Grade 3 English Students' Work Moderation by Nadia Hussain https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89 Moderating student work samples en-us 2022-01-13 11:55:50 UTC 2025-09-30 11:13:58 UTC hello@padlet.com Rubric Sept 2022 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479168 2022-09-18 10:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479168 SA+ Sept 2022 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479322 2022-09-18 10:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479322 SA Page 1 Sept 2022 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479470 2022-09-18 10:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479470 SA Page 2 Sept 2022 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479580 2022-09-18 10:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301479580 EA 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301480095 2022-09-18 10:23:06 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301480095 IEP (BA) Sept 2022 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301483900 2022-09-18 10:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301483900 BA+ Sept 2022 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301485509 2022-09-18 10:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301485509 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301486671 مستوى الكتابة متوسط SA:
لم يستخدم الطالب مفردات متنوعة ، ولم يستخدم أدوات ربط أو حروف جر . ]]> 2022-09-18 10:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301486671 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301487151 مستوى الكتابة مرتفع PA]]> 2022-09-18 10:37:53 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301487151 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301487407 مستوى الكتابة BA ]]> 2022-09-18 10:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301487407 BA Sept 2022 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301487491 2022-09-18 10:38:39 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2301487491 EA/PA page 1, Feb 2023 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490648597 2023-02-22 05:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490648597 EA/PA page 2, Feb 2023 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490652585 Evidence of progression of ideas, started to include transition words. Started to use appropriate punctuation- this is an area that could be developed (missing speech marks).
Included a range of vocabulary related to the subject with correct spelling.]]> 2023-02-22 05:08:25 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490652585 DA Feb 2023 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490724968 No transitions, some punctuation (full stops used occasionally), attempted to spell some words phonetically, very limited vocab (mainly named things from the photo). ]]> 2023-02-22 06:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490724968 English - SA https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490729294 An attempt at organisation is evident but not necessarily chronological. Grade appropriate punctuation is used with attempts at ambitious punctuation with varying levels of success. Most words are spelled correct more in line with EA. The student uses general language with more ambitious language avoided. Inventive/ creative verbs/ adjectives were generally absent. ]]> 2023-02-22 06:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2490729294 English BA - June Page 2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617033031 2023-06-07 11:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617033031 English BA - June Page 1 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617034034 2023-06-07 11:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617034034 SA - June 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617043152 2023-06-07 11:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617043152 PA - June Page 1 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617045829 2023-06-07 11:49:08 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617045829 PA June Page 2 2ka257 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617046313 2023-06-07 11:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2617046313 Nov - BA rubric https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777867286 2023-11-06 11:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777867286 EA with elements of PA part 1 NOV 23 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777868989 2023-11-06 11:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777868989 EA with elements of PA PART 2 NOV 23 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777869560 2023-11-06 11:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777869560 Nov BA - Sample https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777869581 Ideas were there, but lacked the details and word choice to take it to the next level.

]]> 2023-11-06 11:55:26 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777869581 EA with elements of PA PART 3 NOV 23 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777870063 2023-11-06 11:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777870063 EA with elements of PA rubric NOV 23 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777870473 2023-11-06 11:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2777870473 SA with elements of EA part 1 NOV 23 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2787102148 Compared to the rest of her classmates, she seemed like an EA student for writing. But during the moderation and the whole grade was involved, I realized that the student should have gotten an SA instead.

]]> 2023-11-13 09:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2787102148 SA with elements of EA part 2 NOV 23 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2787104301 2023-11-13 10:01:28 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2787104301 Ea with Elements of PA - March 2024 - Page 1 harryjackwhite1994 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904343874 2024-03-04 11:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904343874 EA with Elements of PA - March 2024 - Page 2 harryjackwhite1994 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904345654 2024-03-04 11:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904345654 EA page 1 March 2024 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904347309 2024-03-04 11:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904347309 SA with elements of EA - March 2024 - Page 1 harryjackwhite1994 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904349009 2024-03-04 11:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904349009 EA page 2 March 2024 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904349582 2024-03-04 11:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904349582 SA with elements of EA - March 2024 - Page 1 harryjackwhite1994 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904349712 2024-03-04 11:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904349712 SA - March 2024 - Page 1 harryjackwhite1994 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904353436 2024-03-04 11:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904353436 SA - March 2024 - Page 24 harryjackwhite1994 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904354089 2024-03-04 11:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904354089 BA - March - 2024 harryjackwhite1994 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904355549 2024-03-04 11:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904355549 DA https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904360347 Used the pictures to help him with adding vocabulary words to his story. ]]> 2024-03-04 11:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/2904360347 EA/PA - June 2024 - Page 1 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016429961 2024-06-03 11:51:36 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016429961 EA/ PA - June 2024 - Page 2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016431527 2024-06-03 11:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016431527 SA/ EA - June 2024 - Page 1 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016435935 2024-06-03 11:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016435935 SA / EA - June 2024 - Page 2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016436875 2024-06-03 11:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016436875 BA - June 2024 - Page 1 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016437806 2024-06-03 12:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3016437806 BA - September 2024 - Page 1 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111850545 2024-09-10 10:58:04 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111850545 BA - September 2024 - Page 2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111853524 2024-09-10 11:00:34 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111853524 BA/ SA - September 2024 - Page 1 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111854904 2024-09-10 11:01:43 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111854904 BA/ SA - September 2024 - Page 2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111855798 2024-09-10 11:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111855798 SA September 2024 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111856737 2024-09-10 11:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111856737 SA September 2024 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111858047 2024-09-10 11:04:15 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3111858047 MOY 2025 PA https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381156963 Paragraphs.

Dialogue to show emotion.

Range of punctuation.

Describes settings and characters, uses a range of vocabulary.

]]> 2025-03-25 09:45:03 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381156963 MOY 2025 SA https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381158997 Some punctuation.

More then one character.

Describes setting

Attempt at using speech

]]> 2025-03-25 09:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381158997 MOY 2025 SA PART 2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381159834 2025-03-25 09:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381159834 MOY 2025 BA https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381161761 Lists some events. Has a character and setting but does not go into detail to describe them. Some punctutation used but it is not consistent.

]]> 2025-03-25 09:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381161761 MOY 2025 BA PART 2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381162653 2025-03-25 09:49:08 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3381162653 SA- Fall 2025/26 P1 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3611121031 2025-09-30 10:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3611121031 SA- Fall 2025/26 P2 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3611121451 2025-09-30 10:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3611121451 BOY - BA - G3 25/26 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3611122761 General capitalization, no punctuation, no beginning, middle or end.

]]> 2025-09-30 10:29:06 UTC https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3611122761 BOY - EA- G3 25/26 2hb276 https://padlet.com/2jl482/z4jyns1i82qymp89/wish/3611133799 Some good transitional words, as well good ideas. We scored it as a high SA, possible EA. The piece of writing lacks punctuation and full sentence.

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