Narrative Paragraph by SRI LESTARI, S.Pd., MA� 7890� https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp Review and revise the paragraph below. Identify incorrect parts and give suggestions. en-us 2022-12-12 02:17:10 UTC 2023-01-10 13:32:24 UTC hello@padlet.com srilestari2 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417197565 Review and revise the sample of this narrative paragraph. 
-Not so long : It doesn't take to long
- Bakmi: bakmi
-go to back Kelapa Gading,:  go to Kelapa Gading.
- It's was long : It was long time 
-because the road fill by the cars: because the road filled by the cars 
- I go separated paths: I go to separated paths
- I felt enjoyed along the way: I felt enjoyed on the road
- felt axiety: felt anxiety 
- I never ever walked: I never walked
- make suck, : make suck.
- there is no light : there's no light 
- there is no light even a little bit,: there is no light even a little bit.
-my axiety: my anxiety
- i can not ask for anything: I can't ask for anything 
- I waited  her : I have wait her 
Correctwd by : Nelly ]]> 2022-12-12 02:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417197565 Dave 20221102008 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417298577    A day at night my friend invited me to join her opening restaurant in Tangerang. I rode my motorcycle by following other friend side by side through the traffic light. After taking about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant, the location was in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chef gave us the menu for we ordered and I chose Salmon fillet with mashed potato as side dish. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious side dish and main course.

   After I finished eating the food, my friend and I decided to go back to Penjaringan, it was more than the first we went because the road filled by the cars and motorcycles. I tried to ride safely during traffic jam, then my friend and I went to separate paths. I went to the east and my friend went to north. At first I enjoyed along the roaf, but suddenly I was scared and felt anxiety on the road.

   I never ever past this road before and the environment made me suck, it was such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There was no light even a little bit, I looked up my left and right side to for sure, I saw a tall shadow and walked slowly to me. I thought it was someone. Then I stopped, I looked at that thing and it was gone. Since my anxiety got more high and made my heart beat really fast. I grabbed my phone as soon as possible to call my friend, I said how scared I was and needed a help. I could not ask for anything well during the phone, my hand and lip also shaked quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.
]]> 2022-12-12 04:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417298577 Devina Riyana Putri 20221102030 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417309244 A day at night, my friend invited me to joined her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I rode my motorcycle by following other friends side by side through the traffic light. After traveling for about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long ago, a chief gave us the menu for we ordered, and I chose Bakmi with baked dumplings as a topping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to the delicious main course.

After I finished eating the food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It was farther than the first time we went because the road was filled with cars and motorcycles. I tried to ride safely during the traffic jam, then my friends and I went separate ways. I went to the west and others went south. At first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety on the road.

I never ever walked past this road before, and the environment make me suck. It's such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There was no light, not even a little bit. I looked up my left and right sides, but for sure, I only watched a dark, scary road. Then I stepped a side, since my anxiety was getting higher and making it harder for me to focus on my ride, so I grabbed my phone as soon as possible to call my friend and explain how scared I am and I needed help quickly. I can not ask for anything well on the phone, my hand and lips are also shaking quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, but finally she got me and picked me back up to the right way, and after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417309244 christian matthew S 20221102023 christianmetihew1212 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417309453             One day at night,my friend invited me to join her in opening a restaurant in Jakarta.I rode my motorcycle by following other friends side by side thru the traffic light.After taking about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue.Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for we order and I choose Bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course.

            After I finished eating the food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading.It was long more than the first we went because the road was filled with cars and motorcycles.I tried to ride safely during traffic jams, then my friends and I go separate paths.I went to the west and others to the south, at first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.

             I had never walked past this road before and the environment make me suck.It was such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There's no light even a little bit, I looked up to my left and right side but for sure, I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step aside since my anxiety got higher and made me hard to focus on my ride. I grabbed my phone as soon as I called my friend, and I said how scared I am and need help faster. I can not ask for anything well on the phone, my hand and lip also shake quickly. I waited for her for ten minutes, finally, she got me and picked me back the right way.After the very scary long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.    

