#156 by Abbey Pardue https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal You and your partner will draw conclusions about your learning in this activity by completing a "Table Top Tweet." --> MAKE a post using 280 characters or less, describe what you and your partner learned so far in Unit 4 Lesson #1. TITLE the post with your name and your partner's name (first and last). Also on your post, create or find a graphic, diagram, or image to capture the big idea. Then, summarize what you and your partner learned with a hashtag phrase. After you make your initial post, "retweet" another group's post by adding one more idea to their initial post. en-us 2018-03-14 16:41:07 UTC 2024-06-03 09:03:10 UTC hello@padlet.com Darlena and Jimmy dp432224 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243680598 This sums up the writing process in one picture #HowToNotFail:
]]> 2018-03-19 18:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243680598 Hannah Cauthen and Jessica Pena https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243680732 It's important to have a clear thesis to ensure it isn't confused or confusing. It is also crucial to have a concrete example to prove your point, without evidence, you have no point. #SupportTheThesis]]> 2018-03-19 18:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243680732 Cynthia Rodriguez and Paul nguyen https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243682899 There was a lot of sutiable information that was provided in this pacticular activity. We learned that what are the effects of having a thesis and not in the essays that were showemd. It made us think more and how the examples and thesis make up the essay.]]> 2018-03-19 18:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243682899 Brooke and Ogechi https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243684556 2018-03-19 18:18:44 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243684556 st136416 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243718618 2018-03-19 19:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243718618 Yuvista & Kirstin https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243721516 We learned how to connect the power sentence to our concrete example. We also learned that the concrete example has to refer to the thesis statement. 
]]> 2018-03-19 19:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243721516 Lily and Aman ls323382 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243722357 We learned the importance of a thesis, example, and power sentence in an expository essay. We learned that the power sentence connects the thesis with the example. ]]> 2018-03-19 19:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243722357 Isaiah and Hamilton hn311307 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243723112 Isaiah and I have learned a lot about the writing process and structure of the expository essay. We learned about how to connect the thesis and example which is the power sentence. Lastly we learned about how to rewrite the thesis statement in the conclusion. We also learned about what you need to do to get at least a 3 on your essay.]]> 2018-03-19 19:14:40 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243723112 Jason and Katherine kr435056 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243745586 we learned that the importance of thesis can really help you along the way of writing an essay. the examples and the connection with the power sentence can help with the flow of the whole essay. you need to make it enjoyable and not is icky and gross just easy and free flowing .]]> 2018-03-19 20:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243745586 Betiel and Mang https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243790129 This diagram helps us understand that we need to let out out imagination and thoughts on inventing our hooks or an introduction that can really lure the readers. As we went through the process, we had to pull out our thinking hats and explain our invention and how it affects the examples we use. We also made sure we had correct grammar because everything sounds nice when it's grammatically correct. The second draft is not necessary if we revise/edit at the same time so two in one package that can narrow down our thoughts and our essay in one. ]]> 2018-03-19 23:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/243790129 Amy and Skylar https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244051568 holy mother of g]]> 2018-03-20 14:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244051568 Mikaela Roper and Tyler Wick and Aditee Z. https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244065851 So far in this lesson I have learned that it is good to have a strong thesis with an example that connects with the prompt.  Throughout this process I have also learned how to leave out unnecessary details and how to at least score a three on the essay. 
#describetheexample]]> 2018-03-20 15:02:42 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244065851 Donetta https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244066450 Writing in complete sentences and getting the message clear is important. The structure is important for people to understand. The thesis is the thing you should state clearly ]]> 2018-03-20 15:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244066450 Jerrelle and Aman jb316641 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244067177 We learned about the writing process and how prepare for an expository essay. We also learned how to write in a recursive process.  #ISayEssayYouUnderStand

]]> 2018-03-20 15:04:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244067177 Mackenzie Howdeshell and Corrie Chan mh420078 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244068830 We have learned that, in order to get a three or a four, we need to have a thesis statement and an example that ties to it. ]]> 2018-03-20 15:06:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244068830 Jayden Solis https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244077710 Learned that in order to make a good essay, and get a good grade, i need to write in complete sentences, make sure the message is clear, have a good example, and a good thesis statement. 
#essay]]> 2018-03-20 15:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244077710 fnu kainat fk420152 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244083379 so far from this lesson i have learned that in order to get a higher rate is , to have a strong thesis  , a strong example that is actually related to the thesis, and a power sentence to tie it all up . When writing an essay you have to make sure you are specific . 

