Glow: I liked how you did a comparison between USA’s education and Haiti’s education. Also, your introduction really introduced the whole presentation and gave the audience a background of you. 

     Grow: Talk a little slower. Also, for some of the slides, just have the main bullets on the slide instead of writing complete sentences.

    Glow: I liked how you included athletics in your presentation, in addition to education. Also, good job talking about the survey results, it showed a different perspective. 

    Grow: Your slides have too many words or sentences on it. Additionally, do not just read off your slides when you are presenting. 

      Glow: I liked how you included The Game of School idea and the Einstein quote, they both fit perfectly with this topic.

      Grow: The slide background was distracting and the text was hard to read, only on the first slide. Also, someone may find the background sounds distracting.

      Glow: I liked your pictures and how you included specific personal experiences.

      Grow: Your slides had too many words on them and with your video presentation, there was no visual following along as you were talking so someone may find  it hard to follow along.  

       Glow: I liked how you introduced yourself in the beginning, it gave a background of who you are. Additionally, I liked how you talked about the difference in your private school’s education versus someone who may have went to a public school’s education.

       Grow: Your webcam presentation blocked some of the words and pictures on the slides so a little hard to see and read them.

       Glow: I liked how you included the survey results, it gave a different perspective. Also, I liked how it was to the point. 

       Grow: There were no words and only one picture on the slide so some may find that hard to follow.

      Glow: I liked how first you defined everything and introduced the big topic and then afterwards, followed it with examples and your experiences. 

      Grow: Can include more pictures on the slides themselves so they do not look so empty. Plus, do not have a white background on the visual. 

       Glow: I liked how you included the survey pie charts right there, after you talked about your own experiences and ideas so you could see his ideas and then what others believe. 

       Grow: On the slides, maybe you can have the title of the slide on the top so they look more uniformed and one can follow along from top to bottom instead of looking around.