               I have never walked past this road before and the environment makes suck.It was such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked up to my left and right side but for sure, I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step aside since my anxiety got higher and make me hard to focus on my ride, I grabbed my phone as soon as I called my friend, and I said how scared I am and need help faster. I can not ask for anything well on the phone, my hand and lip also shake quickly. I waited for her for ten minutes.Finally, she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scary long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.

]]> 2022-12-12 05:10:48 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417309453 Pitriyani Anisa https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417313616 Saturday nights my friend’s invited me to joined her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I rode my motorcycle by following  others friend side by side thru the traffic light. After took about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for ordered and I chose bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course.

After finished the food, my friend’s and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It was long more than the first we went because the road full of cars and motorcycle. I tried to rode safely during traffic jam, then my friend’s and I go separated paths. I went to the west and others to south. At first I felt enjoyed along the way but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.

I never walked past this road before and the environment it sucks. It was such a gloomy night I ever had, because everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked at my left and right side just for sure but the road totally dark. Then I step a side, since my axiety got more high and make me hard to focus on my ride. I grabed my phone as soon as possible to call my friend's and tell her how scared I am. I really need an urgent help. I can not ask for anything well during the phone, my hand and lip also shaking quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, after that finally she got me and picked me back to the right way. It was kind of scared long trip I ever had and glad that I arrived at my home safely.]]> 2022-12-12 05:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417313616 Rika Oktavia https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417314791 One day at night my friend invited me to join her in opening a restaurant in Jakarta.
I rode my motorcycle by following other friends side by side through the traffic light.
After taking about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for our order and I choose Bakmi with baked dumplings as a topping. I enjoyed the dinner due to the delicious main course.

After I finished eating the food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading, it was long more than the first we went because the road was filled with cars and motorcycles.
I tried to ride safely during a traffic jam, then my friend and I go separate paths. I went to the west and others to the south, at first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.

I have never walked past this road before and the environment makes suck, it was such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked up to my left and right side but for sure, but I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step aside since my anxiety got higher and made me hard to focus on my ride, I grabbed my phone as soon as I called my friend, and I said how scared I am and need help faster. I can not ask for anything well on the phone, my hand and lip also shake quickly. I waited for her for ten minutes, finally, she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scary long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.

]]> 2022-12-12 05:19:03 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417314791 Muhamad Zaidan Jayakusuma 20221102042 icefluid10 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417316219 A terrible Night out with my buddy. Me and my buddy planned a night out to the arcade. I take usually 45 minutes to get there, but the traffic jam adds up to 25 minutes to the trip. 

The arcade is so crowded due to an ongoing promotion in the arcade. It's so hard to play anything in there because the queue is so long. At least the karaoke booth is empty, so we sing our hearts out. 

We finished playing in the arcade at 09:30. The night is so foggy today. We ride our motorcycle slowly so we don't hit anything in front of us. Suddenly we realized that we are on the wrong road, the road is in the middle of the forest. It was dark and the fog doesn't help either. My buddy started to have a panic attack. I tried to call 911 but there was no signal available. We lost hope until there was a light from afar and it was a truck. The truck guided us back to the main road and after that, we arrived home safely.]]> 2022-12-12 05:21:17 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417316219 20221102044 - Kevin Afizeno https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417316743 One day at night, my friend's invited me to join her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I rode motorcycle by the following other friend's side by side through the traffic light. After took about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant. The location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chef gave us the menu for we order and I choosed bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping and chicken soup with rice. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course. 
    After I finished eating the food, my friend's and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It's was long more than first we went, because the road fill by the cars and motorcycle. I tried to road safely during traffic jam, then my friend's and I go separated paths. I went to the west and others to south, at first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.
    I never ever walked past this road before and the environment make suck, it such a glommy night I ever had, everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked upmy left and right side but for sure, I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step a side, since my axiety got more high and make me hard to focus on my ride, I grabbed my phone as soon as to call my friend, I said how scared I am and need a help faster. I can not ask for anything well during the phone, my hand and lip also shaking quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:22:10 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417316743 Indah Amalia Sari - 20221102026 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417318548       At night my friend invited me to join her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I rode my motorcycle by following other friend side by side through the traffic light. After taking about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for we order and I chose bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course.