]]> 2018-03-20 15:26:59 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244083379 Taia taiaiaiaiaia https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244167196 2018-03-20 17:26:59 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244167196 Laiah Dizaiy, Jodie Nguyen jn320408 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244169457 We learned that you need to have evidence to back up your example and thesis or else it won't count as a point.  We also learned that we dont need extra information to have a better grade.
]]> 2018-03-20 17:30:24 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244169457 Jumana Kailani and Itzel Villegas https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244169886 We learned that in order for us to write a good essay we need to have a strong thesis statement, a concrete example, and a power sentence. 
]]> 2018-03-20 17:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244169886 Erada Zeynu and Claire Tran https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244170261 So far in this lesson, we learned that in order to get a good score for your essay, you need to follow the writing process, especially revising and editing.

]]> 2018-03-20 17:31:34 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244170261 George Nguyen https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244173193 I learned that in order to get a good score on your essay you first need a strong thesis, so that you can have a good example to match up with it.]]> 2018-03-20 17:35:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244173193 sidney and dylann https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244176256 We learned that within a good essay, you must have a solid thesis statement, a concrete example and a power sentence. 

]]> 2018-03-20 17:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244176256 frances muchnick and alyssa alvarez aa371390 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244195458 To get a 3 on the essay you need a concrete example, thesis statement, and a power sentence. ]]> 2018-03-20 18:10:48 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244195458 Arath Huerta Y Maria https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244209991 2018-03-20 18:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244209991 Andre and Jonathan https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244214068 We learned about how to write a good essay and in order to get a 3 you need a good example, a good thesis, and a good power sentence]]> 2018-03-20 18:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244214068 David Gonzalez https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244221094 i learned to be able to get a 3 you should have a good thesis and a concrete example]]> 2018-03-20 18:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244221094 Tray VanDyck https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244223490 2018-03-20 18:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244223490 Aya & Maria https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244235216 We learned that to get a  good score on your essay it is important to have a solid and clear thesis statement,  a concrete example and a strong power sentence]]> 2018-03-20 19:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244235216 Maria Ponciano mp418346 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244235603 We learned that in order to have a good score on your essay you must have a solid thesis and a solid example.]]> 2018-03-20 19:17:52 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244235603 Khang kt311787 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244240285 I learned about a strong thesis and how it can allow you to pass the test. A strong example is also necessary.
]]> 2018-03-20 19:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244240285 Sydney sv320492 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244242628 I learned that having and strong thesis and example is important to getting a good score on your essay.]]> 2018-03-20 19:33:33 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244242628 Kha Nguyen https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244244824 You need a strong thesis and an example that connects to the thesis and end the essay with a setence that rephrase the thesis to close up the essay.
#followthesteps

]]> 2018-03-20 19:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244244824 Ixchel Perez & Sindy Trujillo https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244245434 We learned how to score a 3 when writing an essay and how its important to have a clear statement , and an example that goes with the essay and a thesis statement ]]> 2018-03-20 19:40:19 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244245434 Naomi Olmos https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244246080 i learned that to be able to have a 3 or a 4 you must have a clear thesis and example.]]> 2018-03-20 19:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244246080 Tri Nguyen https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244246499 After successfully overcame and conquered from the very beginning of the activity to this point,  I have comprehend something that i never known before and may have never been known to me if it wasn’t for  the specified websites that you and others English teacher created solely for us students. In order to get a passing grade which a score of 4 in the essay, there are 3 indispensable things that you must always have: a strong and clear thesis statement that state clearly your opinion ( answer) to the question that is asked through the prompt; a specific and not hypothetical example to best illustrates the prompt,  a power sentence, a sentence that have the capability to tie and connect the specific example that given  to the thesis statements; and finally the conclusion that summarize the thesis explaining why your thesis is crucial 
   To summarize you need to have a strong thesis statements, specific example, power sentence and conclusion  

