Your story seems to hv some interesting potential however you need to know your characters spines in order to further develop their characters and the narrative fr beginning until the end.

Kindly make arrangements to meet me on Wednesday to discuss your script. I am free during lunch time, and 2-3pm. Let me know if you and team can come for discussion in my office. Thank you.

The premise of this story is betrayal driven by desperation. Alex is drugged by his friend, Jason and taken to an abandoned house. Jason reveals he made a deal with demons and needs to sacrifice someone close to him. Despite a brief escape attempt, Alex is overpowered by demonic forces and meets a gruesome fate. Jason, filled with regret, watches as the demons claim his friend.

Genre- Horror, Thriller

Synopsis:

A casual dinner between friends becomes dark when Alex is drugged by his friend Jason. Jason, desperate after a deal with demons, takes Alex to an abandoned house for a horrific sacrifice. Alex fights for his life, but the demonic forces overpower him. As Alex meets painful end, Jason is left grappling with the weight of his betrayal and the true cost of his deal,