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• Topic sentence, Supporting details and Concluding sentence;

• Good things about your town/city and things that your town/city needs to improve;

• Transition words (First, Second, Third,...)

• Quantifiers (much, many, a little, a few, a lot of/ lots of, some/ any,...)

I live with my family in my town, Ecogreen city. There are a lot of good things about my town. There are many trees, café and a very big shopping mall. my town doesn't have any beaches, but there is a nice swimming pool, so we can enjoy swimming in the summer. There is only a small playground, but my brother and I always play there happily. my town has a very big supermarket where we buy a lot of fresh and heathy food. But there are all so some bad things about my town. My town has much traffic jam, especially in rush hour. so we have to spend much time to go to school and back home. My town also has much noise pollution because there is a big road, and there are many transportations going through it, so it becomes very noisy outside. I love my town very much! I hope my town will be a better place for living in the future.

My town where I was born is really beautiful place. There are a lot of good things about my town. First, there are a lot of parks like YEN SO park, THONG NHAT park,…Second, there are a lot of clothes shop and cafés. I can buy a lot of beautiful dress at the clothes shop. Third, there are a lot of high buildings. There are lots of inhabitants living there. There are, however, there are a few bad things. In the afternoon, I sometimes go home late because there’s a lot of traffic jam. So, I have to go home early and have less time play with friends. I hope traffic will be lmproved in the future. I love my town and I want to live here forever.

Second Ha Noi also has many problems need to be improved like air pollution and traffic jam… We should stop pollution by using electric transportation and planting a lot of trees. But I still love to live here.

the lower score, we would do chores in one week.

After I had the low score, I walked home. I talked

to my mom about my exams. I felt very sad that day, my mom cooked fried chicken for me. It was a lazy day.

Everything went wrong yesterday.First,I got up late because I didn’t set my alarm clock ⏰.Suddenly,my mom was angry and talked to my sister:”Hey!Arrrange your books”.I left house at 7:20,so of course I had breakfast late.In the morning,I have a Science lesson,but I answered incorrect many questions.In the afternoon,we had a birthday for July-August-September students.It was the worst birthday in my life.I hit my head with Nhật Anh.All the boys pull me out of the classroom door.I felt very bad.When I came home,my grandmother made a delicious meal.I felt better after that.😃😄😁👍

Today is my worst day ever.I have a lot of home work to do,so I’m very tired.When I’m playing football,it’s raining cats and dogs,so I’m very sad.When we came home,it’s raining more heavily.At 6p.m,it’s don’t rain more.Now,I can see the rainbow.Now I’m feeling better.At home,my mom cook my favorite food,that’s chicken.All of that make me better.😗😗😗

Yesterday everything was wrong. My dad didn’t get the appointment so I got up late. I did the washing up late and had breakfast late. After breakfast I went to school late. My teacher was so angry with me. She reminded me and made me sad. When I got home I was so repentant. In the dinner, my mother made me a bowl of soup so I felt better.

Trâm Anh

Therefore, I got very wet. Because of my detention, I had to stay for an extra hour. I missed the bus and had to walked home. My parents were worried because I was late. However, my mom already made my favourite dish which is shushi. I felt much better after that!

Today was one of the worst days. This was the terrible day. I forgot my homework and got introuble with my teacher. She scolded me in class and everyone heard. I really embarrasing. Then during the I went home I slipped and mud puddle. My cothes turned brown and smelly. I couldn’t see everyone withthis dirty clothes,so I had to spend the rest of the day in dirty clothes. When I came home, I wanted to quiet watch TV, but my brother friend were there. They were so loud and kept brothering me to play with them. Today was terrible,so I hope tommorow will be better.

At lunch, I fat failled my apple juice on my clothes, and I feel so terrible!last, When I got home, I lost my key and had to wait outside. Every things went wrong

Have you ever think about the worst day you had? I have a worst day maybe the worst day of my life. Although it’s at the weekend. It was Saturday so I have to get up early to go to the math class. Aarrhh! I hate the math class a lot. It’s hard to understand for me and there are some tricky questions made my head like it is dancing. After the math class, I had to go to the swimming class. I had to did exercises outside the sunny day! How worst it is!! It had burn me for an hour. I also hate swimming class too. More than math class. When I enter the pool, the water was very cold. The swimming class occupied my nap time. I hate that day so much!!!🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡

