Writing a letter of advice by Netanela Levy https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw Writing assignment 9/10 en-us 2019-09-12 08:10:10 UTC 2019-11-06 15:34:36 UTC hello@padlet.com Tair and Liraz English assignment- Advice to Moran 327939799 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383117476 Hey Moran!, how are you?
We heard that you dont have enough time for yourself as you have so many homeworks and house chores. We can absolutely understand what you’re dealing with.
 Here are some tips that will help you to deal with your
problems in the best way.
1. Make a daily schedule, It will help you organize your time more efficiently.
2.Do not delay your assignments. Do them right away.
3. If you are stuck with your homework and dont understand how to do it, ask a friend for help.
It's always good to have someone who helps you and supports you. When something is difficult for you, just think of how good you are and how amazing you are.
Social life is important.
To be honest, Real friends will always be there for you and will help you with bad days.
Now all you have to do is to use those tips! We really hope they’ll help you.
Tair and Liraz.]]> 2019-09-12 08:16:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383117476 Yonatan&Gal - Busy Moran 326090636 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383161632 Dear Moran,

We're sorry to hear that you have a lot of work to do and you don’t have time to meet up and talk with your friends.
We advise you to ask your friends if they want to do homework with you or study together, thus when you finish, you can hang out and be with each other. Another tip we advise you is to do homework as soon as you get it, like that you don’t have a pile of homework that neefs to be made all for one day.

Once again, we’re really sorry to hear about your situation, and we hope it gets better.

From your sincerely,
Yonatan and Gal.
]]> 2019-09-12 10:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383161632 327838587 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383168123 English Task
Moriel Sillam and Eliran Gelberg

Dear Moran,
We heard about your problem that you don’t have any free time with your friends. We identify and understand you because ,we are also students who study in a high-level class and we don't have any free time with friends like you. However, we succeed to hang out with friends and we have some advices for you to hang out with your friends too.
 The first one is to do your homework with your friends and when you finish them, you can hang out with your friends.
 The second one is to go with your friends for a walk with your dog so you can also spend time with them and finish one of your tasks too.
 The last one is to suggest your parents go to a restaurant for at least one day a week so as a result, you will have more free time in the afternoon because you won't set the table for dinner. 
We hope that we helped you and now we are sure you will have more free time.

Moriel and Eliran

]]> 2019-09-12 11:08:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383168123 326707437 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383168141 Dan shine and Noam levi - busy moran
‏Dear moran
First of all,we really understand how you feel, me and my friends didn’t have any time to meet each other except from school, but luckily for you we founded( found) a perfect way to solve this problem. After every day of school we are all going to one (of) our houses , there we eat lunch, doing our homework and studying for tests together. (After) Every hour (we) take a break and chat with each other, that way we can study and have fun together. I really hope you’ll use my advice and enjoy it!
]]> 2019-09-12 11:08:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383168141 Assignment shira and tomer g 214950396 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383168335 Hey Dana,

We know how you feel, and we know that it’s a hard time for you, we understand that your mother spies on you and wants to know everything about you and we know how that makes you feel.
So we gathered up a few advices that can help you fix your problem.
First of all you should talk to your mother and tell her that you need some privacy and that she should provide it. Tell her how you feel about her spying on you all the time, and how it’s very uncomfortable for you. You should also remind her that you are going through puberty which is a very confusing stage in your life and that you are discovering new things about the world and about yourself every day, and that you don’t want to share any new piece of information with your mother.
We hope our advices will solve all your problems.

Kind Regards,
Tomer G and Shira.
]]> 2019-09-12 11:09:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383168335 Tomer g - edit number 1 for dan and noam’s Assignment 214950396 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383169766  -
‏Dear moran
First of all, I really do understand how you feel, my friends and I didn’t have any time to meet each other except from school too. So we founded a perfect way for you to solve your problem. At the end of a school day, we all go to someone’s house, there we eat lunch, do our homework and study for tests together. Every hour we take a break and chat with each other, that way we can study and have fun together. I really hope my advice will help you solve your problem!, have a nice day!.
]]> 2019-09-12 11:14:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383169766 Tomer g - edit number 2 for moriel and eliran’s assignment. - 214950396 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383172162
Dear Moran,
We heard about the problem you have and we know how you feel. My friends and I also don’t have any free time to spend with our friends. However, we still manage to hang out with our friends and we have some advices for you to hang out with your friends too.
 The first one is to do your homework with your friends and when you finish it all, you can hang out with your friends and this way you also finish your tasks and also meet your friends.
 The second advice is for you to go with your friends for a walk with your pet so you can also spend time with them and finish one of your tasks too.
 The last advice is for you to suggest your parents to  go to a restaurant at least one time a week so as a result, you will have more free time in the afternoon because you won't need to set the table for dinner. 
We hope that we helped you and wish you good luck.
]]> 2019-09-12 11:22:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383172162 noamgoldenberg2005 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383172282 Hi moran.noam and itay

