Laela M.'s Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Laela Janelle Minnema https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC 2025-12-04 21:19:18 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209481 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209481 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209483 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209483 30 Basic Human Rights 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209485 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209485 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209487 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209487 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209488 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209488 Rough Draft 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209489 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209489 Final Draft 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209491 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209491 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209492 1st person, Character is telling story]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209492 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209493 The story takes place in South Korea, In Daegu HighSchool, Around November, and another plot is in a Forest filled with trees and one little cave, Cherry blossom tree on a hill.]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209493 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209494 Taehyung - 16
-Has feeling for Laela
-Apart of a gang but doesn't want to be in it
- Charming
- Supports Laela secretly, but is cold on the outside
Laela - 15
- Witty
- Survival skills are amazing
- Dirty blonde hair, hazel eyes
- Charming
- Fashion is amazing
- More street smart than book smart
Bangtan
-  Gang
- Consists of members names, Yoongi, Namjoon, Jin, Jimin, Jeonguk, Taehyung, and Hoseok.
- Popular guys at school, but bad outside.
Kylee  - 15
- laela's best friend
-  doesnt know if she likes Jeonguk or not.
- Been friends with Laela for 9 years
-Book smart
- Loyal, and always prepared]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209494 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209495 Laela and Taehyung get dosed with hard drugs after Bangtan finds out about Taehyungs feelings. They send them to a unknown forest with huge walls all around, They place devices in their ear making them track them and send messages to them, This means Taehyung and Laela have bonding time, but how much bonding time do they get when they only have 24 hours to escape a forest before they are stuck there forever?]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209495 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209496 Laela and Taehyung leave the forest right on the spot. They have been putting innocent people into that forest for years and Taehyung was sick of it. The gang soon stops because of what they stated "When someone escapes, we'll leave this crappy place and go on somewhere else" And Laela and Taehyung eventually get together and the story ends when Taehyung and Laela are back in school working on a project together]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209496 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209497 Laela grows by becoming even more street smart, Shes never delt with something this big before and she now thinks her survival skills went to good use. Taehyung grows by realizing what he did wrong and soon stopping, Laela has made him a better person and he cant thank her enough for that]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209497 7. Climax: What is the most dramatic moment in your story? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209498 When Tahyung and Laela escape at the right second]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209498 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209499 Dont let the people control u do what yu want.]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209499 Due Dates 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209500 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209500 Prompt 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209501 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209501 Theo's Song 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209502 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209502 Rubric 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209503 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209503 Point of View 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209504 The point of view is 3rd person because there is nowhere in the story that states an 'I' or 'Me' ]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209504 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209505 This story is an unjust society because it is not fair to all citizens, the basic right being denied was the right of free choice because Authorities are forcing people to do jobs]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209505 Characters 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209506 Theo - 13
Neema]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209506 Conflict 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209507 Government is assigning jobs to people without choice, Theo is told to be blacksmith when he wants to be a musician]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209507 Plot: Sequential 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209508 Event #: The blacksmiths are working in the smity
Event #: Theo is take from the nursery pod and given his assignment
Event #: Neema explains how the authorities assign people jobs they dislike.
Event #: Theo made the resolution that would change his life
Event # (Climax): Theo sings against the authorities.
Event #:Theo gets taken by authoritites and is punished
Event #: Neema takes a stand with the blacksmiths
Event #(Resolution):  The government give people the right to choose their own profession]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209508 Theme 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209509 The theme is not to let anyone control you]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209509 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209510 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 
It is very unfair and not right to live in an unjust society, I could write about a girl or couple in North Korea, or people trying to survive the purge (12 hours where any laws is legal) or how people lived in ancient Rome, with battle out fights and many other things]]> 2017-12-14 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/216209510 Due Dates 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/217022507 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15 (16 points)
-Plot Line (Drawn on Printer Paper): Tuesday, Dec 19 (20 points)
-Rough Draft: Friday, Dec 21 
(30 points)


]]> 2017-12-18 17:02:34 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/217022507 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000063 https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/217022651 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:02:52 UTC https://padlet.com/201000063/zi4mlbn0cykd/wish/217022651