https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest Write down 3 things that you noticed that made this 5th-grade student's speech engaging and interesting, two things you learned from his speech, and one way that you think you could make your own speech better. en-us 2017-03-28 12:21:31 UTC 2017-03-28 17:56:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163143861 3- He is talking like he's having a conversation
2- His hand gestures
1- Examples of ways to help
2- if a child faces hunger before they start school it could affect their education
1- Different ways to help with hunger
1- Ask questions in the body paragraphs ]]> 2017-03-28 14:28:32 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163143861 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144627 3 Things That Made it Interesting 
  1 - He's speaking very enthusiastically
 2 - He used questions to power his body paragraphs   3 - His facts are intriguing 
2 Things Learned 
  1 - If a young child is facing hunger before they start school, it effects their later education 
  2 - 16 million children are facing hunger in 
America 
1 Thing to Make my speech Better
- Power body paragraphs with questions.]]> 2017-03-28 14:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144627 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144779 1- He is talking like he was ready and not scared to talk in front of people
2- He knows what he is talking about and stays on subject
3- he had good eye contact]]> 2017-03-28 14:30:51 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144779 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144781 3// He seems passionate,hes using his hands, he knows the speech
2// questions to power body sentences,
1//]]> 2017-03-28 14:30:52 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144781 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144843 3  things that made it interesting-
1- his hand gestures 
2- good eye contact 
3- Good examples 
2 things I learned
1- Hunger affects school 
2- millions of homes are facing hunger 
I could have good examples in my sp

]]> 2017-03-28 14:31:03 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144843 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144931 1- he mentions gives his opinion but also the statistics d how many were kids our age 
2- he   gives his opinion but also the statistics 
3- he made hand motions 
 
1- a great percentage of the hunger i iwth children
2- our economy is changing but hunger is not shrinking 

]]> 2017-03-28 14:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144931 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144999 1. He is talking about MCdonalds and that pretty funny but sad at the same time
2. I like how he used the ststistics]]> 2017-03-28 14:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163144999 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145084 3- Hand gestures
2- He talked like hes in conversation
1- He's speaking confidently

2- 32% of people facing hunger are kids
1- !0% of people facing hunger are elderly

1- Staying on task]]> 2017-03-28 14:31:45 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145084 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145085 3
he is using a powerful  voice
he is using hand gestures
he is also using great examples
2
i learned that there is a great program like meals on wheels to power and destroy hunger
the hand gestures give power to your speech
1
i think i can be more open and fun when i present my speech, it will be more effective]]> 2017-03-28 14:31:45 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145085 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145142 1. the 5th grader did not look at his paper at all
2. he uses questions in the middle
3. that he used examples
1. i could learn how not to look at the paper
do it the way he did with the questions]]> 2017-03-28 14:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145142 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145197 - Examples he used
- hand gestures 
- eye contact 
2 
-- if a child goes hungry before school it can effect their education
-  over millions of kids face hunger 
1 
-not to ask questions when writing a speech. ]]> 2017-03-28 14:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145197 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145269 He used questions 
he put statistics ]]> 2017-03-28 14:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145269 kobethongdee03 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145413 Using questions
Hand movements
voice ]]> 2017-03-28 14:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145413 heather567823 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145441 1. His voice was powerful and strong.
2. He talked about facts that were true and gave us information we didn't even know were true.
3. His hand gestures.

I learned that hunger in american is real and it affects many people.
I learned that kids don't pay attention well in school when they haven't had their breakfast.

I believe adding in facts into my speech will make it better.

]]> 2017-03-28 14:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145441 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145443 1.) he uses a lot of examples
2.) he uses a lot of hand gestures 
3.) he used facts and made us think 
 i learned how many people suffer from hunger and what we could do 

1.) maybe he can slow down a bit and he kind of repeated the same things ]]> 2017-03-28 14:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145443 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145483 3. 
- He was talking as if he is having a conversation
-He asked a lot of questions
-He used ]]> 2017-03-28 14:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145483 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145487 1) He talks about his own experiences
2)He spoke confidentially
3) he built his  

