https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv Make a post with your argument for which opening you think is most compelling and why. Your argument *must* be focused on the writing techniques and structure of each opening (not on which subject you find most interesting). en-us 2023-03-31 00:13:45 UTC 2025-08-18 04:26:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539875566 I think that intro 1 is more compelling because it has a better hook in my point of view ]]> 2023-03-31 13:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539875566 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539875927 I find that option 1 is the most compelling because it provides a good hook and also the amount of information]]> 2023-03-31 13:23:10 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539875927 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877193 i like intro 1 the most because they gave a fact which catches the reader's attention.

]]> 2023-03-31 13:24:12 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877193 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877212 I think the second opening is the most compelling because it talks about a major problem in United States. I am also doing a research about an issue in America and it sounds like a good hook for my topic .]]> 2023-03-31 13:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877212 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877466 I find intro 2 the most compelling because it introduces a topic, gives a little background information, and leaves us with a problem and using words like epidemic, and past few years but tell us no solutions making me want find out a more. ]]> 2023-03-31 13:24:25 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877466 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877680 I think the 3rd Intro because it gives out what the topic is going to be about in a couple of sentences with simple language.]]> 2023-03-31 13:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877680 1051595 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877688 I find intro #2 more compelling because its an actual problem in our country that we have to be more aware of ]]> 2023-03-31 13:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877688 10600917 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877818 I decided to pick intro 2 because I believe it's more compelling because it tells you information on a major problem in America]]> 2023-03-31 13:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539877818 20621711 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539892643 I find intro 2 more compelling because they introduce a problem and they used dramatic language. Makes me wanna know more information about the childhood obesity since they left us with no solution. ]]> 2023-03-31 13:36:03 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539892643 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539997280 I think that intro 2 is more compelling because it sates the problem right from the start. You understand the message the writer is trying to get across which is child obesity is increasing in the U.S.]]> 2023-03-31 14:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2539997280 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2547349594 Intro 2 is more captivating and the language they use captures the audience better. The message the author is trying to get to you about obesity increasing is very understood better which I find more compelling.]]> 2023-04-07 19:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/zeypeeivhe6vrltv/wish/2547349594