https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h Made with good vibes en-us 2020-03-04 17:52:17 UTC 2020-03-07 22:37:04 UTC hello@padlet.com tohir082005 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454528546 The analogy in paragraph 3 helps you understand the conditions of people who traveled was substandard. One evidence to prove the claim is "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation". This evidence proves the claim, that the authors analogy to helps you understand the condition of the people because he compares the people to a flock of sheep and also uses the words unsanitary to express the conditions the travelers had to face. The text goes on to state " The condition on crowded ship was almost unthinkable". This evidence proves the claim that the analogy helps you understand the conditions was substandard because the authors uses the words unthinkable to show the conditions the Chinese travelers had to travel in. ]]> 2020-03-04 17:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454528546 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454529001 The analogy helps you understand the conditions people traveled in back then weren’t good nor sanitary. This is true because in the text the conditions were unsanitary with lots of people being packed up and weren’t allowed to see the deck unless Insmall groups. In the text it states “ Ocean travel in the 1850 was a hardship for anyone.” This shows that travel conditions back then wasn’t good nor sanitary . Also the analogy in paragraph three is comparing ocean travel back then in the 1850 was a hardship. This is true because in the text it states “ the poor people were herded in the hold of the ships like flock of sheep.” This shows that the analogy was comparing ocean travel back then to a hardship and weren’t sanitary. 



           The phrase “The Promise Land” shows the problems that the dust bowl caused. Also people in the area that the dust hit heavy moved or hoped that things got better, they also hoped that the dust bowl would stop causing more problems. This is true because in the text it states “ The catastrophe that deviated the Great Plains... and farming became difficult or impossible.” This shows that the dust bowl caused lots of problems which caused people to move. Also in the text it states “ they came in drowes eager to find good life and escaped them back home. Mild I’m climate and good for growing, California appeared to be “the promise land.” This shows why people was moving out to California and also why California was being called the promise land.]]> 2020-03-04 17:55:15 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454529001 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454529301 2020-03-04 17:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454529301 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454529529     The analogy in paragraph 3 shows that the conditions the people traveled in were harsh. In the text, it states, “Ocean travel in 1850 was a hardship for anyone, working-class passengers, conditions on the overcrowded ship was almost unthinkable”. This shows that the ship was overcrowded and had harsh conditions. The text also states “ The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation”. This demonstrates that the author uses the analogy “like a flock of sheep” to show how overcrowded the shippers and how unsanitary it was. So, The analogy in paragraph three demonstrates that the ship was dirty and overcrowded.]]> 2020-03-04 17:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454529529 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454530551 The image the analogy creates is that the conditions was harsh. In the text "The Trans-Pacific Passage Toward the Gold Fields" it states "The people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep." This shows that the poor people were treated very badly and they compared a flock of sheep to poor people. In the text it also states "The passenger were allowed on deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair. Otherwise, they spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of the hold." This quote indicates that the travelers spent lot of time in the darkness with no light the whole time and were treated like animals. This is the image the analogy creates is that the condition was harsh.]]> 2020-03-04 17:56:59 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454530551 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454530797 The analogy in paragraph 3 helps the reader understand the conditions people traveled in were really poor. The text states, " The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep". This evidence shows that whenever the poor people traveled they were crowded into little spaces and were treated like animals. The text also states, "They spent much of the voyage penned in utter darkness". There was no sanitation and it was always pitch black at the place they had to stay in, this supports the claim that travel conditions back in the days, especially for the poor people, were substandard.]]> 2020-03-04 17:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454530797 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454531043 The analogy in paragraph three helps the reader understand the conditions that people travelled in by using adjectives that convey a negative depiction of the journey, showing the hostility of the circumstances that had to be faced. The text says, "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation", this shows the inhospitable circumstances that the travelers experienced by comparing them to unsanitized, crowded sheep. According to the text, "the conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable", this shows that the circumstances on the ship were so harsh that one wouldn't conjure the idea of the discomfort experienced by the travelers on the ship.]]> 2020-03-04 17:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454531043 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454531553 The analogy creates an understanding of the conditions that people had to endure while traveling. In the text it states, "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation..." This quote indicates the analogy and shows the difficult conditions that people had to endure, no space or sanitation. The text goes on to say, "The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair. Otherwise, they spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of the hold." This quote demonstrates that  the voyages had bad conditions most of the time and people suffered in the dark with no space. This is how the analogy creates an understanding of the conditions that people endured during travel.]]