https://padlet.com/30053136/zbecj6daduenq5zc Made with wonder en-us 2022-02-07 15:39:16 UTC 2022-07-14 10:56:14 UTC hello@padlet.com 30053136 https://padlet.com/30053136/zbecj6daduenq5zc/wish/2101948239 Having two feedbacks from my Academic English tutor about my two writing tasks essays. I realised; I have made several mistakes on that essay. My tutor commented some good points such as first paragraph is all copied with a few words changed, did not have no clear thesis, no clear outline which matches the paragraphs, and did not write reference list and he gave 82% and 100%, which was failed marks. 

Firstly, I wanted to correct my all mistakes that were given to my feedback and I will do my best in my next Writing task and Research project esssay. There are several mistakes, which are , I did not write strong thesis statement and outline, reference list, did not follow the instruction, do not use essential vocabulary, plagiarism which is copied information from another source, grammar errors that I made my previous essays.

Secondly, I have to follow essay structure, this means I did not write thesis statement, make strong argument and outline then I have to do various things such as use good vocabulary, write reference list on bottom of the essay, avoid plagiarism via use synonyms, paraphrase the sentence, change active voice to passive voice, change negative to positive and change the order of the sentence because I copied source from some websites such as Wikipedia and some websites. Then, I want to write my own words, which are not copy from another source. After that I have to avoid grammar errors because mistakenly, I have made grammar errors. 

Finally, I have got the lowest marks in my two tasks. In task 1, I have got task response 20%, structure 30%, vocabulary and grammar 30% and overall marks is that 82%. In the task 2, task response and 20%, vocabulary and grammar 30% and overall marks is that 100%. I worried about these marks and I will prepare more and will give my best in my next tasks.

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