]]> 2018-03-20 19:43:11 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244246499 Julia Nguyen jn311308 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244251782 I've learned about the characteristics of writing a proper essay. Such as, thesis, power sentence, leading example and so on. I also learned that it's important to make sure everything connects back to the main point. #youliveandyoulearn ]]> 2018-03-20 19:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244251782 Ashley Hernandez and Casey https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244253172 with out a strong thesis the essay is weak #BESTRONGboutyourthesisStatement]]> 2018-03-20 19:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244253172 Steven Mayogi https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244253465 I learned more about the characteristics of writing and learned the comparison of a good essay from the bad one #ExpositryEssay]]> 2018-03-20 20:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244253465 Laila Mireles/ Sarah Harrington lm322498 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244266561 We learned that in order to get a 3-4 we need to have a hook, clear thesis, an example that makes sense and connects with the thesis, and a power sentence is important as well as the conclusion.]]> 2018-03-20 20:31:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244266561 Thomas Mooneyhan https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244269096 What I have taken in from this fourth unit and few lessons is the importance of the basics of what makes up an expository essay, and how to successfully write one with ease!]]> 2018-03-20 20:36:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244269096 sarah Harrington https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244273329 I u]]> 2018-03-20 20:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244273329 sam sc320888 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244273332 i learned that in order to get a good score you need a strong thesis and supporting example. #mypartnerissicktoday ]]> 2018-03-20 20:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244273332 Kevin Hua/ Peter Phan kh311587 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244275641 #strongthesis]]> 2018-03-20 20:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244275641 Cameron Esh ce320889 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244278006 2018-03-20 20:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244278006 Michele Medina mm312502 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244278649 I learned that to be successful when writing you need the key concepts of writing a good thesis, power sentence and contain an example that goes with your topic.]]> 2018-03-20 20:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244278649 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244279244 I leanred that a good thesis means a good power sentence.#poweriskey]]> 2018-03-20 20:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244279244 ii342798 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244279390 With the info given ]]> 2018-03-20 20:57:53 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244279390 cg311326 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244279927 I've learned about how to write a essay with a stronger thesis, example, and power sentence. I also learned on what can make me receive a score lower than a 3. #strongertheisis]]> 2018-03-20 20:59:54 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244279927 Alacya Bryant Amaria Atkins-Dixon https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244280481 We learned that you should have a strong thesis And you should always have a strong supporting example #Supportingexample]]> 2018-03-20 21:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244280481 MIGUEL Q. https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244348384 A weak essay leads to a scholarship to McDonalds. Also add a strong example and a power sentence. #strongerthesis]]> 2018-03-21 03:08:37 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244348384 bf312597 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244358671 I have learned what a strong and clear power sentence looks like. #writinggoals]]> 2018-03-21 04:14:43 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244358671 I learned that essays need a thesis or your story will have points taken off from it and you always have your example tha matches to the thesis and that the example is good.t kw322900 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244361967 2018-03-21 04:38:24 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244361967 Amy and Skylar https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244533796 We learned that  essays need thesis to catch the readers attention. It also needs an example that goes with the thesis so it proves a point about your opinion

]]> 2018-03-21 14:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244533796 Jaida Fesser jf319699 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244540307 I learned how to write a perfect essay and have a strong thesis, power sentence, and example.]]> 2018-03-21 14:21:04 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244540307 Jordie and Cristal cn412063 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244540455 We learned how to write a perfect essay]]> 2018-03-21 14:21:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244540455 Thomas and bradely the goat https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244545301 learned how to write the (perfect) essay...
]]> 2018-03-21 14:29:07 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244545301 Jose https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244550595 How to write a essay and what we should use to write it good]]> 2018-03-21 14:38:08 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244550595 Brionna https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244566151 I learned that a essay has to be written
 based off the thesis and the examples also have to somewhat connect.]]> 2018-03-21 15:01:50 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244566151 Tomas https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244577661 I learned what a essay is supposed to include 

]]> 2018-03-21 15:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244577661 i learned that essay needs a good example that supports your thesis and the power setnece needs to support your example https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244579841
Sajjad Zainy 