Last year , on Monday 12th September 2023 its was the very bad day in my life .At six o’clock in the morning, I get up late , l get up at 7 o’clock I go down stair and fell, my knee have a bruise . I go to school at 7 thirty, it’s was very late . I go in the class , the first I look is my teacher look me with an angry face. I have a test , but I very tired so I answer all question are wrong . At the breaktime , I run with my friend and fell , I have a very big scratch in my hand . After school , I go home , when I go up stairs to my room , I was fell in stairs 6 down . I have a very big scratch on my head I was very dizzy . My mom cook my fravourate food which is fried chicken . It’s make me not sad . 😢😢😢

I live in Hanoi. It’s a capital of Vietnam , my town have a few good things and many many many very bad things . My good things is have many beautiful place and many flowers. But it’s many cars make an air and noise pollution, it’s make me difficult at breath . But I love my town . I very very love my town.😍😍😍

My mom say me have to get up early because tomorrow I have picnic,but today I get up late because the clock don't ring. When I get dressed and brush the teeth , wear an uniform my mom tell me we only have 5 minunites left. When I am school i see my teacher face very angry. In the morning I have a math test but I didn't review yesterday then I don't past the test. My teacher say this to my mother and she is angry too. At lunch time I go to canteen and buy the best food but my friend say my P.E teacher call me,so I can't eat. In the afternoon we have music lesson but I don't know to sing this song and my teacher say I am lazy because I don't review after the lesson.Then I have P.E lesson when I run I fell out and have a scratch on my hand I go to my classroom. My teacher give me atest and say me do this again and i go to home late my mom is so worry .At the end my mom cook me my favourite food and now I'm happy.

Gia han

-I hate you,the worst people in the world.

My heart been like It was break and shattered.I so so sad.Second,I trip and fell down ,I hurt myself .At noon,food was terrible,I can’t eat any things.And In the afternooon,I felt very hungry.I can’t passed sports competition that’s why I had 4 points.In the evening my mom take me to eat hotpot.

Yesterday , it was very terrible . In the morning , I got up late . Then , I went to school at 8:05. It was too late. My teacher was very angry. My homework had all wrong answer . In the after noon , Every Thursday, we have PE lesson . But yesterday, it was raining so we didn't have that lesson. I was very happy , that happy didn't last long . The traditional martial art teacher come in my class . Every body must do 4 easy movement . But every time we did wrong , we had to do it again until he said : " Ok , it is enough " . That 's my worse day .

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would u like to visit vietnam? u can go many way.i’m sooooooo excited when u said that u can go to vietnam to meet me.u can visit hoan kiem lake,ho chi minh mausoleum,…. I’m soooooooooooooooooooo happy 😆.

see u at hoan kiem lake,bye

Hello Hanayome, I know you wil go to Hanoi next week so I have some good idea for you to visit Hanoi. You can stay in the hotel name JW Marriott Hotel Hanoi. You can have one room in this hotel, it sounds amazing. In the hotel have a swimming pool, and a wonderful restaurant that you can eat a lot of delicious food. You can visit Hoan Kiem Lake. This lake is verry ancient. In my opinion, pho, bun cha is the best food at Hanoi. I think, you love my ideas. Have a lovely trip and don’t forget to send me a postcard.

Your cousin,

Bảo Châu.

would u like to visit vietnam? u can go many way.i’m sooooooo excited when u said that u can go to vietnam to meet me.u can visit hoan kiem lake,ho chi minh mausoleum,…. I’m soooooooooooooooooooo happy 😆.

see u at hoan kiem lake,bye

Adult 900000$.Don’t miss trying Trang Tien ice cream 🍦

Best regart

Phucs

First, It’s not bad trying climb Laughing Mountain one time for a difficult challenge. You might gonna have to go the Flash soccer ⚽️ if you’re a kind of person that like the max speed.

Then , your stomach is hungry and the lunch time come so it’s worth eating in the MrObeast 5star restaurant.Don’t forget to swim in the sweetest syrup waterfall and order 5 dishes of Cha noodles. I think you’ll enjoy going to the antique grocery there because the food is brilliant and the best thing is that you can experience cooking in the futuristic kitchen!

I wish you have fun with my recommendations during the holiday.Have a unforgettable trip and send me a postcard soon

Warm regards

Solas Rusi/ Bemmyblox

Welcome to my capital, Hanoi. I’m so eagerly for you that you’re going to Hanoi. I have some fun places for you to visit.

