https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd good vibes only en-us 2018-11-28 15:09:31 UTC 2024-05-25 10:25:11 UTC hello@padlet.com emilooners https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/308842041 2018-11-28 15:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/308842041 emilooners https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/308850137 this should make you feel something]]> 2018-11-28 15:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/308850137 sophiewallace02 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309780940 Really great job! Try to slow down a little bit and when you talk about Paul try and make it a little more natural. I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the character! Again great job!]]> 2018-11-30 14:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309780940 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782038 This was so good! You made some very funny choices that made the whole thing very believable. At the beginning, it felt slightly rushed, or like it could use a couple pauses, but you started to add more as the monologue progressed and the ending was hilarious. Amazing job!!]]> 2018-11-30 14:33:54 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782038 rowankl321 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782053 I thought it was really good, the memorization was perfect, the only thing you could do to make it better would be to slow it down a little between certain lines]]> 2018-11-30 14:33:56 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782053 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782054 I really enjoyed this! It simultaneously had some great comedy and some very real emotion, and I think the two complemented each other really well. You did a good job of showing your character trying to suppress her emotions, which not only made them feel more authentic and compelling, but was also really central to a lot of what made the monologue funny.]]> 2018-11-30 14:33:56 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782054 drc2002123 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782152 That was great your pacing was great on you hit the funny lines perfectly. I really enjoyed your portrayal of the character as a lovable idiot who just wants her husband to love her. I think you could have shown a little more intensity and get a little more desperate as you go along and really spill your heart out at the end ]]> 2018-11-30 14:34:07 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782152 joshuajones2019 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782178 You did a great job with taking the absolutely ridiculous character very seriously, I never doubted your portrayal for a second.]]> 2018-11-30 14:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782178 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782290 Really good job. You had a good mix between drama and comedy, and I liked the interpretation you chose. Just one or two spots where it seemed like you were pausing to remember the next word, but very minimal. Good job]]> 2018-11-30 14:34:21 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782290 701464 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782494 That was hallarious and really well executed. I guess there could be some strategically placed pauses but over all it was a really good monologue.]]> 2018-11-30 14:34:46 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782494 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782791 I loved this monologue choice for you, it was really dramatic but fun as well, and the emotion you used when you spoke, and the tears that were shining in your eyes were very authentic and added to the overall performance of the piece.]]> 2018-11-30 14:35:15 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782791 mab_rongione https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782859 babe, sooooo good. very funny. only a little serious. the only thing i would say is that you seem to have a nervous habit of swaying back and forth as you talk but i thought your other actions and your emotions were really good and genuine]]> 2018-11-30 14:35:22 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309782859 dylan_pickle https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309783587 I liked the commitment you showed in this, and how the monologue was a mix of comedic moments and genuine emotion. You stayed in character well, and didn’t sacrifice any dramatic moments to try to make those moments funny ]]> 2018-11-30 14:36:28 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309783587 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309783944 That was so good Emily. You had such good timing all the funny parts were so funny. All the serious parts you would naturally pause. Al of the dramatic parts were expressed so well. So good my woman ]]> 2018-11-30 14:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309783944 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309784306 You could start off about more sassy, like ha I ate the divorce papers rather than sad. Use it against him almost as a threat]]> 2018-11-30 14:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309784306 alanagpmalik https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309790126 it was so great! i loved the emotion and i felton like you could really see Charles. the only thing i would work on is timing, but not too much, really great job]]> 2018-11-30 14:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/309790126 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/311524707 2018-12-05 18:37:30 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/311524707 701464 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312929629 Excellent vocabulary and word choice! This was really funny, and I loved the way you described the whole experience at the bad hotel. Valid reasons to hate cereal👾]]> 2018-12-10 14:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312929629 lanie304 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312932790 literally amazing character couldn’t have done it better. can’t think of anyone who could play it better. this is super good and I love how u wrote it. amazing I loved it]]> 2018-12-10 14:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312932790 aidanmo_school https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312933493 Emily this was awesome! So well written and I loved how you came b@ck to the fruitloops  at the very end, and everything was so relatable and funny. Great job!]]> 2018-12-10 14:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312933493 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312933836 Emily... are you okay? This was way too detailed not to be a real, very specific, moderately traumatic experience]]> 2018-12-10 14:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312933836 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312933845 That was so funny, Emily! I loved how conversational your monologue felt. Even though you couldn’t Be more wrong about the delicious treat that I call cereal, I was always engaged in your monologue.]]> 2018-12-10 14:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312933845 drc2002123 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312934499 That was really good. Obviously you had the character down and the delivery on your lines were perfect. The movements were great and all in all it was a awesome monologue ]]> 2018-12-10 14:32:11 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312934499 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312934973 This was written so well, and on top of that, an excellent performance ]]> 2018-12-10 14:33:01 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312934973 alanagpmalik https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312935380 glad you took my notes on diction! it sounded really good. ‘smack’ added a lot to that line lol. great job]]> 2018-12-10 14:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312935380 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312936912 Really good job Emily, great writing and acting. Keep up the good work]]> 2018-12-10 14:35:56 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312936912 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312943532 You are a talented writer Emily. It was so funny and all the detail was perfect. Wonderful.]]> 2018-12-10 14:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312943532 lanie304 https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312944157 ur character sucked. wtf]]> 2018-12-10 14:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/emilooners/xd/wish/312944157