> 2020-03-04 17:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454531553 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454531602 The analogy in paragraph three shows harsh conditions the people had to experience when traveling. In the text its states, " The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation." This evidence proves that people had to face terrible conditions such as not having personal space since they herded together like a flock of sheep. The text also states, " Ocean travel in 1850 was a hardship for anyone but for working class passengers the conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable." This quote indicates travel was hard for people since they have to be on crowded ships for a long time to get to their destinations.This is how the analogy shows harsh conditions people faced when traveling.]]> 2020-03-04 17:58:14 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454531602 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454532579 The analogy in paragraph three makes an image that people were in horrible conditions. The analogy helps the reader understand the conditions people traveled in by explaining how extreme they were. “ The poor people were here’d in the hood of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation”. This explains that that the conditions were extreme by showing how they were hered together. “]]> 2020-03-04 17:59:18 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454532579 shirleyosorio627 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454533574 The analogy in paragraph 3 that helps readers understand the conditions the passengers traveled in were Harsh. According to the text it states, “The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation...” This evidence shows how the people were like animals, all crowded up together. The text continues to state, “The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair. Otherwise, they spent much of the voyage in penned in the utter darkness of the hold.” This demonstrates how the people were allow to leave until the weather was okay, Which then the people had to be in really dark places. Therefore, this is the analogy in paragraph 3 which are the harsh conditions people faced while traveling. ]]> 2020-03-04 18:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454533574 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454533605 The analogy in paragraph three shows the difficult conditions people traveled.In the text it states "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep,with no sanitation...".This quote shows that the people with a low income were treated like animals they were crowed in a ship that had no sanitation and was kept unclean.In the text it states "The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups,but only when the weather was fair.Other wise,they spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of the hold'.This quote shows that the people were held in the dark and they had no source of sunlight and they couldn't leave.This is how paragraph three shows the difficult conditions. ]]> 2020-03-04 18:00:33 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454533605 svpreme_ximena13 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454535861    𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝚊𝚗𝚊𝚕𝚘𝚐𝚢 𝚛𝚎𝚙𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚎𝚍 𝚘𝚗 𝚙𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚐𝚛𝚊𝚙𝚑 3 𝚑𝚎𝚕𝚙𝚜 𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝚞𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚍𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 𝚙𝚎𝚘𝚙𝚕𝚎 𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎𝚕𝚎𝚍 𝚒𝚗 𝚠𝚑𝚒𝚌𝚑 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚒𝚗 𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚢 𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚜𝚑 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚙𝚘𝚘𝚛 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚍𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜, 𝚠𝚑𝚒𝚌𝚑 𝚒𝚜 𝚎𝚡𝚙𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚍 𝚋𝚢 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚙𝚑𝚛𝚊𝚜𝚎𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝚝𝚎𝚡𝚝 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚝𝚎𝚜, “𝙾𝚌𝚎𝚊𝚗 𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎𝚕 𝚒𝚗 1850 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝚊 𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚍𝚜𝚑𝚒𝚙 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚊𝚗𝚢𝚘𝚗𝚎, 𝚋𝚞𝚝 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚠𝚘𝚛𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚌𝚕𝚊𝚜𝚜 𝚙𝚊𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚗𝚐𝚎𝚛𝚜, 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚍𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚊𝚕𝚖𝚘𝚜𝚝 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚔𝚊𝚋𝚕𝚎.”  𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚎𝚡𝚙𝚕𝚊𝚒𝚗𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚠𝚘𝚛𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚌𝚕𝚊𝚜𝚜 𝚒𝚝 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝚊 𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚢 𝚍𝚒𝚏𝚏𝚒𝚌𝚞𝚕𝚝 𝚜𝚒𝚝𝚞𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚒𝚗 𝚋𝚑𝚝 𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚊𝚕𝚕 𝚊𝚕𝚕 𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎𝚕𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚜𝚞𝚏𝚏𝚎𝚛𝚒𝚗𝚐. 𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝚝𝚎𝚡𝚝 𝚊𝚕𝚜𝚘 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚝𝚎𝚜, "𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝚙𝚘𝚘𝚛 𝚙𝚎𝚘𝚙𝚕𝚎 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚍𝚎𝚍 𝚒𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚑𝚘𝚕𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚑𝚒𝚙 𝚕𝚒𝚔𝚎 𝚊 𝚏𝚕𝚘𝚌𝚔 𝚘𝚏 𝚜𝚑𝚎𝚎𝚙." 𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚍𝚎𝚖𝚘𝚗𝚜𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚝𝚎𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚍𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚠𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚒𝚗 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚙𝚊𝚛𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚖 𝚝𝚘 𝚊 𝚏𝚕𝚘𝚌𝚔 𝚘𝚏 𝚜𝚑𝚎𝚎𝚙.  𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚎𝚡𝚙𝚕𝚊𝚒𝚗𝚜 𝚑𝚘𝚠 𝚙𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚐𝚛𝚊𝚙𝚑 3 𝚑𝚎𝚕𝚙𝚜 𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝚞𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚙𝚘𝚘𝚛 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚜𝚑 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚍𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 𝚙𝚎𝚘𝚙𝚕𝚎 𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚟𝚎𝚕𝚎𝚍 𝚒𝚗. ]]> 2020-03-04 18:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454535861 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454536520 The analogy shows the readers that the people that traveled across the ocean in that unsanitary ship , supports the authors tone of disgust. The text states "the conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable." the reader can almost feel the authors disgust when he says "unthinkable" this shows how the ship must have been nasty or even mucky. The text also states "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation" This shows how the ship's crew did not care for the people and just crowded them on they did not even care about their cleanliness which is why the authors tone was disgust.The analogy shows the readers that the people that had traveled across the ocean in that unsanitary and  foul ship shows how the people were treated unfairly and harsh. It supports the authors tone of disgust.]]> 2020-03-04 18:04:10 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454536520 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454538043 The analogy in paragraph 3 creates a image that the people were in bad conditions and that it was very unsanitary. The text says "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep." This shows how they had to be on top of each other and have no space. The text also says "with no sanitation." This shows the horrible they were in because there were so many people and there was no bathroom to use. This is how the analogy in paragraph 3 helps understand the conditions the people traveled in.]]> 2020-03-04 18:06:08 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454538043 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454539334 The analogy in paragraph 3 shows the inferior conditions that people traveled in. This is shown when the text states, "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation..." This quote demonstrates how people are being  compared to animals. This explains that the conditions are harsh since people were herded with no sanitation. The text goes on to say, "The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair. Otherwise, they spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of the hold." This quote explains that the travelers were not allowed out and were usually in dark spaces. This again shows how the travelers were treated like animals, and had to deal with inferior conditions. In conclusion, the analogy  in paragraph 3 demonstrates the  inferior conditions that travelers had to travel in.]]> 2020-03-04 18:07:44 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454539334 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454550273 The analogy in paragraph three shows that the conditions that the people traveled in was harsh. The text states, “The poor people were herded in the gold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation...” This shows that the conditions were harsh because there was no sanitation and the people were being treated like sheep and being herded. The text also states, “...they spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of the gold.” This shows that the gold was dark and they couldn’t see anything. So,m, analogy shows that the conditions were very harsh ]]> 2020-03-04 18:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454550273 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454556147 The analogy in the third paragraph shows the conditions the passengers traveled in was harsh. In the text it states “ the poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep”. This shows that the people were poorly taken care of and treated like animals as shown in the analogy. In the text it  also states “ they spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of the hold.” This shows that the poor people were forced into cramped an uninhabitable space with no food or water and in the dark. This is how the analogy in the third paragraph proves that the poor people conditions was harsh.]]> 2020-03-04 18:27:28 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454556147 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454565332 The author usage of the phrase "the Promised Land" to describe the appearance of California from the perspective of the Dust Bowl migrants reveals that the migrants feel as if that California is the place of rest and plentitude that they had all hoped for and heard of, dreamed about, or had before poverty struck. According to the text, "They came in droves, eager to find the good life that had escaped from them back home", this shows that the migrants were expecting California to be simple, laid back, and much better then the life that they were experiencing now. The text states, "Those who found work were often disappointed: workers were offered flimsy shacks to rent, which the paid for out of their low wages. In addition, local people did not always welcome the newcomers, and sometimes violence erupted." This shows that the migrants were dissapoimted in what they basically expected to be their salvation, California, and that the flawed California was very much unlike what the migrants had hoped for.

]]> 2020-03-04 18:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454565332 https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454587052 The analogy helps the reader understand the conditions people traveled in by referencing a ship that wasn’t clean holding a flock of sheep. This can be shown when the text states “The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation. . . .”. This shows the horrible situation these people had to deal with by emphasizing that they were packed in like a flock of sheep. This could be compared to “but for working-class passengers, the conditions on a crowded ship were unthinkable”. This shows how the conditions were unbelievable yet true, that people had to sit on a crowded ship. This is  how the author uses an analogy to emphasize on the point of how bad the conditions were on the ship.]]> 2020-03-04 19:01:03 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/z5h5y0owpx9h/wish/454587052