]]> 2017-03-28 14:33:10 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145487 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145508 1- I could make my own speech better by staying on task
2- I learned to use hand gestures and speak clearly ]]> 2017-03-28 14:33:13 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145508 IsaiahSasser https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145643 3)a. He used hand gestures
b.he had a clear voice
c. he did not answer his own questions
2)a.6.5% of Americans face hunger
b.35% are children
1) Add facts]]> 2017-03-28 14:33:40 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145643 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145738 1a- His powerful voice
  b- Expression behind his words
  c- his movement
2a- 40% of food in America is wasted
  b- 16 million kids are not provided food
3- I could read with more expression and not always look at my paper]]> 2017-03-28 14:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145738 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145802 1. His hand gestures
2. How he speaks so strongly and talks about all the problems with hunger
3. How he used his hook by using statistics.]]> 2017-03-28 14:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145802 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145825 3
- His hand gestures
- His clear speech
- His large vocabulary.
2
- Hunger in America is caused by
- We can easily help those in need
1
- Use questions to push my speech on]]> 2017-03-28 14:34:21 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163145825 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163146062 he talks with flavor, he uses hand gestures, and his hook is very engaging]]> 2017-03-28 14:35:03 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163146062 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163146439 He included statistics
He asked questions
He mentioned a service that helps 
That there is a program to help seniors 
Millions of seniors are hungry everyday 
Asking questions and including people ]]> 2017-03-28 14:35:51 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163146439 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163169013 3 
- I noticed he asked questions 
- He said statistics 
-  He included his own stories 
2
- I learned how much food is wasted in America 
- I learned people of all ages are starving 
1
- I could make my speech better by adding my own story ]]> 2017-03-28 15:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163169013 arianafarias2003 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211261 3.
- he didn't answer his questions 
-didn't stutter 
-included facts
2.
-over 16 million kids were hungry in 2014
-facing hunger as a child can affect how they learn 
1.
-i could ask questions but not answer them to push my speech on]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211261 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211272 3 ASKED QUESTIONS uses hand gestures uses statistics 



2 that lots were kids no lunch



1 i can add more big words]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211272 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211281 3- 
He used hand gestures
He asks questions
Doesn't answer his questions
2- Not all kids get food 3 times a day like we do
40% of food isn't eaten
1- I could add questions in my story and not answer it when i say my next paragraph]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211281 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211352 3- 
He used big word
Facts
Correct numbers
2-
How much food is waste 
How much people live hunger
1-
i could use facts]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211352 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211373 3- Hand gestures, speaking clearly, has facts and statistics
2-hunger is all around america.
1- Use questions to push dialog forward without answering them.]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211373 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211408 3
- He looks dedicated
- His speech is clear
- He had good vocabulary
2
- 40% of food is wasted
- Kids don't learn as well in school if there in hunger.
1
- I could use lots examples]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211408 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211451 1a- He knows the information of his speech.
b- He has a powerful voice
c- He adds in his own stories
2a-  16 million kids suffer from not having food
b- Its easy to help people in need
3a- I could make eye contact and try not to look at my paper

]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:51 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211451 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211454 3 
-He said  statistics 
-He used hand  gestures 
-He has a powerful voice 
 2 
- 40% of food in America is wasted 
-16 million kids are not provided food 
1 
-I could read with more expression ]]> 2017-03-28 17:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211454 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211504 >
>
>]]> 2017-03-28 17:33:01 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211504 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211508 3
-hand motions 
-his voice
-great examples
2
-16,000,000 kids starve in america
-40% of food is wasted
1
-used question to push his dialogue along]]> 2017-03-28 17:33:02 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211508 danielleshepherd2003 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211515 3:
-Hand gestures
-uses facts in his speech
-eye contact
2:
-lots of food is wasted in America 
-16 million kids are starving
1:
-i could use things from my personal life in my speech.]]> 2017-03-28 17:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211515 zachgreene2003 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211657 3. used hands 
. talked clear
. paused to give his speech more of an meaning 
2. 49 million people faced hungry 
. 40 percent of america are wasting  
1. To relate to others ]]> 2017-03-28 17:33:32 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211657 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211720 3- He used big words 
- Correct numbers
-Used facts
2- about 16 million kids are not fortunate enough to have food
- Americans waste a lot of food
3 - use questions to drive dialogue forward. ]]> 2017-03-28 17:33:43 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211720 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211724 3. a: he used a lot of body moment. b:he used facts. c: he spoke confidently. 
2.a:49 million children are hungry in america. b:people wast a lot of food. 
3. use interesting facts ]]> 2017-03-28 17:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211724 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211749 1- He has knowledge in what he is talking about
2- 16,000,000 kids starve from hunger
3- Americans waste alot of food]]> 2017-03-28 17:33:49 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211749 elijahlomax54 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211940 2.
1.

]]> 2017-03-28 17:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163211940 olendimorales98 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163212669 3.using hand motions
speaks clearly 
stays with the same topic
2.16 million kids dont get food
many people cant afford to even go to McDonalds
1.i could use better punctuation]]> 2017-03-28 17:36:49 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163212669 https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163213610 3- used hands
 - used big words
-used a question but didnt answer his own 
2. some people think there is not hungry in the world when there is
1. to relate to others ]]> 2017-03-28 17:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/brittney_stone/speechcontest/wish/163213610