        After I finished eating the food, my friend and I decided to go to Kelapa Gading. It was long more than the first we went because the road filled by the cars and motorcycle. I tried to rode safely during traffic jam, then my friends and I go separated paths. I went to the west and others to south, at first I felt enjoyed along on the road, but suddenly I was scared and felt anxiety during the road.

         I had never past this road before and the environment make me suck. It was such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There was no light, not even a little bit. I looked up my left and right sides, but for sure, I only watched a dark, scary road. Then I stepped a side, since my anxiety was getting higher and make me hard to focus on my ride, so I grabbed my phone as soon as to call possible to call my friend and explain how scared I am and need help quickly. I can not ask for anything well during the phone, my hand and lips are also shaking quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, and finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, and after very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417318548 Nur Alif Rachman (20221102005) https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417321988 One day at night, my friend invited me to join her in an opening restaurant in Jakarta.
I rode my motorcycle by following other friends side by side thru the traffic light.
After taking about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for our order and I choose Bakmi with baked dumplings as a topping. I enjoyed the dinner due to the delicious main course.
After I finished eating the food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading, it was long more than the first we went because the road filled with cars and motorcycles.
I tried to ride safely during a traffic jam, then my friend’s and I go separated paths. I went to the west and others to the south, at first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.
I have never ever walked past this road before and the environment makes suck, it such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked up my left and right side but for sure, but I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step aside, since my anxiety got more high and made me hard to focus on my ride, I grabbed my phone as soon as to call my friend, I said how scared I am and need help faster. I can not ask for anything well on the phone, my hand and lip also shake quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, finally, she got me and picked me back the right way, after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:30:31 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417321988 Invitation from friend https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322015 A day at night, my friend’s invited me to joined her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I ride my motorcycle by following other friend’s side by side thru the traffic light.After took about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for we order and I choosed Bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course.After I finished ate the food, my friend’s and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading, it’s was long more than the first we went because the road is full of  cars and motorcycle.I tried to drive safely during traffic jam, then my friend’s and I go separated paths. I went to the west and others to south, at first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.I never ever walked past this road before and the environment make suck, it such a somber night I ever had, everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked up my left and right side but for sure, I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step a side, since my axiety got more high and make me hard to focus on my ride, I grabed my phone as soon as to call my friend, I said how scared I am and need a help faster. I can not ask for anything well during the phone, my hand and lip also shaking quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.A day at night my friend’s invited me to joined her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I ride my motorcycle by following other friend’s side by side thru the traffic light.After took about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for we order and I choosed Bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course.After I finished ate the food, my friend’s and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading, it’s was long more than the first we went because the road is full of cars and motorcycle.I tried to drive safely during traffic jam, then my friend’s and I go separated paths. I went to the west and others to south, at first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.I never ever walked past this road before and the environment make suck, it such a somber night I ever had, everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked up my left and right side but for sure, I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step a side, since my axiety got more high and make me hard to focus on my ride, I grabed my phone as soon as to call my friend, I said how scared I am and need a help faster. I can not ask for anything well during the phone, my hand and lip also shaking quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home. " Eki fahrezy" ]]> 2022-12-12 05:30:33 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322015 Amanda Nur Fitriandari 20221102040 amandanurfa035 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322177 e day at night my friend invited me to join her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I rode my motorcycle by following another friend’s side by side through the traffic light. After taking about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant. The location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long,  the chef gave us the menu to order and I chosed a Bakmi with baked dumpling as a topping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to the delicious main course. After I finished eating the food, my friend’s and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It was longer than the first time we went because the road was fulled by the cars and motorcycles.
I tried to ride carefully during a traffic jam, then my friend and I went on separate paths. I went to the west and others to the south. At first I felt enjoyable along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling angst on the road.
I had never ever walked past this road before and the surroundings makes it suck, it. It was such a bleak night. I looked, everything looked different. There is no light, even a little bit. I looked up to my left and right sides, but for sure, I only saw a dark, scary road. Then I stepped a side, since my anxiety got greater and made it hard to focus on my ride, I grabbed my phone as soon as to call my friend, I said how scared I am and help faster. I can not ask for anything well during the phone. My hand and lip also shaking quickly. I waited for her for ten minutes. Finally, she got me and picked me back. After the right way terrifying long trip, I fortunately safely arrived at my home. It was longer than the first time we went because the road was filled with cars and motorcycles.]]> 2022-12-12 05:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322177 Muhammad Reyhan Alfan muhammadreyhanalfan2003 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322431