We understand your problem that you have a lot of things to do after you come back home from school.
Try not to delay your homework and your projects.
We have this problem too in our own lives, we have a lot of homework and lots of work assignments and tests and we also want to play on our computer and/or watch TV and life made us understand that school comes before other activities and it could change our future and even our life!
All you need to do is to focus on learning and school because it's the most important part of your life.
Hope you will learn from our advice!
And don't return on past mistakes.]]> 2019-09-12 11:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383172282 Chen and Nir 214895112 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383181240 Hey tom,

We understand that you are really upset and nervous, but don't worry we are here to help you. In our opinion,
The first thing you can to do is explain to your friends the homework and socialize with them instead of let your friends to copy your homework, and that way you can really make them understand the subject. 

The second thing you can do is tell your teacher/parents about this problem and they can help you solve it.

In addition, you can tell your friends how much it hurts you something can really change the situation
 
However we think that you should improve your self confidence.

We hope that you will solve your problem.
          

                                                       from,
                                                       Chen&Nir]]> 2019-09-12 11:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383181240 Chen and Nir 214895112 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383182038 Hey tom,

We understand that you are really upset and nervous, but don't worry, we are here to help you. In our opinion,
The first thing you can do is to explain to your friends the homework and socialize with them instead of let your friends to copy your homework, and that way you can really make them understand the subject. 

The second thing you can do is tell your teacher/parents about this problem and they can help you solve it.

In addition, you can tell your friends how much it hurts you something can really change the situation
 
However we think that you should improve your self confidence.

We hope that you will solve your problem.
          

                                                       from,
                                                       Chen&Nir]]> 2019-09-12 11:51:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383182038 Advice for "Hard-Working Tom" Harel&Mai 214897381 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383190751 Hey Tom,
We saw what you wrote and wanted to tell you {Ori corrects: “that”} we really understand how you feel. It's pretty hard to feel like you're  being used by your friends for copying homework.
In our opinion copying someone else's work is not honest. We advise you to test your friends' loyalty by not providing homework to copy. 
Real friends don't use other people! If these students don't want to be your friends anymore then you'll know that they weren't really your friends and that they were just using you for their selfish needs.
Honestly, you can find other teens who'll want to be your friends because they like you (and not because they can use you for something like that). 
If some of your previous friends still want to remain friends with you then they are truly your friends (and obviously You should stay friends).
There are probably many good people in the school. We are sure you will find close new friends.
We hope we helped you.
Mai & Harel]]> 2019-09-12 12:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383190751 Noa and Meital- Moran https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383247576 Hi Moran, first of all we have to tell you that there are times that we feel like you, it is very hard to do your homework, study for exams and do all of the other activities you have after school, but with all the hard work you have to remember that being with your friends is like a food but for your soul, it's really important for your happiness to meet with them outside of school. Our advise to you is to set a day that all your friends are free from their tasks and schedule a meeting on that day for every week. Once you have this day set in your calendar you'll have to finish your homework before that meeting, and if you can't you can even do your homework together and help each other. We promise it will help you with your problem.

Meital and Noa.]]> 2019-09-12 13:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/383247576 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384160741 Hi moran.noam and itay

We understand your problem that you have a lot of things to do after you come back home from school.
Try not to delay your homework and your projects.
We have this problem too in our own lives, we have a lot of homework and lots of work assignments and tests and we also want to play on our computer and/or watch TV and life made us understand that school comes before other activities and it could change our future and even our life!
All you need to do is to focus on learning at school because it's the most important part of your life.
Hope you will learn from our advice!
And don't return on past mistakes.]]> 2019-09-14 18:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384160741 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384162071 English Task

Moriel Sillam and Eliran Gelberg


Dear Moran,

We understand that you don’t have any free time to spend with your friends. We identify and understand you because we also study in a class with high learning demands. We also don't have enough free time to spend with friends like you. However, we do find times to hang out with our friends and we have some tips and advices for you to  that may help you.
First, do your homework with your friends and when you finish them, you can hang out with them.

