8-1 Mindmap D -- Constructive Criticism by Megan Wilkinson

mwilkinson2 — 2016-09-15 15:20:07 UTC

jejoiner — 2016-09-15 16:30:28 UTC

I like how well organized it is.

I like how you explained the causes as well as what started them, but you could use colors that are easier to read.

jtaylor61 — 2016-09-15 16:31:01 UTC

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:45:13 UTC

I think that each main idea should be different colors because if you need to go look back at it later it would be easier to find.

cruiz8 — 2016-09-15 16:46:29 UTC

I think you need to have different colors for the different topics

JuliannJones — 2016-09-15 16:48:14 UTC

I think there needs to be more coloring with the main ideas, but other than that I think it looks very good.

Each idea should have a different color

cray3 — 2016-09-15 16:48:55 UTC

mcampbell23 — 2016-09-15 16:51:01 UTC

Your ideas are good but needs more color!

such a mono colored mind map, with detailed explanations on each main topic.

dnewcomb1 — 2016-09-15 16:52:25 UTC

asingh9 — 2016-09-15 16:54:17 UTC

Your ideas very well constructed and easy to understand, but a little more color to differentiate them would be nice.

jvalladolid — 2016-09-15 16:55:19 UTC

the only problem I had with this was the colors other then that i really liked it

Love it

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:56:08 UTC

dnoland2 — 2016-09-15 16:56:38 UTC

I like your mind map, but..... You could've used more colors to make it easier to understand. <3

dmartinez5 — 2016-09-15 19:00:55 UTC

you explained everything really good and got most of the main ideas in short explanations

I agree with everyone else coloring in the different sections would help understand where your points separate other than that y'all had some really good points.

dserna — 2016-09-15 19:40:55 UTC

stsosie — 2016-09-15 21:19:24 UTC

This is a little bit confusing because the colors are like all the same.

too monocromatic

pehawkins — 2016-09-15 21:36:25 UTC

rbamburg — 2016-09-16 00:24:20 UTC

Shakers didn't come from Utopian communities. Both Shakers and Utopian communities originated from religious reform. Both existed without any concern about each other, therefore you should have a box that generalizes new communities and have two separate boxes coming from it, Utopian, and Shakers.

nisidro — 2016-09-16 02:01:26 UTC

good organization

I really like how you guys used different colors for your topics and the info. You guys have some good information up in there. (:

amartinez46 — 2016-09-16 02:56:11 UTC

wrowan2 — 2016-09-16 03:31:44 UTC

Great and is very intellectual but each section should be a different color cause it makes them seem to be the same

sdelfin — 2016-09-16 04:31:15 UTC

you had good information but you should have changed the color to make it easier to read.

rvilla1 — 2016-09-16 04:33:25 UTC

it has great information but can use different colors for each topic or main ideas.

Religious reform created Utopian and Shakers.

eriesen — 2016-09-16 05:12:18 UTC

skandler — 2016-09-16 06:04:42 UTC

Could use a better color scheme

jruiz6 — 2016-09-16 06:39:59 UTC

the map was well structured but it was missing important names