    A day at night my friend invited me to join her opening restaurant in Jakarta.
I rode my motorcycle side by side by following of others my friends through the traffic light.
After taking for about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant. The location was in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not too long, a chef gave us the menu for us to order and I chose Bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course.
      After I finished eating the food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading, It was longer trip than the first we went because the road was crowded and filled by the cars and motorcycles. I tried to ride safely during traffic jam, then my friends and I went separating paths. I went to the west and others to south. At first, I enjoyed along the road, but suddenly I was scared and felt anxiety during the road.
      I had never pasted this road and the environment made me suck. It was such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There was no light even a little bit, I looked up my left and right side to make sure. I only watched a dark scared road. Then I stepped a side since my anxiety got more high and made me hard to focus on my riding. I grabbed my phone as soon as possible to call my friend. I said how scared I was and needed a help faster. I could not ask for anything well during the phone because my hand and lip shaked quickly. I waited for her for about ten minutes. Finally she got me and picked me back to the right way. After the very scared long trip I fortunately arrived safely at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322431 ruthartamevia8 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322923 One day at night, my friend invited me to join her opening restaurant in Jakarta.
I rode my motorcycle by following another friend side by side through the traffic light.
After took about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant. The location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, the chief gave us the menu for our order and I chosed Bakmi with matcha dumpling as a topping. I enjoyed to dinner due to the delicious main course.

After I finished eating the food, my friend and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It was longer than the first time we went because the road was filled by the cars and motorcycles.
I tried to ride safely during a traffic jam, then my friend and I went on separate paths. I went to the west and others to the south. At first I felt enjoyable along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety on the road.

I had never ever walked past this road before and the environment makes it suck, it. It was such a gloomy night. I looked, everything looked different. There is no light, even a little bit. I looked up to my left and right sides, but for sure, I only saw a dark, scary road. Then I stepped a side, since my anxiety got greater and made it hard to focus on my ride, I grabbed my phone as soon as to call my friend, I said how scared I am and help faster. I can not ask for anything well during the phone. My hand and lip also shaking quickly. I waited for her for five teen minutes. Finally, she found me and pick me back. After the right way, after the very scary long trip, I fortunately safely arrived at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322923 Evelyn Cahya Pratiwi (20221102039) https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322941 One night, my friend invited me to join her in the opening restaurant in Jakarta. I'm very excited to come to her opening restaurant. I rode my motorcycle by following another friend side by side through the traffic light.

After taking about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant. The location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, the chief gave us the menu to order and I chose a Bakmi with baked dumplings as a topping. I enjoyed the dinner due to the delicious main course.

After I finished eating the food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It was longer than the first time we went because the road was filled with cars and motorcycles.

I tried to ride safely during a traffic jam, then my friend and I went on separate paths. I went to the west and others to the south. At first, I felt enjoyable along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety on the road.