Firstly, you can come to Hoàn Kiếm’s lake. It’s has many beautiful things. You can explore many fun things here. Do you love food in Hanoi?

There are many delicious food you can eat. You can enjoy eating pho, bun cha, … Finally, I hope you have like my ideas. I wish you have a good time in Hanoi.

Your best friend,

Đào Khánh Vy

Would you like to go to Vietnam🇻🇳. If you want to go to Vietnam, you should go to Hanoi. It will be great. There are some popular places like Ho Gươm, Chùa Một Cột,….You can eat ice cream, bun cha,……It was not to expensive to buy. If you want go, post me a postcard. I will wait.

Your friend

Nguyễn Minh Anh

The first thing that you want to try is bycycling with me in the park. Don’t forget to visit with me the decathlon sports shop to play some sports like dumbbells or bycycle . You might also want to play iPads and using my gamecomputer to play Roblox also. Last try some pizza in alfresco steak & pizza. Have a nice trip.

Best wishes phong😜

I am so excited that you are going to go to Hanoi. These are some suggestions for you.

Firstly, you can go to Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum. You can play or run around. It’s very big. Don’t forget to go to the Temple of Literature. It is beautiful. If you have time, don’t miss go to Hoan Kiem lake. If it is a hot day, you should eat an ice cream. Finally, while you are there, try to go to the Hanoi Old Quarter.

Best wishes, you a have a good time in Hanoi.

Duy Anh

Samathan

I’m so excited for you come Ha Noi! I sub for you! I’d happy to give you some suggestions what you can do in Ha Noi.

First, you can go to One Pillar Pagoda. Next, when you are hungry you can eat bun cha. Don’t forget go to visit Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum, there are so many soldier there. Remember to eat Trang Tien ice cream in Hoan Kiem lake. Finally, you can eat some sea food in some restaurant.

I hope you enjoy your holiday. Do you like my ideas. Have a nice trip.

Vu Tien Dung

I am so happy for you because you will go to Hanoi. I will give you some information about what you do on holiday to give you a happy holiday.

First, it worth going to the ho gươm for a wonderful view. Don’t forget to take a photo of each of these, one , pray for mercy , ho gươm , Ngọc Sơn temple . Do you like sports ? You may ride bike one round in ho guom. Finally, you may eat bun cha, pho bo or traditition dishes . I hope you happy with my idea .

Remember don’t forget to write for me about your holiday . Happy with your holiday !

Minh Nghĩa

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Happy :)

I’m so excited for you that you’re going to Hanoi. I’d happy to give suggestions about what to do in your holiday.

Firstly, it’s worth walking in Hanoi Old Quarter. You can see some people walking in flowing ao dai. Don’t forget to eat some pho or bun cha in some Vietnamese restaurant. They can be very delicious, too. Its scent will make you remember forever. In the afternoon, it’s worth going to Ho Chi Minh mausoleum. You will see people are lining up to enter the mausoleum. Another select is you can go to The temple of Literature. But I think you should go to both of them. They’re amazing. You can buy some gift in The temple of Literature such as: to he, keychains,… . In conclusion, you will have a wonderful day.

From love,

Lunas🌙

I have some information for you because you are going to Ha Noi. You must feel happy when you go to Ha Noi.

First,you need to go to Hoan Kiem lake, the wonderful view of Hoan Kiem lake will make you surprise.Don’t forget to eat pho,that is my favorite food in Hanoi and is it popular too.In Ha Noi there are many ice cream store and I think you will like Trang Tien ice cream.You’ll enjoy eating Vietnamese food deliciously. It’s worth going to Ha Noi right?

I think you will like my information. Don’t forget to go to my house and play with me.

Sincerely

Truc Linh

I am so happy for you because you go to my town, Ha Noi. I will tell you something information to do.

First, there are Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum where you can have a good view there. You should go to Ha Noi old quarter if you want to taste some Vietnamese diet. In Ha Noi old quarter, don’t forget to go to sword lake to have a good view. Finally, don’t miss going to the Lotte Aquarium. At there, you can see sea life.

I hope you like my ideas, have a best trip.

Your friend

Hung

In my city you can ride a bicycle in a very big park . You ‘ll enjoy the play ground . There is a very big supermarket in the shopping center. There is the teddy bear picking machine . Don’t forget to eat ice cream with me happily. Then you go up to my house and play some games like Roblox and doors. Don’t forget to meet me at my house

Nhật anh , your best friend !

