Writing Grade 1 by MAGED AHMED NAWAR https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490 en-us 2021-05-06 07:09:51 UTC 2021-05-06 07:40:09 UTC hello@padlet.com Mariam magednawar https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497005779 1- Very good use of past tense. 
2- Adjectives were used really wisely. 
3- One thing, maybe you need to lessen the use of the word and. 

Great job, dear ! ]]> 2021-05-06 07:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497005779 Yazan, magednawar https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497015729 1- Such a great word wizard. 
2- Great imagination writing a fiction story. 
3- The way you retold the story is awesome, 
4- Did you use speech marks?

]]> 2021-05-06 07:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497015729 Abdallah Jumaa, magednawar https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497032761 1- Very intersting introduction. 
2- Sequence words are great. 
3- I liked the adjectives you used to describe how people feel (excited, confused)
4- Giving voice to your story was wonderful. 
5- Adverbs like slowly and quickly. ]]> 2021-05-06 07:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497032761 Adam, magednawar https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497050547 1- I liked the characters. 
2- Good use of indirect speech. 
3- How about making it a bit longer. ]]> 2021-05-06 07:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497050547 Fatema, magednawar https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497059459 1- Great use of compound sentences. 
2- Adding sounds to your story made it very intersting. (while) 
3- Great use of direct speech. 
4- Sequence word ;) 
5- There is a moral and that's awesome, it's all about the bliss of giving. ]]> 2021-05-06 07:31:19 UTC https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497059459 Nour, magednawar https://padlet.com/magednawar/za6bv8wk969bi490/wish/1497075366 1- I liked how you introduced the setting and the characters. 
2- Adverbs like suddenly, past tense, and adjectives. 
3- Super ending. 

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