I had never walked past this road before and the environment makes it suck it. It was such a dark night. Everything looked different. There is no light, even a little bit. I looked up to my left and right sides, but I only saw a dark and scary road. Then I stepped aside since my anxiety got greater and made it hard to focus on my ride. I grabbed my phone to call my friend. I tell her how scared I am and ask her to help me. I can't ask for anything well during the phone. My hand and lip also shake quickly. I waited for her for ten minutes. Finally, she got me up and picked me back. After the right way and the very scary long trip, I safely arrived at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417322941 Annisa Azis 20221102017 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417324151 One day, my friend invited me to join her opening restaurant in Jakarta at night time. I rode my motorcycle by following my friend side by side through the traffic. After taking two hours on the road, we arrived at her restaurant. The location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chef gave us the menu for us to order. I chosed bakmi with baked dumplings as the topping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to the delicious courses. After i finished eating the food, my friend and i decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It takes longer time than the time we went there, because there was traffic jam. I tried to ride safely during the traffic jam until my friends and i went separate ways. I went to the west and my friend the other way. At first, i felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly i was scared and feeling anxiety during the road. I never went past this road and the environment was sucks. It was gloomy night that i ever had. Everything looks different. There's no light on the road. I looked side to side and the only thing i saw was a scary dark road. I step aside since my anxiety went more intense and ruined my focus. As soon as i grabbed my phone, i called my friend and told her about how scared i was and i needed a quick help. I can't speak clearly during the call since my hand and lip's shaking hardly. I waited for 10 minutes. Finally my friend came and guided me back to the right road. After the scary long trip, i finally arrived safely at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 05:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417324151 Nathania Kamela (20221102012) https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417324152    One night, my friends invited me to join her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I ride my motorcycle by following other friends, side by side through the traffic light. After took about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. I really enjoyed the dinner, due to the delicious food.  

   After I finished eating my food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading. It was longer than the first location we went, because there is traffic jam. I tried to ride carefully during the traffic jam, then my friends and I went separated paths. I went to the west, while my friends went the other way. At first, I enjoyed riding along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the ride. 

I never ride past this road before, and the environment is sucks. It was the gloomies night I have ever had. Everything seems different. The road is very dark. I looked at my left and right side, but the only thing I saw was a dark scary road. Then I step aside, since my anxiety became more intense, and it makes me hard to focus on my ride. 

I grabed my phone as soon as possible to call my friend. I told her how scared I am, and need a quick help. I can not speak well during the call, because my hands and lips are shaking hardly. I waited my friend for about ten minutes. Finally she arrived, and guide me to the right road. After the scary long trip, I safely arrived at home. ]]> 2022-12-12 05:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417324152 Wa Ode Fauziah Ichwani - 20221102035 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417324782 A day at night my friend invited me to joined her opening restaurant in Jakarta.
I rode my motorcycle by following other friend’s side by side through the traffic light.
After taking about two hours, we arrived in her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the road. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for us to order and I chose bakmi with bake dumpling as a topping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course.
After I finished eating the food, my friends and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading, it took longer than the first time we went, because the road filled by the cars and motorcycle.
I tried to ride safely during the traffic jam, then my friends and I went on separate paths. I went to the west and others to south, at first I felt enjoy along the way, but suddenly I was scared and felt anxiety during the road.
I had never been down this road before and the condition sucks, it was such a gloomy night I ever had, everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked up my left and right side but for sure, I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step a side, since my anxiety got more high and made me hard to focus on my ride, I quickly grabbed my phone to call my friend, I told my friend how scared I am and I need a quick help. I can not ask anything well during the phone, my hands and lip also trembled quickly. I waited her for ten minutes, finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, after a long trip which was very scary, I was lucky arrived at my home safely 

