Writing Correction by Miss Phương https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx Đăng phản hồi của bạn về chủ đề thảo luận bằng cách nhấp vào nút dấu cộng dưới đây. en-us 2025-03-17 11:38:04 UTC 2025-03-20 13:51:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4ac.png ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369207036 2025-03-17 11:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369207036 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369216788 2025-03-17 11:50:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369216788 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369223467 2025-03-17 11:55:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369223467 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369224017 2025-03-17 11:55:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3369224017 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372781253 2025-03-19 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372781253 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372802583 2025-03-19 09:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372802583 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372803196 2025-03-19 09:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372803196 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372808700 2025-03-19 09:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372808700 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372808920 2025-03-19 09:20:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3372808920 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3373186994 Sample answer:

Hi Mom,

I'm going to invite my classmate, David, to our house for dinner tonight. Would you mind preparing more food for him? We'll be home at about 5.30. He really enjoys eating fish and vegetable soup. We can help you clear up the table and do the washing up after the meal.

Love you,

(name)

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Tomorrow, i and mày classmate, David, will come home at 6 pm for eating dinner together. My classmate like eating fried chicken. Then, we went outside to hang out with our friends.

See you soon

Hully

]]> 2025-03-19 14:04:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3373187192 ngoaingumissphuong https://padlet.com/ngoaingumissphuong/zhgou3mchc7kewxx/wish/3373194805 Hi, mom

My classmate, David, ís going to come tonight and have dinner with us. We goi to the shopping center to get some new book for chemistry teacher, we will be home at 6 o'clock. Davis really likes mushroom soup. After dinner, we will go the library and then play badminton at the sports center.

See you later

Crystal

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Hi, Mom.

Are you free tonight? My friend, David, is going to have dinner with us? He is a vegetarian, so he can't eat meat. We will buy a map for Geography lesson tomorrow.

Good buy/See you.

Robert

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Yesterday, Mike and Jack were lost in America, they were confused. So they went to ask some people for helped. A women helped they, they were happy. So they went to that place for took photos.


Yesterday, Mike and Jack travelled to America. They were on street to the sculpture took photos but they were lost. A women helped their how to went to that sculpture so, they arrived that place to took photos that sculpture.

10/15

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Last weekend, David and Minon had a trip to London. In On the first day ,they wanted to went visit to a famous sculpture of god there. But then,they got lost, So they asked a woman the direction.Went When they got there,they took some photos with the sculpture and had a great time

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Last week, James and Adam had a trip went to England. While they were exploring the city, they were hungry and couldn't find the way to go to the restaurant. Then, they asked a kind woman for directions, and she gave a clear íntructions. Finally, they grateful thanked her for her helping and find they found the restaurant.


L: 4

O: 4

C: 3

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