Give your own supporting argument for your assigned side with a clear POINT, EXPLANATION, EXAMPLE and LINK (PEEL).

TEAM <SIDE> - <NAME>

This is because our brain is mostly composed of water, we tends to be more focused when doing something when drinking water than soft drinks as soft drinks are composed of sugar which makes us distracted easily and might sway our attention to other things and also ultimately reduce our attention span.

Research has shown that excessive soft drink comsumption can be associated with increase in distractibility due to the high sugar content

Therefore, with the consumption of water, there are lower risk of health issues such as diabetes and hypertension.

Shoes provide more coverage than slippers, protecting your feet from the elements and potential hazards. Additionally, shoes have more padding than slippers, thus reducing pressure on your feet, which not only allows you to walk further and longer, but also reduces strain on your feet.

For example, if a person were to go on a outdoor walk, shoes would protect their feet from water if they stepped in a puddle. While with slippers, their feet would simply get drenched. Additionally, the more structured design, thicker soles for cushioning in shoes would absorb the impacts from walking, which reduces strain, and allows the person to walk further. While with slippers, they lack proper padding and would put more pressure on the person's feet, reducing their ability to walk for longer distances.

Therefore, shoes are generally better than slippers because of the higher comfort they provide which allows a person to walk for longer periods of time.

This is because, fruits have natural flavouring, hence no cooking is required, making it convenient for people to eat good food with ease. However, vegetables need to be cooked and flavouring needs to be added for it to taste nicer, which generally takes up a lot of time and effort.

For example, when in a rush to work or school, there is no time to cook vegetables, but with a simple wash, fruits can already be consumed enjoyably.

Thus, fruits are better as they are more convenient than vegetables. Moreover, they also taste nicer than vegetables without any additional effort to make it more enjoyable, therefore making fruits a better option as compared to vegetables.

Video games can lead to bad posture and eyesight, these types of games are addictive and can cause lack of sleep. On the other hand, sports encourages your body to be more active, causing you to feel more energised and healthy.

Research has shown that video games emit more radiation that will be absorbed by the eye, leading to health issues like myopia and will strain the eyes. However playing sports allows you to be exposed to the right amount of uv rays from the sun which gives the body sufficient vitamin D. This will help promote stronger bones. This also allows a higher rate of oxygenated blood to flow through all parts of the body making you feel more energised and clear minded while and after playing sports

Therefore, we should practice the habit of playing sports regularly instead of playing video games, to promote healthier lifestyles among people.

E- Cats, unlike dogs, practice self grooming which keeps them clean and by consequence makes them lower maintenance. This is because cats have tongue which contain small barbs, however, dogs don't have the same tongues as cats, which make them unable to clean themselves, making them more dirty and harder to maintain. Cats also smell better because of this.

E- The religion of Islam mentions the uncleanliness of dogs. This can be seen in a hadith where the Prophet Muhammad (S.A.W) instructs washing places licked by a dog several times, emphasizing the need for purification.

L- In conclusion, Cats are better pets as they are less maintenance and transmits less diseases.

Experimenting with different looks can be exciting. In a world influenced heavily by media and social trends, many people turn to hair dye as a way to stand out or align with popular styles. A new hair color can also enhance facial features, complement skin tone, and boost one’s self-confidence.Scientific research has shown that truly black natural hair does not exist. What is commonly perceived as black hair is actually a very dark shade of brown. Achieving jet black color requires artificial dye, which can be more damaging than other shades due to the high concentration of chemicals used. In some cases, dyed black hair may cause more harm than bleaching or coloring hair in lighter tones.In conclusion, while natural black (or dark brown) hair has its own beauty, dyed hair allows for greater self-expression, creativity, and confidence. For many individuals, dyed hair feels more exciting and empowering, making it a preferred choice over their natural hair color.

Starting off with our argument, long pants prove themselves superor to short pants as they fulfill all the major criteria we have in our policy. Long pants are religion inclusive, as they are required to be worn in some religions due to beliefs. Long pants are also safe against harsh terrains, bites from insects or small animals, and dangerous hazards such as sharp or protruding objects. Long pants provide more practical usage, as there are a wide variety of pants that can be used for different occasions from track pants to jeans to cargo pants which provide practical availability for different activities such as exercise or when going out in cold weather during winter. Furthermore, long pants provide great comfort when going somewhere cold or doing sports, offering protection against elements such as rain or cold.

People may say that short pants provide more comfort due to increased airflow. however, due to the flexible variety and availability of different types of long pants, people may choose more breathable options for better comfort in the heat.

Use these questions to guide your feedback on your classmate’s body paragraphs. Be specific, kind, and helpful!

POINT

• Can I clearly identify the main point of the paragraph?

• Does the main idea support the writer’s stand/position on the topic?

• Is the main idea focused or are there too many ideas in one paragraph?

• “Your main idea is clear and supports your stand well.”

• “I think your paragraph has too many ideas—try focusing on just one main point.”

ELABORATION

• Does the writer explain his or her main idea clearly?

• Is the explanation logical and easy to follow?

• Are there any parts where the reasoning seems unclear or incomplete?

• “I liked your explanation about why the issue is important—it made sense!”

• “This part could use a bit more explanation so I can understand your thinking better.”

EXAMPLES

• Are there examples to support the main idea?

• Are the examples relevant and convincing?

• Would adding another example make the paragraph stronger?

• “Your example about [insert example] was strong and helped me understand your point.”

• “Maybe add a clearer example to support this idea better.”

LINK

• Did the writer provide a Link to summarise his or her argument?

• Did the writer paraphrase the Link or was the LINK a repetition of the POINT?

• "Your LINK summarised your paragraph very clearly!" or "You paraphrased your LINK so that there was no repetition of keywords."

• "Your LINK did not contain the main point of the paragraph" or "You should paraphrase the keywords in the LINK so that it is not repetitive."