Second, go with your friends for a walk with your dog so you can also spend time with them and finish one of your chores too.

Finally we suggest you to go with your parents to a restaurant at least once a week. that way, instead of setting the dinner table, You will have more time for yourself.

Good luck.

Moriel and Eliran]]> 2019-09-14 18:17:52 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384162071 Adi gerby edit number 1 for moriel and eliran 214950396 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384169850 Hey Moran,
We heard about the problem you have and we know how you feel. My friends and We also don’t have any free time to spend with our friends. However, we still try to hang out with our friends and we have some advices for you to hang out with your friends too.
 The first one is to do your homework with your friends and when you finish it all, you can hang out with your friends and this way you also finish your tasks and also meet your friends.
 The second advice is for you to go with your friends for a walk with your pet so you can also spend time with them and finish one of your tasks too.
 The last advice is for you to suggest your parents to  go to a restaurant at least one time a week so as a result, you will have more time in the afternoon because you won't need to set the table for dinner. 
We hope that we helped you and wish you good luck.

]]> 2019-09-14 19:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384169850 Shimon and Adi-Dana https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384173655 Hi Dana first of all we mast tell you that there are times that we feel like you it is so annoying when people are are baing nosy. So we heve a solution for you and the solution is to sher the small part that you don't cer to sher that don't take to much time to sher do it every time your mam asks you how was your dey at scool or How was the party she will still wish for more so you cane tell her more or you can lie and tell her that there is no more. In both options
she will stop baing so nosy because the thing that made her being so nosy in the first place is thet she  wes and still worried about you she cer about you but you don't giving her a way in to your life when you back from scool she don't know if someone boycott you or something. Anyway this is teenagers way the better way if you ask me is when you come back from a party go to the bat take something to eat and heve a talk white your mother and let me tell you why I will now going to tell something my Grandmother ones tolled me"you know that your Great-Grandmother died recentlyy in the day she died I wos ther I already knew that is a matter of a few days and I thought to myself that Half I wasted fainting with my mom and now it's already over" your mom is not that nosy person that you trying to avoid she is a good frand that took cer of you for all of your life so take wate you take do wate you do but Understand that your mom gest wants the best for you bye.



]]> 2019-09-14 19:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384173655 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384238545  Shimon and Adi

Hi Dana first of all we must tell you that there are times that we feel like you, it is so annoying when people are are being nosy. So we have a solution for you and the solution is to share the small part that you don't care to share, do it every time your mom asks you how was your day at school or something like that. Soon she will stop being so nosy because the thing that made her being so nosy in the first place is thet she  was  worried about you she cares about you but you don't give her a way in to your life. Like  when you come back from school and you don't talk to her she don't know if someone boycott you or something. So In conclusion you need to sher just enough to make her happy wish you luck Shimon and Adi]]> 2019-09-15 06:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384238545 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384238765 Maxim edit to Noam and Itay

Hey Moran, We understand your problem that you have a lot of things to do after you come back home from school.
We have this problem too in our own lives, we have a lot of homework and lots of work assignments and tests and we also want to play on our computer and/or watch TV.
 Doing our homework and projects without delay really works for us.
 Life made us understand that school comes before other activities and it could change our future and even our life!
All you need to do is to focus on learning at school because it's the most important part of your life.
Hope you will learn from our advice!
And don't repeat our mistakes.]]> 2019-09-15 06:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384238765 https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384245571 Dear Tom,

we understand you and your situation and we are here for you. Staying completely without friends or a person who understands you is not easy, especially when everyone used you to copy homework. But there is a solution. The solution is that you should stop letting them copy your homework. Because then you’ll see if they really care about you or they are just using you. If they will stay loyal to you then they are not using you and they want to be your friends. We really hope that we helped, hope you’ll find some new friends too.
 
Signed Alina and Linoy. 
]]> 2019-09-15 07:59:16 UTC https://padlet.com/nlevy55/z7uf6djn8tqw/wish/384245571