Opinion paragraph about living in the country or living in the city by AILÉN PAOLA BAIGORRIA

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ailenbaigorria928 — 2024-09-24 13:02:33 UTC

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ailenbaigorria928 — 2024-09-24 13:04:58 UTC

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Ludmila and Uma

2024-10-04 19:56:58 UTC

Hi, our names are Ludmila and Uma and the main idea is that country is much more peaciful. For example the traffic in the country is not much because there are not so many vehicles and it is better because there is les pollution. And in the country are less people, but its better because people know each other better. Activities in the country mastly agriculture, fishing, etc. Use natural. All in all living in the country is quiet and peaceful.

Santino Micangelli y Malandro Juárez

2024-10-04 20:00:09 UTC

The city is more atractive because the city have more atractivos for example restaurant, the cinemas . The city si very cost for the services and satistaction for the people. The traffic is so big and dangerous . The city is a site more turistic . the comunity si more big and no social

Joaquín Díaz Fleitas, Ernesto Cuestas, Isaías Jonas Ferreyra Torres

2024-10-04 20:00:44 UTC

My name is Isaías and last weekend i went to the country on a trip. The life there is really peaceful and safe, most people have farm animals like cows and chickens. There isn't traffic because there isn't too much people living there and they don't travel by cars, they travel in bikes or horses. There aren't much things to do because things like restaurants are only i'm the city.

Overall if you want a peacuful life and be safe, go live in the country because it's beautiful and there isn't a lot of population.

Alessandro and Valentín

2024-10-04 20:01:54 UTC

I prefer living in the city.

The cost its more expensive than live on the country for example in the market,library,etc.

The traffic it's noisy and never fast .

The people its more and overpulation.

The activities play soccer,tenis watch internet.

The city its more completed than Country.

Bautista Soria López y Santino Falcón Amato

bautistasorialopez — 2024-10-04 20:05:11 UTC

Living un the country vs. Living in the city

Our mames are Santino Amato and Bautista Soria, and we prefer to living in the country. This si because there is More tranquilito, peace, and more space to do various activities.

In the country, the cost of living is lower and there is no traffic furthermore. There are usually fewer people, which makes life calmer and less hectic.

As for activities, in the country we can play football, it est outdoors, ride Horses, and go hikings, wich allows us to stay active and enjoy the natural environments.

In conclusion, living in the country provides a calmer quality of life that is in tune with nature, although it may require adapting to a simple lifestyle

Felipe Campos y Maria Ruiz

2024-10-09 14:23:55 UTC

Hi we are Feli and Mari and we are going to talk about living in the city. To begin with , we think is more expensive because there are there are more costs in buildings, grocery, and transportation. Furthermore the traffic here is more annoying and boring because of how many people live here in comparison to the country. About the people we believe that people because of living in the city are more speeded up and stressed. For example of you walk in the street people will usually go very fast. However people in the city are more connected to the different types of entertainment. Some of the activities you can do in the city are going shopping, visit museums and theatres and you can go out at night to clubs and bars. To conclude our opinion is that we prefer living in the city because is more fun and there are many activities to do.

Lautaro Coria And Moises reyes

2024-10-09 17:38:54 UTC

Living in the city offers diverse opportunities but comes at a price. The cost of living is high, with housing and services taking up a big portion of income. Traffic is a constant issue, making daily commutes stressful, while the fast-paced environment means people are often in a rush. However, there’s always something to do: from cultural activities to social events, the city never sleeps. Despite its challenges, the energy and opportunities make city life appealing to many.

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ailenbaigorria928 — 2024-10-14 01:59:47 UTC

The ideas in your paragraph are good and the examples are relevant. Some connectors are missing to link your ideas better. Please check the spelling of the words "peaceful" and "less". Good job, girls!

Hello Joaquín, Ernesto and Isaías! Here is your feedback

ailenbaigorria928 — 2024-10-14 02:04:39 UTC

The ideas in your paragraph are really good and you have used connectors and relevant examples to support your ideas. Be careful with certain words and expressions:

"they travel BY bikes or horses"

"restaurants are only IN the city"

"peaceful life" (check the spelling)

Very good job!!

Hello Bauti and Santino! Here is your feedback

ailenbaigorria928 — 2024-10-14 02:12:39 UTC

The ideas of your paragraph are good and you have used connectors to link your ideas. There are some grammar and spelling mistakes that you have to check:

"we prefer LIVING in the country"
"this IS because IT IS more quiet (tranquilito) and WE HAVE more space to do various activities
"it est" (I don´t get the meaning of this)
go hiking
"which"

Very good job!

Hello Bauti and Santino! Here is your feedback

ailenbaigorria928 — 2024-10-14 02:12:49 UTC

The ideas of your paragraph are good and you have used connectors to link your ideas. There are some grammar and spelling mistakes that you have to check:

"we prefer LIVING in the country"
"this IS because IT IS more quiet (tranquilito) and WE HAVE more space to do various activities
"it est" (I don´t get the meaning of this)
go hiking
"which"

Very good job!