https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh Hello, Welcome to my padlet .Please leave a comment that is positive and helpful. en-us 2018-02-01 14:15:43 UTC 2018-03-28 13:29:03 UTC hello@padlet.com 23zgray https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/237378469 star 1: I liked the elements of suspense                                                         
star 2: I like how you gave it  almost supernatural like vibes
wish: maybe you can make it not as creepy and horror like.]]> 2018-03-02 13:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/237378469 23vbooth https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/237395277 Hello, Amaya its Veronica. B. first I would like to start off by say that I love the way that you have your sentences planed out for example the structure of them and the engaging hook pull me in, with ease. For how good you story is i wish that you could have use a little better word choice to make you writing piece that much better and more  professional, but over all I really enjoyed reading you piece! ;) ]]> 2018-03-02 14:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/237395277 23dmahr https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/237429671 I was reading over your vignette, and I really liked how you gave detail on how you feel and how you get out of school and how there are so many people in the hallways, But you could have looked over it once more because I saw that their was a couple of errors.]]> 2018-03-02 15:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/237429671 23vbooth https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/246880782 Hi Amaya, its Veronica 
I want to start off by say that you writing piece was great I really like how you put it all together was great and I think that all was said nicely and had a good flow, if there is one thing that i have to pick about s the word choice you are a great writer and you could be Little better with just a little bu better word choice, overall you piece was great and fun, keep up the work!]]> 2018-03-28 13:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/23amiller/z34d60dyglxh/wish/246880782