]]> 2018-03-21 15:21:25 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244579841 Kemyiah James Donetta Beasley https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244584620 we learned how to write with everything making senc=se and connect with being explained very well.
]]> 2018-03-21 15:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244584620 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244593725 2018-03-21 15:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244593725 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244594125 2018-03-21 15:43:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244594125 Tulsa https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244595276 2018-03-21 15:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244595276 tulsa https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244595864 2018-03-21 15:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244595864 i learned what a essay is supposed to include https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244596029 2018-03-21 15:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244596029 Emily Navarro, an Angelina Vazquez https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244711779 What we learned in throughout this lesson is how to write a proper essay and how to tell proper nouns apart from regular nouns. How to tell a good essay from a bad essay. How to make a good thesis statement. So now we will succeed in writing our essays.]]> 2018-03-21 18:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244711779 i learned that the essay needs an example https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244712695 asif]]> 2018-03-21 19:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244712695 john candela and Daniel martinez https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244731012 we learned how to write a proper essay with no mistakes and what proper nouns to use in the essay]]> 2018-03-21 19:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244731012 Victor vt416943 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244736699 we learned how to write with everything making senc=se and connect with being explained very well.

]]> 2018-03-21 19:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244736699 Felipe Lara P. https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244740668 I learned how to score and revise other people's essays and also, I learned that it is important to write a clear thesis statement, example and power sentence in order for the reader to understand my essay better. In addition, I learned that even the smallest details matter when it comes to writing an essay.]]> 2018-03-21 20:00:54 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244740668 Daniel Martinez and Alejandro https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244740770 2018-03-21 20:01:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244740770 mike marin https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244740972


]]> 2018-03-21 20:01:59 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244740972 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244743037 i learned how to read an essay correctly and score it ]]> 2018-03-21 20:07:52 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244743037 Adileni pinal https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244796693 I learned how to score a essay correctly and to change it to a three if it was below that. Also i learned how to fix or write a better power sentence, thesis and give better examples. ]]> 2018-03-22 00:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244796693 Yenisley Deffer https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244798966 In this lesson i learned how to write an essay correctly and how to read and score one.]]> 2018-03-22 00:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244798966 Evelyn & Elvia https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244810706 This diagram helps us understand that we need to let out out imagination and thoughts on inventing our hooks or an introduction that can really lure the readers. As we went through the process, we had to pull out our thinking hats and explain our invention and how it affects the examples we use. We also made sure we had correct grammar because everything sounds nice when it's grammatically correct. ]]> 2018-03-22 01:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/244810706 Desmond & Xaiveran https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245015169 I learned how to properly use thesis statement and how it goes in our writing.I learned how to become a better writer automatic 3s.]]> 2018-03-22 14:27:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245015169 Cody Phan https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245017659 So far in Unit 4 I've learned to think more critically and analyze more closely especially when it come to writing for instance checking word flow, and checking if a perseverance and example leave enough of an impact on a reader.
#analyze #re-read ]]> 2018-03-22 14:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245017659 Roberto rg311580 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245017955 I learned how to make a good essay and how to score one ]]> 2018-03-22 14:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245017955 Alyssa and Brian https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245051870 to analyze our texts and re read over our writing to check over our stuff ]]> 2018-03-22 15:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245051870 Alexis Brown https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245229039 I learned how to make a great essay from the diagram, it helped me understand what to do and how to read and score correctly ]]> 2018-03-22 20:03:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245229039 Samuel Murengezi https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245310712 i learned how to make a strong thesis and how to not make mistakes ]]> 2018-03-23 03:02:44 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/245310712 kaiya https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/247099468 i learned what a strong thesis statement looks like and what a weak thesis statement looks like.]]> 2018-03-28 23:11:08 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/247099468 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/247099758 2018-03-28 23:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/247099758 Aalayah Denby-Sims https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/247952581 2018-04-02 23:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/247952581 jv416237 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/248276128 I learned that you have to take your time to plan your essay's out to get a higher grade.

]]> 2018-04-03 19:20:21 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/248276128 Delina Tewolde dt312410 https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/252345704 i learned the difference between a weak thesis and a strong thesis and better ways to earn a higher grade on your essay ]]> 2018-04-16 20:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aggillespie/z3qfxf8y5tal/wish/252345704