https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9 What is needed for that "ADVANCED" score. en-us 2018-03-18 21:37:50 UTC 2018-03-19 18:59:04 UTC hello@padlet.com juliesmith4 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243704616 The student response does not demonstrate command of the conventions of Standard English. 

This means that the student had many grammatical errors and many mistakes in mechanics. ]]> 2018-03-19 18:44:55 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243704616 0142867 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243704742 The student response demonstrates some command of the conventions of standard  English at an appropriate level of complexity. There may be errors in mechanics, grammar, and usage that occasionally impede  understanding, but the meaning is generally clear.

The student wrote about the topic but not to the full extent, with errors in grammar and mechanics.]]> 2018-03-19 18:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243704742 0142795 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243705018 Uses clear reasoning supported by relevant text based evidence in the development of the claim or topic.

this means you use good evidence to support something relevant from the text

]]> 2018-03-19 18:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243705018 0136182 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243705209 uses some reasoning and text-based evidence in the development of the claim or topic.

site evidence from a topic to help you with your writing ,]]> 2018-03-19 18:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243705209 0131365 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706101 addresses the prompt and provides minimal development of the claim or topic that is limited in its appropriateness to the task, purpose, and audience;

does minimal amount of the topic and does not puts limited in its appropriateness to what the task is ]]> 2018-03-19 18:46:48 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706101 0149323 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706429 uses limited reasoning and text-based evidence

This means that the student used very little reasoning and text-based evidence]]> 2018-03-19 18:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706429 0140004 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706443 demonstrates limited comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and/or inferentially by providing a minimally accurate analysis .


]]> 2018-03-19 18:47:21 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706443 0140012 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706470 -demonstrates full comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and inferentially by providing an accurate analysis; 


]]> 2018-03-19 18:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706470 0142081 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706502 The student response demonstrates limited command of the conventions of standard English at an appropriate level of complexity. There may be errors in mechanics, grammar, and usage that often impede understanding. 

This means that the student  ]]> 2018-03-19 18:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706502 0140969 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706524 Uses some but not many text-based evidence that shows or describes what the topic is about.]]> 2018-03-19 18:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706524 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706605 demonstrates basic comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and/or inferentially by providing a generally accurate analysis; 

the student understands basic ideas and has a general summary of the text]]> 2018-03-19 18:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706605 0134788 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706793 The student response demonstrates comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and/or inferentially by providing a mostly accurate analysis

This means that the student response]]> 2018-03-19 18:47:54 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706793 7369988 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706909 That means, demonstrates a relevant text, also is a clear and coherent writing]]> 2018-03-19 18:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243706909 0142096 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243707370 -uses clear reasoning supported by text evidence in the development of the claim or topic 
written with clear writing 
maintains effective style.]]> 2018-03-19 18:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243707370 0133804 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243708221 address the prompt and provides mostly effective development of the claim or topic that is mostly appropriate to the task, purpose, and audience.

The student will ]]> 2018-03-19 18:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243708221 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243708612 demonstrates some organization with somewhat coherent writing;
has a style that is some what effective ]]> 2018-03-19 18:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243708612 0140969 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243708853 Uses some reasoning and text-based evidence in the claim or topic;

Demonstrates some organization with somewhat coherent writing;
Has a style that is somewhat effective]]> 2018-03-19 18:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/zaejgnhypts9/wish/243708853