]]> 2022-12-12 05:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417324782 Anas Naufal Wijaya 20221102041 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417338087        One day at night, my friend's invited me to join her birthday party in jakarta. I Rode my motorcycle with my friend's following them throught traffic light. After riding across the country. We arrived at our friend's house to celebrate her birthday, inside the house we put our bag in our own room, and rest for the night to prepared the party for tomorrow.
       Tomorrow morning we prepared our thing for the party like we decorated the place, ordered some food and birthday cake, and preparing some equipment for the game later. After we finish decorated the place my friend dragged my birthday friend blindfold to surprise her. Then we gather around her to sing her happy birthday song, and eated the birthday cake together. Later we bring the equipment to played some game together like play board game, splinter, chess and others game until the sun down. After we satisfied play game, we prepared our bag to go back home at night.
      In the road we caught on traffic jam that Made long way home that we supposed arrive at 10 am, but we still on the road that time. Along the road we encountered a intersection that unfortunatly my friend's has to go the other side from my path that Made us to separate from each other. Along the road that i took it looked so dark and empty, because along the way i didn't saw any people or animal. That Made scared and felt siffer across my body. Because my anxiety so high i stop my motorcycle and step a side to call my friend's ask for come and pick, because i am to scared to drive. On the phone my voice sound so scared and my hand shakily while holding the phone. I waited  her for ten minutes, finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.
(Anas Naufal Wijaya)]]> 2022-12-12 05:57:05 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417338087 A day at night my friend's invited me to joined her opening restaurant in Jakarta. I rode my motorcycle by following other friend's side by side thrue the traffic light. After took about two hours,we arrived in her restaurant, the location is on front of the minimarket and beside the avenue/street. It doesn't take long, a chief gave us the menu for we order and I choose bakmi with bake dumpling as a toping. I really enjoyed the dinner due to delicious main course. ayunelay07 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417856452 After I finished ate the food, my friend's and I have decided to go back To Kelapa Gading. It was long time more than the first we went because the road filled by the cars and motorcycle. I tried to rode safely during traffic jam,then my friend's and I go to separate paths. I went to the west and others to south, at first I felt enjoyed on the road, but suddenly I was scared and felt anxiety during the road.

I never walked past this road before and the environment make suck, it such a gloomy night. I ever felt, everything looks different there's no light even a little bit. I look at my left and right side make sure, I only watched scared road. Then I step to side, since my anxiety got more high and make me hard to focus on my ride. I grabed my phone as soon as to call my friend, I said how scared I am and need a help faster. I can't ask for anything well during the phone, my hand and lip also shacking quickly. I have been waiting/I have wait her for ten minutes, finally she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scared long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.
-Ayu Nelly Rahma Wati-]]> 2022-12-12 14:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2417856452 Samuel Natanael 20221102028 https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2418487260 One day at night my friend invited me to join her in the opening restaurant in Jakarta.
I rode my motorcycle by following another friend side by side thru the traffic light.
After taking about two hours, we arrived at her restaurant, the location is in front of the minimarket and beside the avenue. Not so long, a chief gave us the menu for our orders and I chose Bakmi with baked dumplings as a topping. I enjoyed the dinner due to the delicious main course.

After I finished eating the food, my friend and I decided to go back to Kelapa Gading, it was long more than the first we went because the road was filled with cars and motorcycles.
I tried to ride safely during a traffic jam, then my friend and I went on separate paths. I went to the west and another to the south, at first I felt enjoyed along the way, but suddenly I was scared and feeling anxiety during the road.

I have never ever walked past this road before and the environment made me suck, it was such a gloomy night I ever had, and everything looks different. There is no light even a little bit, I looked up to my left and right side for sure, but I only watched a dark scared road. Then I step aside since my anxiety got higher and made me hard to focus on my ride, I grabbed my phone as soon as I called my friend, and I said how scared I am and needed help faster. I can not ask for anything well on the phone, and my hand and lip also shaked quickly. I waited for her for ten minutes, finally, she got me and picked me back to the right way, after the very scary long trip I fortunately safely arrived at my home.]]> 2022-12-12 23:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/paragraphwriting/zffz465l25gjiirp/wish/2418487260