05-23 15:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263067801 Patagonia worth wobrien2020_1 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263145283 2018-05-23 19:05:40 UTC https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263145283 Feedback nreynolds11 https://padlet.com/wobrien2020_1/zj35sdfvb26a/wish/263523538 Winter

I like your use of colors to differentiate your box groupings.

Your introduction needs to include mention of Walmart and Patagonia since you spend so much of the essay focused on these two corporations.

As mentioned on the mycsw page, each body paragraph box needs "cited evidence".

Who are those involved in the protest movements?

You have a lot of great ideas here, Winter, and when you explained your essay to me, I understood where you wanted to take it. However, you really need to identify the specific evidence for each body paragraph so I know how you are incorporating the sources connected to your body paragraph boxes.

Thesis: 2.5/3

Intro: 3.5/4

Body paragraphs: 11/15

Counter-argument: 4/4

Conclusion: 4/4

25/30

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