I’m so excited to give you some ideas to do on your holiday. You must go to eat and play in Hanoi. Firstly, you would like to go to West lake. It has roasted pigeon and many yummy food. Next, you will have a good day to rest in a hotel. When you are feel good we can go to adventure paảk. It would be great.

Yours,

Linh An

It's worth going to Hanoi Old Quarter. There are many things that you can buy and make a present for your family. Don't forget to go to The Temple of Literature. You can come to pray 🙏 for good health and happiness . Don't miss the Ho Gươm walking street. It's nice to eat Trang Tien ice cream. It's delicious 😋. Then, you can go to the Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum. Inside that is the corpse of Ho Chi Minh. Finally, going to Lotte Aquarium. I think that you have good time while watching sealife.

I hope you like my ideas. And don't forget to send me some photos of the holiday. Good luck 🍀.

Best wishes,

Alice

Firstly, it’s worth going to sword lake for a fantastic view.I am used to going there regularly.Don’t forget to go to Ngọc Sơn Temple.Do you want to see some football match?You will enjoy seeing an amazing concert and match on My Dinh Stadium.Last,remember to eat some traditional dishes like:bun cha,pho Bo,…

Have a lovely journey and send me some photos.

Best regards

Lê Xuân Hiếu

My bad day was in 2nd Grade. I got my Math test. I found my Math test score very low. I was shied and laughed at by everyone in my class. When I got home, I was scolded by my parents. Even my parents despised me so much, I didn’t know how others would treat me. I was sad to such a low score on the test. I cried a lot since I got my test result. Even through everyone treated me like that, there was one person who was always by my side, that was my best friend. After being comforted by my best friend, I felt much better. I thanked my best friend so much for comforting me when I was sad. 😢 😔😞🥺😭

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First, children are not allowed 🚫 to run in the safari because the road is too wet 💧and watery. You might fell off.Secondly

children should not throw trash 🗑️.We should protect our environment so you have to throw trash in the bin. Children should not feed animals because only the manager has fresh food for animals.Have a good time at safari.

Well children,there are a few things I have to tell you.First of all,children must be supervised by parents or teacher.If you can see your child,you must call the supervisor for help.Next,you mustn’t smoke.Sometimes,it affects the environment or somebody.Thirdly,you must throw rubbish to the bin.Because it is harmful to the environment.Finally,you mustn’t run.Sometimes you can make somebody fall down.

You must follow the instructions.

Bye bye

John

But there are something difference between golf and table tennis. First of all, golf play in a golf course. However, table tennis usually play indoor with a table. There are 12 players in a golf team, there are 3 players in a table tennis team instead. In addition, golf last for 4 hours in 18 holes, yet table tennis only last 6 minutes. Players in golf can hit the ball on to the hole, but in table tennis, players hit the ball, if the opponents cannot hit the ball, players who hit the ball score a point.

There are a lot of differences between badminton and tennis. Firstly, the tennis net is shorter, but badminton is taller. Secondly, the tennis ball is heavier and it’s round, but badminton ball is lighter and it’s not round.

There are many difference between badminton 🏸 and basketball 🏀 . First badminton have  2️⃣ , but basketball have 5️⃣ players. The last badminton use racket, the basketball use hands.

Firstly, they are both have a racket to use to smash and hit the ball.You need to be quick, focused and have accurate hitting skills when playing badminton.When you play tennis you also need all the qualities that you use when you play badminton.

Secondly, those sports both also require practice, hard work and patience for every moment. So play badminton and tennis is not easy.Every drop of sweat that falls shows how many challenges and difficulties we have overcome and we deserve to be the best when we work hard.

Thirdly, when the opponent hits the ball, if it goes over the net, it must hit the ground once before it can be hit when you play tennis. Difference from tennis, badminton:when the opponent hits the shuttlecock to our court and if it goes over the net, when the shuttlecock is in the air we can still hit the shuttlecock.

I love two sports.

However, there are more difference than similarities. Firstly, badminton players use the shuttlecock to play instead of using the balls like tennis players. Secondly, the badminton court is smaller and the net is higher. Thirdly, the medium time to play in a badminton match is 1 hour and 16 minutes instead of 3 hours and 18 minutes like a tennis match.