Personal Narrative Stories: Peer Review Table by Cristin Monaco

FIRE

2025-09-24 22:27:19 UTC

Makana's writing was the fire

2025-09-24 22:28:07 UTC

The story was amazing! I like the part where river describes the moment when she's petting the dog. The story was so good, I thought that a professional writer couldn't do better. So, 10/10.

2025-09-24 22:28:23 UTC

2025-09-24 22:28:39 UTC

nathans writing was great.

kewl

2025-09-24 22:28:48 UTC

it was a good story! :D

SO KEWL

2025-09-24 22:29:23 UTC

Benji''s writing was amazing!

2025-09-24 22:29:46 UTC

I liked his dialogue

grandma

2025-09-24 22:29:56 UTC

GREAT STORY :D

2025-09-24 22:29:57 UTC

I think Wangari's story was great.

2025-09-24 22:30:13 UTC

dude. omg. so good.

2025-09-24 22:30:15 UTC

Very nice !

2025-09-24 22:30:22 UTC

Greyson.

2025-09-24 22:30:34 UTC

2025-09-24 22:30:44 UTC

Yours was super cool and sounded fun!

Beau's story was so good it was very descriptive It shows how it can be sad to travel from place to place. I don't see anything to improve.

2025-09-24 22:30:53 UTC

2025-09-24 22:31:03 UTC

My partners story was great and fun but there were some parts to be improved.

2025-09-24 22:31:05 UTC

I like how he wants to be a fire dancer

2025-09-24 22:31:06 UTC

something engradeble

2025-09-24 22:31:06 UTC

She has so many details and why she loves Christmas.

2025-09-24 22:31:06 UTC

WOW!

2025-09-24 22:31:08 UTC

GREAT STORY

2025-09-24 22:31:25 UTC

Elias's writing was fire

2025-09-24 22:31:29 UTC

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2025-09-24 22:31:53 UTC

this story was really good the author really expressed emotion well

2025-09-24 22:32:20 UTC

I loved her story it has lots of emotion.

2025-09-24 22:32:24 UTC

ola

2025-09-24 22:32:59 UTC

The story was awesome he described it like I was really there it had a lot of detail

2025-09-24 22:33:13 UTC

2025-09-24 22:33:14 UTC

his story was amazing he had great dialog he got to the point at the end with no comments from me

the story was so good and detailed! loved it, it was amazing

2025-09-24 22:33:20 UTC

2025-09-25 03:50:47 UTC

Beau's story was so good it was very descriptive. It shows how it can be sad to travel from place to place. I don't see anything to improve.

2025-09-25 06:22:55 UTC

it was very cool and your story just comes to mind and I can picture it .

2025-10-01 21:43:39 UTC

was super fun to read

Meow

2025-10-02 19:25:09 UTC

I think that Kira's story was great I was able to picture it in my head and also I love mango trees :>

2025-10-02 19:46:02 UTC

They had a lot of detailed, her expression in what she was writing I hope she goes back to Salem because she absolutely loved it.

I am never staying home again!

2025-10-02 22:47:09 UTC

His was super good and suspenseful.....

2025-10-03 00:05:43 UTC

2025-10-03 02:25:22 UTC

Kira's story was amazing she used dialog perfectly I like how she used show don't tell words to tell her story

I loved it!

2025-10-03 11:27:35 UTC

It was amazing!

noicee

2025-10-03 19:22:28 UTC

amazing! It had good descriptive words

Mily

2025-10-03 21:09:27 UTC

Her story was so descriptive and emotional and overall perfect.

GREAT

2025-10-03 22:44:23 UTC

Lucas's writing was great.

2025-10-03 23:37:40 UTC

really great story luke

Cute story for a dog!

2025-10-04 03:21:52 UTC

2025-10-06 18:42:18 UTC

The cover was very beach and vaction style.Very nice

2025-10-14 21:02:06 UTC

everyone did great!

2025-10-14 21:05:52 UTC

I didn't get to read most of them but sure they are all amazing!